Reviewer: Faethe
Date: 02/21/07 13:11
Chapter: Only Those Worthy

That was a good chapter. I enjoyed learning a little secret about the common rooms and I wonder how Harry will use it in the coming year. I am looking forward to the next chapter. Please update quickly!

Author's Response: Thanks!! Alas, Harry doesn't try to go back into the Gryffindor common room in second year. You'll see in ch. 14 why he'll stop. But I would like him to try in another year. ~Sara

Reviewer: Big_Kelpie
Date: 02/20/07 10:06
Chapter: Only Those Worthy

really good! keep it up

Author's Response: thanks!

Reviewer: Ellie4Harry
Date: 02/20/07 4:57
Chapter: Only Those Worthy

Hmm what's going on with Snape? And how are Draco and Blaise going to react? I found this chapter very interesting, keep up the good work!

Author's Response: There's a lot going on with Snape. He's a very curious character. Draco especially is going to love the idea. You'll see. Thanks!!

Reviewer: Mordrian
Date: 02/19/07 1:40
Chapter: Only Those Worthy

Haha. Yeah. It is favourited, and I do get an email, but I never check my email ;3 Besides, checking for another of your chapters has become somewhat of a ritual.

Author's Response: The Different Road Ritual. cool!

Author's Response: The Different Road Ritual. cool!

Author's Response: The Different Road Ritual. cool!

Author's Response: The Different Road Ritual. cool!

Reviewer: Janus
Date: 02/18/07 11:55
Chapter: Only Those Worthy

PS2: Of course it would be a secret couple...

Author's Response: Hmmm...didn't actually think about that. Good point!

Reviewer: Janus
Date: 02/18/07 11:44
Chapter: Only Those Worthy

This chapter is simply superb...
PS: About the Harry/Ginny relationship...they could be the couple after 2nd year; she would be lying in hospital wing and he would visit her...and she would be glad that he's caring for her...

Author's Response: Thank you very much!! Since everyone wants the Harry/Ginny relationship so bad, I'll probably have it. Thanks again! ~Sara

Reviewer: Sunflower at Dusk
Date: 02/18/07 0:20
Chapter: Only Those Worthy

Nice, but I guess I was hoping Harry would discover an unusaul room. However this was really good.

Author's Response: Thanks!! Sorry to disappoint you! But later, much later, he'll go back to the tunnels he found last year and find that one of the passageways leads to somewhere unexpected. ~Sara

Reviewer: Mordrian
Date: 02/17/07 22:42
Chapter: Only Those Worthy

Squee! I've been checking this daily to see if it was up. It was worth the wait though.

Author's Response: It's up to you, but if you had the story to your fav's you'll get an email saying that its been updated. Thanks a lot!!! ~Sara

Reviewer: the_wind
Date: 02/17/07 15:46
Chapter: Only Those Worthy

Interesting. Is this just a fill-in or did we get an important piece of information with the "only those worthy" bit?

Author's Response: It's neither a filler or important, it's just supposed to be interesting. It's supposed to tell all the readers that Harry's a good person, even though he's a Slytherin, and that he's worthy of being with Gryffindors, which means he's brave and thinks of others. But you never know that many change! ~Sara

Reviewer: AprilPotter
Date: 02/17/07 9:27
Chapter: Only Those Worthy

Yah, another wonderful chapter! Hmm, I'm trying to figure out what will happen next and I have a feeling Harry will tell Draco. Am I right? Hurry and update!

Author's Response: Thanks!! Yep, he tells Draco! I'll update! ~Sara

Reviewer: Lindriallalos
Date: 02/15/07 18:58
Chapter: Come and Gone

I love this idea! (lol, I'm late in reviewing, but whatever. It's the thought that counts...) I don't know about relationships in this, though it would be interesting to have a Harry/Pansy/Draco triangle, simply because there is no way it would happen in JKRs books.
And I love your quotes! I found a really cool one that I wanted to share with you... because it really reminded me of this story.

“I always say, keep a diary, and some day it'll keep you.” ~ Mae West

Keep up the good work! I hope Chapter 12 gets Validated soon! *can't wait*

Author's Response: Thanks!!! Better late than never, right?

That's very true: the triangle with them would never happen in the books. Ooo! I really like the quote! I'll be using it in a chapter that's at the end of the year. I already knows what's going to happen it and it'll be perfect for it! If you find any others, please post them! Thanks! ~Sara

Reviewer: Voldy_Rules
Date: 02/15/07 10:21
Chapter: Come and Gone

see how you were saying Harry/Cho I think that depends on how you portray Cho. Cho is potrayed quite a lot as a popular hot girl who goes for the good looking popular admired guys eg harry, cedric mibe even draco. The thing is with the Draco/Pansy/Harry triangle is that it seems to be that Pansy fancies Draco while Draco thinks shes a pain, which I'd expexct from Draco too. Cho I think would be more compatable for a triangle or maybe even Parvati or Fleur. The point is I think is that I think Slytherin Harry is better with a bitchy, more self confident, arrogant girl like Cho or Parvati. Ginny is seen as hot in book 6 b ut isn't arrogant like Parvati or Cho. Girls like Ginny and Hermione ( had to mention her) are better suited to gryffindor harry. jst please consider the harry/cho ship. and while I'm on the subject is Harry gonna move away from the likes of Ron and Hermione and move more towards other Slytherins.

