hehehehe very creative! I love it! It's really really cool and well written and just great! I'm gonna go see if you have any more poems, and if you don't, then go write some!!!!!!!!!!!! :D
Author's Response: Thank you so much!!!
HAHAHA!! so funny! I love it!!
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it. Thank you.
A cool idea for a poem :) You rhyme really well, and the 3rd person works really well here. Well done!
Author's Response: Thanks a ton!!! I'm glad you like the 3rd person view.