Wow! A nice story ou've got here, Gina!

Dumbledore versus Grindelwald was quick and fast-paced. The suicide was reall dramatic - in fact, I'd almost forgotten about the warning before I came to that part! Interesting allusions to Hitler, by the way.

The light-hearted parts with Nicolas Flamel were amusing. I have this 'serious' vision of Flamel in my head; your jovial version was a bit of a surprise for me. The transition was a little fast-paced, but still good.

Good luck in the challenge!

~MIni.

Author's Response: Hi Mini! Thanks so much for reading this story, and for the lovely review! I don't know why I pictured Flamel as more jovial and lighthearted, I guess that is just how he introduced himself. I also wanted to contrast him with Grindelwald. I could see why the transition between the two seems rushed. I definetely wanted to change tone, but could probably work on smoother transitions in the future. I enjoyed working on the two sides of this story, however. Thanks again for the review and good luck yourself! ~Gina :)