Hey I've read the rest of the story, and so far I think it's pretty good if I don't say so myself!
oh, ignore the last review i forgot this was written pre DH. great story!
good chapter, and so far a gteat story. keep up the good work. my ony thing, u arent supposed to be able to conjure up food.
These daydreams are kind of annoying.
Author's Response: hmmm - might think the same of you :-)
Just so you know, the site keeps logging me out. I got through the first review but as I tried to submit my review of chapter 2, bam i had been automatically logged out. I like this story and want to give my reviews but if you don't see anymore it's because I can't. I am writing this even before I read chappie 3. Annoying to want to review and can't. Now I'll read the chapter. I hope I can post this.
Author's Response: well I am not the site master - but thanks for working so hard at reviewing. I am always curious to see how many people get it and how many hate it and how inaproperate some can be. obviously i got the note - keep reading! :-)
Nice starting chapter but a fire in the middle of a bedroom. Strange... I think things between Ron and Hermione would straighten out if they talked to each other and not to themselves.
Author's Response: strange, but popular (and it was the middle of the wall - not the room - ya know centered on the wall - and isn't that the point of why R and H didn't work sooner - communication....
i like drunk ron
Author's Response: who wouldn't! :-)
F.Y.I. Most of my 'happy pictures' lead to Ron and his chisled abs, very happy pictures!
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Great first chapter, you have me hooked!
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Great first chapter, you have me hooked!
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great.. but it felt unnecessarily long.. i skipped a lot.. but over all it is a great story.. yours Battling Jitters is the best i must say..
Author's Response: thanks! I am a talker - self editing is not my strong point! :-)
Thanks
Loved your story! It was a great read am now excited to read your other stories. Thanks again
Author's Response: you are very welcome
This was a great story. Very suspenseful and romantic :) A leettle OOC, but only because this is a side of the pair we haven't seen before! Who knows how they'd be in this kind of situation? Like I said, great story :D
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awww, sweet!!! That was really good!!!
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It's very good for an amateur writer. I'm a fab on 'Romione' so your story made me grin a lot! Good job. :)
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YAY!!!
finally!!
awesome.
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LOL... dudley so deserved that!!!
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Dudley is such a creeper!!!
But at least Ron is there to kick his but...hopefully.
And they admitted their feelings...yay!!!
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