Yay for you posting another chapter! I wish it wasn't splinched together, but I was happy to develop a blinding headache in order to read about the developing romance! ^_^
Author's Response: :D Yay for developing romances! I promise the wait won't be as long for the next chapter ;) And I fixed the splinching! Again!
I really like the way you do moody.
Author's Response: :D Thanks! I love writing Moody, he's one of my favourites.
eek! OMG, I lurve it! what was the limerick? Now I'm curious, gosh darn it! haha...Romanian cheese...
Author's Response: Teehee, the Romanian cheese line is the sort of thing I'd say to completely confuse people...I slipped it in as one of Remus' many charming little phrases, as it sounds so much better coming from him ;) Thanks for your review!
Oh, she wants him to call her Nymphadora... I now have a big stupid grin for YOU! A fair exchange.
Do I have to say that I loved it? 'Cause I did. A delightful mix of humour and budding romance *here, the reviewer realized that she sounded like a TV commercial and silently stared at the screefor a while* Um. Er. It was a good capter, okay?! *here, the reviewer is rambaling* Lots of detail. I like that about your writing.
And I think I got first reviewer, so I won't even say "took you long enough!"
*here, the reviewer turns red and runs away*
Author's Response: Lol, now your review's given me a big stupid grin! And I know, I know, it took ages, but I'm absolutely appalling with dialogue and there were tons of mistakes that needed to be ironed out...I'm working on the next chapter, hopefully that will be up here sooner! :D Thanks for your review!
wow o wow i love it! um, next time, tough, you should have them talk to each other.
Author's Response: Lol, they do talk in the next chapter (back to Tonks POV) which I'll submit after the Thanksgiving break...thanks for your review!! :D
fantastic. it's so cute, and i love the description of tonks. it's just how i picture her. but one thing, you know that leaky cauldron is in london, not hogsmeade. its the threebroomsticks there.
Author's Response: Oops *blushes* I'll have to go back and edit that, I did MEAN to put the Three Broomsticks...
I don't think you need song lyrics. I skip over them to read your words, lol. The splinching is back, but I liked this...very Sirius!
Remus sighed. “Didn’t your mother ever tell you to chew your food?”
Sirius let out a bark of laughter. “I think my mother was hoping I’d choke.:)
Author's Response: Argh, the splinching is back?! I can't be doing this right, I must be making a mistake when I format it...Thanks for your review!!
EEK!! THAT IS SOOOOOOOOOO CUTE!!!!
Author's Response: Thankyou!!! (I love making people go eek)
