Reviewer: Big_Kelpie
Date: 12/22/06 9:24
Chapter: Unwelcome

ok good chapter. Ginny is a little OoC, in Cos she never spoke to Harry she had a crush on him. I expect the twins not to be so nice to harry sicne he is a slitherin and beat them at quidditch last year. o i almost forgot Rookwod form last chapter was in prison, he escaped in OotP.. Happy holidays!

Author's Response: thanks!! i know, i didn't want Ginny to speak that much. she only said two things though.

well, i just thought that if Ron is friends with Harry, then the twins would think that Harry wasn't so bad. they won't really talk to him that much though.

yeah, i know!! i'm an idiot!! i completely forgot that Rookwood was in prison!! ahh! oh well, he's evil, i'll probably put him back in later. Happy Holidays!!! ~Sara

Reviewer: the_wind
Date: 12/22/06 1:08
Chapter: Unwelcome

Ooh... I'm lucky I have my Christmas holiday to distract me because I can hardly wait for the next one!

Author's Response: have a happy christmas!! ~Sara

Reviewer: Wizardlicious
Date: 12/21/06 22:13
Chapter: Unwelcome

I love this chapter! Have a happy holiday and you know...update before I go whacko.

Author's Response: thanks!!! happy holidays to you, too!! i'll update right after the queue opens!! i promise! ~Sara

Reviewer: MAYATRAU
Date: 12/21/06 7:01
Chapter: Bare

the and was very touching...
love it!

Author's Response: thanks!!! ~Sara

Reviewer: Mordrian
Date: 12/17/06 0:09
Chapter: Bare

Oops. I mean I don't think the ending was too clich. D: I'm tired. xD

Author's Response: that's okay.

Reviewer: Mordrian
Date: 12/17/06 0:08
Chapter: Bare

I love this story, and the one before it too. I don't think that the start was too clich at all. Keep up the good work, you've grown heaps as an author so I hope you continue to improve. ^.^

Author's Response: Thank you very much!!! ~Sara

Reviewer: AprilPotter
Date: 12/16/06 18:13
Chapter: Bare

Yaah! The next chappie is up! I wonder how Ron is gonna react when Harry drops by. It should be..."interesting". Update fast! ; ]

Author's Response: thanks!!! i hope you think it's interesting!! ~Sara

Reviewer: Dragontamer1
Date: 12/16/06 10:03
Chapter: Bare

Another fantastic chapter! The Malfoys were excellent in this chapter, and the end wasnt clich, but inspiring.
I cant wait to see what youll do with Rons character in this one. After working with the Malfoys, the Weasleys should be easy for you, as long as there not too flat.
If we see a lot of Hermione in the next few chapters *hint* Than you should do some work with her character, too. In the first one, she seemed to be coming along a bit slower, but I know you can do magic with these characters.


Author's Response: ooo inspiring!! thanks!!! i actually wrote the next couple chapters too quickly, and the Weasley's did seem a little flat. Hermione was okay, but i want to add a few more fun and interesting things before submitting it to the queue. Thank you so much!!! that really means a lot!! ~Sara

Reviewer: Gladriel
Date: 12/16/06 9:31
Chapter: Bare

Aww. I can't believe that he told all the Malfoy's that. The ending wasn't cliche, well to me it wasn't. I thought it was sweet!

Author's Response: you rarely hear someone call draco sweet. or any of the malfoy's! thanks for the review!! ~Sara

Reviewer: the_wind
Date: 12/16/06 1:57
Chapter: Bare

This chapter is great, but the next sounds even more interesting...

Author's Response: thank you, thank you!!

Reviewer: Dragontamer1
Date: 12/06/06 17:29
Chapter: Unexpected Offering

The Malfy characters are coming along nicely. I wish we could see more of Mrs. Malfoy though, since she's not big in the books. The next chapter looks exciting. Can't wait!

