Reviewer: HermioneJean1
Date: 08/07/13 7:09
Chapter: Chapter One and Only!

Draco was cute... Pity he grew up as a Malfoy. This is great! Keep writing! 😊

Reviewer: Hermiones_Therapist
Date: 07/24/09 16:50
Chapter: Chapter One and Only!

MUAHAHAHAHA!!! Sup, Schmergo. I'm in an awesome mood right now. MY STORY GOT ACCEPTED!!!! Of course no one's READ it...oh well..

ANYWHO, this story is so AWESOME!!! It's really sweet, in a twisted creepy way. (which is a compliment.) It's the perfect way of explaining Draco's complete jerkiness.

and by the way, i never thought the girl was Hermione...

Author's Response: Oh, wow, thank you! This is lovely timing to get a review for this story, since the sixth movie just came out, with lots and lots of lovely Draco! I will read your story, but not today, since I have to go to beddy-bye! But CONGRATTTTTTULATIONS! It was forever before I got my first story accepted. >_<

Reviewer: Binka Fudge
Date: 07/18/08 15:22
Chapter: Chapter One and Only!

Just a quick note, in your response to my review you said it was nice not to be asked if the girl was Hermione, well I never thought she was because of what Narcissa said, the house they didn't go to was owned by muggle borns, not muggles, and Hermione's parents are muggles, did nobody else pick up on that or am i seeing things that arent there? Oh and while rereading, i saw something else about the Malfoy's parenting skills to dislike. Draco said that when his candy was all gone daddy would just buy him some more. I'm sure they'd hate the comparison, but this is similar to Dudley's upbringing is it not?

Author's Response: I'm so glad you picked up on that! That was what I'd intended. And yes, I intentionally had Draco say his dad would buy him more to casually show how spoiled he was. You are one observant reader!

Reviewer: Binka Fudge
Date: 07/16/08 15:55
Chapter: Chapter One and Only!

I honestly don't know how to feel after reading this. It was on the surface quite a sweet story about Narcissa Malfoy spending time with her son Draco, but once you take in the full meaning it's frightening. A parent using family time to pass on their own prejudices to their child, it makes me feel quite sick. It really makes you realise how impressionable small children are, I mean i know you get the odd one like Sirius Black for instance who decided good and bad for himself, but there are others who blindly trust that parents know best. I know we all want parents and authority figures in general to be faultless, but the truth is they're just as human as the rest of us, I think thats the scarey part. Sorry, I've gone off at a rant, but it's really a compliment to your writing that you can provoke people into thinking. Excellent job.

Author's Response: Thanks so much, Binka! And I'm so glad you took the time to write something more than, "Ooh, is the girl Hermione?" Someone asked me for a drabble about a 'very realistic Draco' when I was doing a Hufflepuff Halloween drabble exchange, and somehow, this plot bunny just popped into my head. It was my second fic, and I still like it better than a lot of my newer ones.

Reviewer: nancypotatoes
Date: 07/03/08 19:14
Chapter: Chapter One and Only!

XD I love it very funny!

Author's Response: 0_0 Thanks! I didn't really intend it to be a funny story, but I'm glad you liked it anyway!

Reviewer: LunaWorshiper
Date: 06/15/08 20:26
Chapter: Chapter One and Only!

Aww. This was a very good story, but it was kind of sad for me. I feel bad for the little girl at the end. Is there any way that she was Hermione?

Author's Response: Thanks, I think it was kind of sad, too, but once this bunny hopeed into my head, I couldn't get it out. The girl wasn't Hermione because she had to be someone whose parents were both Muggle-born wizards... technically, I inserted my own sister into the story,but it's just a random girl.

Reviewer: x0BOO0x
Date: 06/10/08 15:40
Chapter: Chapter One and Only!

Draco is one of my favorite characters, so this was a treat for me (if you'll pardon the pun). Super-duper-double-wow-fantastic, as per usual.
~*BOO*~

Author's Response: Thanks! I can never decide whether I like Draco or not... I've decided that I think he's a great character but I don't like him as a person. This may be because I love his dad so much more or something. But I'm planning to write at least one Draco fic soon, because I've portrayed him so abominably in Dark Lord's Blog and Potter's Pentagon.

Reviewer: EmmaTwitch
Date: 05/29/08 0:13
Chapter: Chapter One and Only!

AW!! I was all content and reading your lovely story then BAM Draco goes all MudB on us!! lol, i really didn't see it coming!! Hee! Love your story.

