Reviews For Internal Battles
Reviewer: Ozma333
Date: 02/16/07 21:07
Chapter: Chapter 8

thanks so much for the ride! It was fantastic and definately memorable! Wonderfully done! Congrats!

Author's Response: NO...thank you! Like I said....this was all your fault! I read your story and couldn't help but see it go in a different way, but the gyst of what you started was there. YOU gave me the pictures in my head that I hd to get typed out...I just edited for content and time-alotment! :-) Good luck with your stories!

Reviewer: nalaniekeala
Date: 02/16/07 19:26
Chapter: Chapter 8

Great story! Now I'm off to go read Boundaries...

Author's Response: Yeah! I was hoping some of you would wait and read it after the ending was posted! I hope you like it. It is longer and I had a lot more working through issues to do on it than this one. Be sure to let me know what you think!

Reviewer: DarkPrincess0206
Date: 02/16/07 19:21
Chapter: Chapter 8

Loved the ending! 2 thumbs way up there.

Author's Response: Thanks! I hoped the ending wasn't to bland...but the story had to end...I am not smart enough to write book 7!

Reviewer: casiopeia
Date: 02/16/07 18:38
Chapter: Chapter 8

Very real - I loved it.

Forgive me for saying, but you might want to delete part of the summary of your follow up story, plus the thanking of betas, etc.... I think it would've been nice just to have the ending of Internal Battles sit with us happy readers. It's a lovely picture, the rain falling around them with nothing else mattering. I can imagine this and would love to read something like this in the new HP book! You never know...

Author's Response: I will eventually, but for now it is important to give credit where credit is due! My beta's deserve a HUGE credit for their assistance. They are working on the continuation...and to be selfish, I want people to read it as well.... I am glad that you liked it though!

Reviewer: YoMomma
Date: 02/15/07 11:34
Chapter: Chapter 7

how long does it poopin take for chapter 8 to come out! arigato gasaimas, siyanara, and may your grandmother boogie oogie oggie all night yo!

Author's Response: To all my readers...I am taking time to work through it with a mod to make sure that it is up to snuff. She has requested a few changes to make it the best it can. I should have time to work on it today and could possibly repost this afternoon.

Reviewer: hannahabbot2007
Date: 02/12/07 0:45
Chapter: Chapter 6

When will they kiss??? JUST KISS HER RON!

Author's Response: Patients! It will come....maybe!

Reviewer: iAMmissdelaney
Date: 02/10/07 21:49
Chapter: Chapter 7


Author's Response: You like it? I think you do! I am happy! :-) I am also tired and going to bed not, but I wanted to tell you that chapter 8 (the final one) is posted and awaiting validation so if it is approved then you will not have to wait too long to find out where they end up. Also, after you ready chapter 8, there is a sequel!

Author's Response: I am going to be NOW...not ... going to bed not. Told you I was tired!

Reviewer: iAMmissdelaney
Date: 02/10/07 20:09
Chapter: Chapter 5

Holy crap.

Author's Response: :-) It is getting better!

Reviewer: iAMmissdelaney
Date: 02/10/07 19:38
Chapter: Chapter 4


I love it.

Author's Response: Keep reading!

Reviewer: YoMomma
Date: 02/08/07 14:03
Chapter: Chapter 7

one question but when the poop is chapter 8 comin out. also how many licks does it take to get to the center of a tootsie pop?oh and i forgot YOU RAWK MY SOCKS! i tried lookin for ur story in post hogwarts yadda yadda yadda... wasnt there. whats ur sequel to what i call Big Delicous called. arigato gasaimas! siyanaro. and may ur grandmother have a happy sweet 16.

Author's Response: I am [posting chapter 8 for validation tomorrow. Battling Boundaries is the title of the sequel and if you click on my name you can see my authors page and access it from there. thank you for the ... enthuastic reviews. I am sincerly glad that you are enjoying my story.

Reviewer: Tammy18
Date: 02/08/07 4:59
Chapter: Chapter 7

pleaaassee finish! I must know your ending!