Author's Response: Thanks!!! She'll be shown more later on, but I'm still formulating how I think her character is. She acts mean, but she always seems motherly, in a way, to Draco. She's confusing. But she will definitely be shown more later on. ~Sara

Reviewer: MAYATRAU
Date: 12/06/06 11:55
Chapter: Unexpected Offering

i dont thonk draco was over-emotional....
loved the chapter:)


Author's Response: thanks!!

Reviewer: anAnachronism
Date: 12/05/06 17:58
Chapter: Unexpected Offering

Eep! Five wonderful, lovely chapters! I'm so glad you started posting the second story! And Draco wasn't too emotional whatsoever. I just hope Lucius doesn't become a physically abusive father, that doesn't fit with his character. Emotionally abusive is more like it. I think you portrayed him wonderfully. I hope you update soon!

Author's Response: I don't think Mr. Maldoy's physically abusive eithor. He seems like a yeller to me, not a hitter, if you know what I mean. Anyway, thank you so much!!! ~Sara

Reviewer: Janus
Date: 12/03/06 5:03
Chapter: Unexpected Offering

nice chapter
especially the part with the hand of glory...this think could be the next Harry's marauding-thing

Author's Response: thanks!! and you could definitely say that!! it will come in handy for Harry! ~Sara

Reviewer: nuw255
Date: 12/02/06 17:43
Chapter: Unexpected Offering

This whole thing with Draco and his parents is really sad. I have a friend whose family is sort of like that: they seem perfectly fine when there's company, but they're at each other's throats when they're alone.

I was happy to see Ron's response to Harry's letter. He's clearly not thrilled, but he's willing to accept his friend despite his faults. Very refreshing after so often seeing Ron depicted as a hothead who never considers trying to temper his reactions.

What does Draco want? Probably something to do with his father. Ultimately, he wants his father's love, but I think he'd settle for his father's respect and acceptance.

Yet again, you have given us a wonderful chapter. I can't wait to see what Harry decides to do with the Hand of Glory. Dying to see what happens next.

Author's Response: I have something like that with my father and that's how I pictured the relationship between Draco and his father.

I pictured Ron's reaction as anger when he first read it at the Burrow, but didn't want to seem angry when he wrote back. Ron didn't want to seem angry because he still wants Harry to come over, and lets just say that he thought Harry wouldn't if he knew Ron was angry with him.

I too think Draco wants that. He hates his father when he's alone with him, but when someone says something against his father, Draco will defend Mr. Malfoy.

Thank you very much!! The Hand of Glory will come in handy!! ~Sara

Reviewer: niffler trainer
Date: 12/02/06 13:10
Chapter: Unexpected Offering

Great chapter! Its kinda sad though that Harry has to act as a buffer between Draco and his father.

Author's Response: Yeah, it is. And Harry will continue to through the years when he stays at Malfoy Manor. Thank you!! ~Sara

Reviewer: Ellie4Harry
Date: 12/02/06 12:28
Chapter: Unexpected Offering

I feel so sorry for Draco! Mr Malfoy is such a git! I'm not to sure what Draco truly wants in life, it might be to have his mother around more often or something like that? Great chapter! Ellie

Author's Response: Mr. Malfoy really is!! Everyone knows it though! If you read book 2 and 3, they talk about him a lot there and how he's a bastard. I wasn't really sure eithor what Draco wanted, but I would guess it would have something to do with his parents. Thanks!!! ~Sara

Reviewer: Gladriel
Date: 12/02/06 12:17
Chapter: Unexpected Offering

Wow....I feel so sorry for Draco now! I can't wait for the next chappie!

Author's Response: Oooo!! I'm making people feel sorry for the evil kid at school!! Thanks!! ~Sara

Reviewer: Big_Kelpie
Date: 12/02/06 12:04
Chapter: Unexpected Offering

greaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaat chapter!!! poor Malfoy...

Author's Response: I know, how sad! Thanks!!! ~Sara

Reviewer: Big_Kelpie
Date: 12/01/06 19:44
Chapter: Unexpected Offering

I dont want to abuse the reviews system so i'll email u. ee cant wait for the chapter?

Author's Response: okay. *waiting anxiously for the email*

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