Author's Response: Ha! Thanks so much. MudB... I'll have to remember that expression.

Reviewer: ringobeatlesfan4
Date: 05/09/08 15:40
Chapter: Chapter One and Only!

Ack! Poor random fary princess girl! Although, I did like the story... 100000000000000000000000000000000000/10. {Becca}

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I wrote this story so long ago, but I still kind of like it...

Reviewer: Kcharles
Date: 04/24/08 16:28
Chapter: Chapter One and Only!

Oh, that's so cute! Little 3 year old Draco! Would the little girl happen to be Hermione? Another one of your great stories!

Author's Response: Nope, the little girl is my little sister, inserted into the story! I'm so glad you liked it.

Reviewer: ink_daughter
Date: 04/09/08 20:59
Chapter: Chapter One and Only!

This story is so sad, but it is so true! Reading the last paragraph made me want to cry.

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad that you saw it as sad... most people just think it's cute. But I feel so terrible about little Draco, because I think he had the potential to be a much better person than he ended up being.

Reviewer: hpsupafan
Date: 03/31/08 19:11
Chapter: Chapter One and Only!

:o! Stupid Narcissa! teaching Draco all the wrong things... was that hermione? i hope not... great story though...

Author's Response: That wasn't Hermione; it was my little sister! ^_^ Narcissa is a silly, silly woman, but I guess she's just passing on what she'd learned from her own parents.

Reviewer: Athenas Quill
Date: 03/13/08 18:30
Chapter: Chapter One and Only!

Oh, the ending is so sad. This is a really great fic, and I rather like it. Good Job!

Author's Response: Thank you very, very much! Cheers!

Reviewer: Rhi for HP
Date: 02/27/08 10:45
Chapter: Chapter One and Only!

Oh wow. This was so excellent!! The last line was so shocking. !!! The Malfoys were never my favourite characters whilst I only read the books, but after being addicted to fanfiction for several months now I've grown to love to them very much; they're some of my favourite characters. This was great!!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! This is like the first review I've gotten that doesn't just say, "Was the girl Hermione?" I had a lot of fun writing this one, though.

Funny, I never cared about the Malfoys until I became familiar with Makani's beautiful Harry Potter fan art (she loves Lucius). Now, I still dislike Draco, but in a "haha, he's such a dork," kind of way. But I have learned to love Cissa and Luci, and the seventh book really cinched it for me.

Reviewer: lola_lovegood
Date: 02/25/08 14:20
Chapter: Chapter One and Only!

that little girl was hermione wasnt she?
oh my goodness i love this story draco is sssooooo cccccuuuutttteee but in an eeeeevvvviiiiiillllll way
i like evil its fun *here lola laughs evily (yes evily is a word bc i said so ha*

ttfn
XOXO
~lola~

Author's Response: Thank you! The little girl wasn't Hermione, though... she was just a random girl (technically supposed to be my little sister...)

Reviewer: Amethyst_Magic
Date: 01/25/08 19:24
Chapter: Chapter One and Only!

This is funny, cute, and sad all at the same time. I like it though. It's a great portrayal of how Draco became who he is. Good job!

Author's Response: Thank you! This was one of my earliest stories! I thought the world needed a story that showed Draco to be both cute and a total jerk.

Reviewer: dracos_star
Date: 11/26/07 9:13
Chapter: Chapter One and Only!

How delightful!

*imagnes tiny Draco* Squeee! How adorable!!

Author's Response: Hahaha, I should sell little pocket-sized Dracos. They'd be a hit. Though I don't know about 'delightful.' He was pretty horrible to that little girl.

Reviewer: jessip
Date: 11/22/07 20:53
Chapter: Chapter One and Only!

Little Draco sounds sooooo cute, (except when he calls the girl a mudblood) of course.

Author's Response: Yeah, I want one! (A Draco.... not a Mudblood...)

Reviewer: Hermione_Ginny_Ron_Harry
Date: 11/14/07 16:00
Chapter: Chapter One and Only!

awwww! thats really cute in a sad cruel sort of way! lol


Author's Response: Hehehe, exactly what I was going for!

Reviewer: 17ginny17
Date: 11/14/07 14:52
Chapter: Chapter One and Only!

Aww, this is so sad, in a way. Cute little 3-year-old Draco. Pity he had the parents he did, otherwise, who knows what would have happens?

Author's Response: Oh, thanks. Draco was so adorable... wouldn't it be cool if he was adopted at like age three and raised by the Weasleys?

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