Author's Response: Friday!!! I hope to give you a pleasant weekend ready! Be sure when you are done with Internal Battles you go on to Battling is the continuation. It is still a Ron/Hermione fic, but is in the Post Hogwarts section jsut to get it up and going....and it is after they would have left Hogwarts. It is more action and adventure than this fic...but mainly still a romance fic! Enjoy!

Reviewer: YoMomma
Date: 02/06/07 22:52
Chapter: Chapter 7

its me Yo Momma . though i aint YoMomma im Yo Momma sis. My sis aint even 17 yet ): anyways your story is what i call of a story THE BIG DELICIOUS. thats a good thing my slippery little friend. i want you right now to eat a strawberry icecream with worms and say i love you in a mirrior! why you ask my slippery little friend? because me likey. dont be shy do it........good! odd you say? indeed. YOU ROCK MY SOCKS. random you say?..................... heard that a couple of times. arigato gasaimas. siyanara. and happy birthday to you.

Author's Response: ? Please leave relevant reviews only....nothing disturbing....

Reviewer: FollowtheButterflies
Date: 02/06/07 20:28
Chapter: Chapter 7

Wootness, you.
This story is amazing.
This chapter was superbly satisfying, haha.
Cant wait for the next chapterrr! :-D

Author's Response: I have never been called 'superbly satisfying'...oh you were talking about the chapter...well that's good too! Thanks! ;-)

Reviewer: Freedom Pheonix
Date: 02/06/07 18:57
Chapter: Chapter 7

Nice chapter. I've been waiting to read this. When will the next one come out?

Author's Response: is in "polishing phase" now...possibly by the end of the week! Tell a friend and enjoy!

Reviewer: Shadowgirl
Date: 02/06/07 12:40
Chapter: Chapter 7

Interesting consequences eh? I've read all your story and it's really great! Can't wait for last chapter but at same time don't want it to end!

Author's Response: PPSSSSSSSSTTTTTTT.... the sequel is posted in the Post-Hogwarts section..but if you have made it this far...I'd wait to start it!

Reviewer: Ozma333
Date: 02/05/07 22:41
Chapter: Chapter 7

ohhh! can't wait for the next one!

Author's Response: I am glad that you like started all this you know! I have a very heartfelt thanks to you planned in my A/N: in chapter 8!!!

Reviewer: YoMomma
Date: 02/05/07 22:11
Chapter: Chapter 7

HA! hermione got her freak on with ron...... scary thought. but how does she remember her dreams. I never remember my dreams! wow! um hmm... id say that hermione uhh lets just say whod would have though a teachers pet would be have premisquous dreams. when i think of ron and hermione romance i dont imagine that. ronikins wazlib and hermy-own are growing up. tsk tsk, boo hoo, woe its me!

Author's Response: I can't even fathom a responce...but if you think good students are not into getting some lovin' are seorely mistaken!

Reviewer: The Marauderettes
Date: 02/05/07 21:54
Chapter: Chapter 7

Wow.....I gotta read the sequel, it sounds awesome! You are a fantastic writer!

Keep it up!

-Hermione (aka Hannah)-

Author's Response: Thanks! I am glad you are excited for the sequel...PS Hannah is my daughters name! She is 1!

Reviewer: wishingforthehallows
Date: 02/05/07 21:06
Chapter: Chapter 7

Aawww!!! I love Ron and Hermione!! Wonderful Job! And I love the way it goes so smoothly between the POVs.
Can't wait for the last chapter!!

Author's Response: just tapping into them...not even really scratching the surface! Thanks for the compliment! I think you'll like the ending

Reviewer: inthewrongera
Date: 02/05/07 20:09
Chapter: Chapter 7

ahhh anticipating the next chapter!...i have a feeling you'll wrap it up really well.

Author's Response: I hope so!

Stay tuned after chapter 8 for the sequel...Battling Boundaries. It is posted in the Post-Hogwarts section and is the continuation on Ron and Hermione's entertaining relationship. I give a little actuiona nd mystery a try. Don't Read it if you don't want the end of this spoiled, but it is posted through chapter 5 and I hope to have 13 chapters. This stories final chapter could be posted for validation as soon as the end of the week! Keep reading and have fun!

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