Author's Response: I understand what you're saying and it does make sense, but I've never gotten the feeling that Cho was arragant. I've never gotten the feeling that she would ever be with a guy like Slytherin Harry. Just so you know. But I am considering it. Know that.

Will he move away from Ron and Hermione? Hmm...only I know, and I'm not saying anything. Ooo! The suspense! ~Sara

Reviewer: Voldy_Rules
Date: 02/13/07 13:18
Chapter: Come and Gone

this story is brilliant. please update soon. I do have a question, will there be a sort of love triangle between Cedric/Cho/Harry because with the Slytherinness harry will be more aggressive and arrogant. I also think u shud consider having Harry/Cho as the prodominant ship as it was one of the ships that might of worked

Author's Response: Thank you very much!!

Actually, you're one of the only people that want Harry with Cho in this story. Most readers want Harry/Ginny. Considering he's a Slytherin, I doubt Harry/ Cho would work out. Harry/Ginny seems more believable, despite the Gryffindor vs Slytherin deal. Ginny's a strong person so it seems more natural and real. But I haven't actually decided if I'm going to have the Harry/ Ginny. I am considerig it.

The first relationship I was thinking of was Harry/ Pansy/ Draco - a love triangle. We'll see what happens.

Thanks for the review! ~Sara

Reviewer: Ellie4Harry
Date: 02/11/07 10:47
Chapter: Come and Gone

Great Chapter! And I liked the way you used a latin password v. smart! Hope to read the next chapter soon! 10/10

Author's Response: Thanks!!! I'm glad you liked it! I really hope ch. 12 is up soon, too!! ~Sara

Reviewer: Sirius_is_love
Date: 02/09/07 23:29
Chapter: Professor Parish

draco?!? realy?

god, dudly is a brat!!

Author's Response: Dudley is a brat!! He gets too much stuff!

Reviewer: the_wind
Date: 02/08/07 2:00
Chapter: Come and Gone

Hmmm... good chapter, even if it was just a filler.

On a different note, though, I've been thinking about your earlier comments that, due to an incident in year 3, it is extremely unlikely that Harry and Ginny will have a relationship. This intrigues me, as, to quote a friend, "love isn't quite blind, but it is incredibly stupid". Don't forget, until as recently as HBP, some people held hope for a Draco/Hermione or Draco/Ginny ship.

Author's Response: No, this is quite different. Well, not really if you know what's going to happen, but since you don't, it would go against Ginny's character to go out with him after the middle of 3rd year. I could pair them later like 6th or 7th. I know that so many reviewers want them to be together, so I'm starting to think its a possibilty. Cross your fingers!! Thanks for the review!! ~Sara

Reviewer: Demosthenes2k5
Date: 02/07/07 16:19
Chapter: Come and Gone

This is great! Wha will happen to Dobby though? and don't students learn Accio in fourth year?

Author's Response: They learned it in 4th year? Oops. They might have. I don't remember. Thanks!! ~Sara

Author's Response: Dobby? Well, it's quite sad because he won't be released from the Malfoy's. Harry would obviously lose his friendship with Draco if he did make Mr. Malfoy release him. Very sad.

Reviewer: Janus
Date: 02/04/07 10:22
Chapter: Come and Gone

I like Harry's behaviour. He's more decisive and independent that in JKR's books. This story is simply excellent. If only Harry would be a couple with Ginny...You know, like Romeo and Juliet.
I think that Slytherin was a better choise for him than Griffindor.
PS: I hope, that when Harry would be an wolf-animagus his patronus would be a wolf too.

Author's Response: Thank you so much!! And I have thought of the Ginny and Harry relationship deal, but I can't figure out when to put it. But knowing what comes in the future it would never really work. It might, possibly, work in the 6th year, but it'll be a stretch for her.

A better choice?! Whoa!! Thanks!! But I'm going to keep Harry's patronus as a stag though. He needs to have some relation to his father besides looks. ~Sara

Reviewer: dogluvr
Date: 02/03/07 21:14
Chapter: Bare

wow, like i said in my other review, harry is different. "a half-blood among pure bloods." but hey, it adds up to the plot. liked it.

Author's Response: yep, it's different. but its all for a good reason!

Reviewer: dogluvr
Date: 02/03/07 21:00
Chapter: Unexpected Offering

it was really surprising the way harry reacted to the hand of glory. It shows how different he his in your story than he is in jk rowling’s. but, then he wouldn’t be in slytherin and there would be no point in your story. interesting plot. i just love the way you depict draco! you show that even he has feelings. you show that his life isn’t perfect even if he’s really rich and struts around with that knowledge. I think what draco truly wants in your story, is for his father to treat him better. Come to think of it, I think it’s the same in jk rowling’s novel. if mr. malfoy wasn’t the way he was, then maybe draco wouldn’t be so into the dark arts. your wonderful writing skills weave draco malfoy into a whole new light. great chapter that explained so much! And thank you for reading my continuous ramblings.

Author's Response: I really want Harry to be different and I'm glad it shows. I want him to be independent from other people because of what happens later in the story.

I'm glad you like the way I've created Draco. I always thought there was more to him than meets the eye. Ever since Myrtle said that Draco was going into the bathroom, crying and was sensitive, I knew there was more to him. He can't just be a shell, although he tries to act like he is. I think if Draco's father was better to him and didn't just brush him off all the time, then he might have turned out better in the books. We'll see what happens in my story!?

I like your continous ramblings!!! Don't change it!! ~Sara

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