i luved the percy part lol hehe
Author's Response: Haha, thanks!
Oh wow I loved it! "L" and "X" were among my favorites.
"Little Wizards, come on down,
Little witches, gather ‘round.
I’ve a secret you’ll want to hear,
One that will banish all thought,
And install some fear."
That was brilliant! My eyes got wider and a wicked grin came across my face when I read that. My boyfriend got a little bit scared from my expression; anyways, great job!
Author's Response: ^-^ Your reviews always make me smile, Lena. I'm glad you like it! B for Black should be up soon, if I get teh inititive to write it. ^^
I really liked this poem. I'm not a big poetry buff - in fact, I stay away from it, if possible but your poem was rather creative. I would have never thought of using the alphabet as a poem. I like how it rhymes too. It's sort of hard to rhyme some of those parts together, no?
Good work!
Happy Holidays,
The Order of Ravenclaw House Elves
Author's Response: Yay, I was part of the project! *dances* Thanks for your review, and I'm glad you liked it.
That is so good! Awfully funny! *10*
Author's Response: Thank you very much for the good review! Glad you liked it!
very cute and funny
Author's Response: Thank you very much for the good review! Glad you liked it!
are you sure the last word isn't conscience?
Author's Response: I can't spell, and my spell check didn't pick it up, so it should be. *confused look* Thanks for pointing that out, mock_turtle.
*giggles* That was great! And I'm glad I could help you with it. *Turnip love*
Author's Response: Thanks, Chris. Be sure to tune in for the next few one-shots, I'm typing them as we speak.
That was quite enjoyable! But are you aware you missed the letter H?
Author's Response: I did? craptastic...thanks for pointing that out, mugglegurl, and thanks for the review!
I love the way that you've used the alphabet!! Yay!! Some of them were really funny..*sniggers about traitors, jokes and dead Voldemorts...*
Just a couple of things...
For the first two lines, I don't know if you've intentionally capitalised Wizards but not witches. I think decapitalising both may work better.
A products the Twins are proud of. Should probably be "product".
Also, I'm not very sure what the last line means...do you mean 'conscience?'
Overall, a really good poem!
Author's Response: Ok, thanks for the review! Yeha, taht thing that tells you to right what you did wrong...yeah. ^^
