when will the next chapter be up? i liked the first 3. keep up the good work
This is definitely the best Remus/Tonks fic I have ever read.
They are well characterised; it's humourous and real; the flow is good; you have awesome taste in music :D ; it's just all around a wonderful fic.
I don't know if you've given up on it since it's been a while since the last update, but I really hope that you haven't- it's so good!
Please update someday! I'm hanging by a moment waiting for the next chapter! *lame pun*
I love this fic! I'm seriously on the edge of my seat waiting for an update...Please keep up the good writing!
I really love this story, but I've been waiting a long time for the next chapter! Please update soon!
Your Moody is hilarious! I love the relationship that fanfics (yours included) have created between Moody and Tonks, kind of a curmudgeon uncle/goofy niece thing, I think it's sweet. I love the ending, what WOULD she prefer him to call her??? :)betsy
u have 2 complete the next chapter
ooo!! cant wait 4 more
you have 2 write the next chapter to this story i am hooked and need to know what happens next they are so sweet together
Author's Response: I promise I'll get the next chapter on soon - I love Remus/Tonks, and I don't want to abandon them!!
god i am addicted to this story u need to write the next chapter soon i have to know wot happens
Author's Response: Lol, thanks! I'll get the next chapter on soon, promise!!
you have to finish this story i am glued to it
Remus and Tonks are so sweet together she doesn't even mind when he calls her Nymphadora and she hates that.
plz finish it soon i am hooked
Author's Response: Thanks! I should be getting the next couple of chapters on here soon...I love Remus and Tonks, they're my favourite couple ever!! Thanks for your review!! :D
you should add more chapters to this cuz it is really good and i like it
Author's Response: I'll be adding the next chapter soon...thanks for your review, I'm glad you like it!! :D
Oh come on, i want more! this is a lovely! i can't wait for more it is so cute!!! please more!
anyway to the real review!
I love the use of song lyrics it's so good i love it! they seem to fit so well that it is a perfect marrige and i love Tonks, she so cute!!!
Post more, soon!
Author's Response: I will definitely be posting more soon...doncha just love Lupin and Tonks?!?! *swoons* So damn cute...Thanks for your review!! :D
Very good! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks! XD
it's definitly a great chapter!! will you please update soon, i can't wait for the next! :D
Author's Response: :D I just submitted Chapter 4, hope it gets through! Thanks for your review!
Beffy my dear! You didn't tell me you had written so much! It's gonna take me ages to read all of these! This is my favourite story though. So sweeeetttt.
P.S. Lupin is so gonna die in the last book!
Author's Response: Why, Ali-pali appears to have a MNFF account!! Although you are quite clearly insane for believing that JKR would ever kill off out beloved Professor Lupin, thanks for your review!!!
this is a great story! i love the way you set things up between them. keep writing!
Author's Response: Thanks!! I like your screenname by the way ;) The fourth chapter is coming soon, thanks for your review!
I simply love it. I've never read a Remus/Tonks story before, but so far so good! Update!
Author's Response: :D Thank you!! I'm very glad to provide your first Remus/Tonks fanfiction - there are lots of fantastic ones on MNFF that you should definitely read if you like the pairing!! Expect the next chapter soon!
Me again! I saw this chapter when it first came up but saved reviewing until I had time to write more than two lines.
First of all, your introductory paragraph had me laughing so hard. Itís very Tonks, with a sort of careless disorganization. This part sums it up:
Why did you say toothbrush first? Surely clothes are more important?
Surely they are, but to track her thoughts like that is veryÖadorable without any trace of sappiness. And then of course she lost her wand, and of course most readers probably knew where it was, but it was incredibly funny to watch her look. The fruit bowl was a nice touch.
And this part Ė it bears an uncanny resemblance to the way I chat with myself sometimes:
De-fruiting? Thatís not a word. Tonks tried to silence her unconscious. Yes, I know itís not a word! Jeez.
It also tells us that Tonks is keeping a running mental narrative, since she used the "de-fruiting" (unless you forgot and made her aware of the storyline), which is also something I am prone to, which is why this feels so realistic. I love it.
Tonks nodded, surreptitiously making sure she hadnít left any underwear on the bed.
The joke Lupin makes about a spell to turn someoneís organs into cheese is great. For one, itís a good joke. For another, it shows that youíve given Lupin some reality, and the sense of humour that he has to have, in a very Lupin-like way, not like Siriusís wildness. Stabilizing force of the Marauders, but still a Marauder.
Tonks sat up on the floor, staring at the sky out of the window. What would she prefer him to call her?
Cute. I find it interesting how many people allow Remus to use Tonksís first name as an endearment. Certainly use of the first name connotates intimacy.
One the whole, I think this is your best chapter so far. Itís certainly my favourite, with the highlight being the characterization. Tonks, Lupin, and Moody are all very in line with canon, and what liberties you take make perfect sense. Great job, and keep it up!
Author's Response: Thank you!! The best compliment a fanfic writer can receive is that the characters are all IN character :D And I'm glad people are liking the organ/cheese joke! I was worried maybe it wouldn't work, but it did seem the sort of low-key joke that our favourite werewolf would crack. ;) Thanks again for the brilliant review!!
bothobviously liking one another, and then. . .
well, don't just leave it there! Get you pen going!
Author's Response: *Runs off to get pen going* Thanks for your reviews!! :D
Now, you must continue, you're on a ROLL!
Author's Response: :D Yay! I'm on a roll! The next chapter is quite a bit longer, and gets into more of a plot :P