Reviewer: Nawl
Date: 04/13/07 9:18
Chapter: Tom Riddle the Memory

This is one of the best stories I've ever read! I hope you update again soon! Good luck! :D

Author's Response: Thanks!! I hope you continue to like it!!! ~Sara

Reviewer: Rowana
Date: 04/10/07 23:49
Chapter: Old Photographs

Not buying it in the least.

Author's Response: In what way?

Reviewer: Rowana
Date: 04/10/07 23:30
Chapter: Professor Parish

Um, I'm not sure how in the world you're going to pull off making the Malfoys friendly with Harry and/or anti-Voldemort, but I guess that's the point of this Alternate Universe section...

Author's Response: The Malfoy's aren't going to be friendly with anti-Voldemort people. That's all I can say. I wouldn't want to give anything away. ~Sara

Reviewer: Slytheringal_93
Date: 04/05/07 9:43
Chapter: Tom Riddle the Memory

AMAZING STORY


love it



really paints pics and the idea is great!!


You're def a great writer


X

Can't wait 4 the nxt chapter =]


.:~* $g 93*~:.

Author's Response: Thanks very much!!!

Reviewer: Dragontamer1
Date: 04/03/07 17:38
Chapter: Tom Riddle the Memory

It's a good thing that Ron isn't mad at Harry anymore, though you could have held that arc longer.
I'm eager for something to do with the main plot to happen. Lots of little subplots are forming, but they don't (yet) appear to have anything to do with the central story. But since it's a long fic, it's bound to advance slowly, which works for me.
As for the Mr. Malfoy story... not much new to say there yet, but I hope there will be soon.
Also, let Hermione be her own entity. Give her a scene where Ron isn't there, or talking through her. We need to see how her character changes in this fic, so let her be... her.

Author's Response: Well, Ron was angry with Harry for two weeks, but he can't stay angry forever, so I thought it was time to move on with that.

I know there are lots of little plots. I just want to make it as interesting as possible. But we will definitely be getting to the main plot of Riddle's diary. Don't worry. And yes, it will be going a bit slower since its so long. I'm glad you're ready for it!

The Hermione idea is very good. I just haven't put too much thought on Hermione because I've been working so much on the main plot and having it turn out right and turn out well. But I will definitely try to let her spread her wings.

Thanks!!!! ~Sara

Reviewer: Faethe
Date: 04/03/07 8:08
Chapter: Tom Riddle the Memory

Good chapter. It kind of seemed to jump around a bit, but a lot was going on. I'm glad Ron is not mad at Harry anymore. I am interested to see what happens with the diary next. Please update soon!

Author's Response: Sorry about the jumping around. I wanted to move forward in the year to get to more interesting things. Thanks!! ~Sara

Reviewer: the_wind
Date: 04/03/07 2:11
Chapter: Tom Riddle the Memory

Getting interesting. I'm glad Ron isn't angry anymore (apparently) and I'm looking forward to what happens with Riddle...

Author's Response: Ron's not angry anymore. A lot more will happen with Riddle and his diary!!! Thanks!! ~Sara

Reviewer: Big_Kelpie
Date: 04/02/07 14:40
Chapter: Tom Riddle the Memory

mm interesting.. tom riddle was a bad boy.. draco is a git and ron's wand is funny

Author's Response: thanks!! lol!!

Reviewer: Dragontamer1
Date: 03/20/07 21:47
Chapter: Crimson Facade

44 chapters is a lot, obviously, which only means that there's more wonderful story to read.
As for Ron and Harry, they will have falling outs all the time, just like in the real books, I suspect.
Also, you mentioned something about Harry having a watch?

Author's Response: Yep, it's a lot. Well, thank you!!

Friends have fights all the time. But they get back to being friends eventually.

Harry has a watch, yes. He has a watch in the books, too. Thanks for the review! ~Sara

Reviewer: Big_Kelpie
Date: 03/20/07 20:50
Chapter: Crimson Facade

Is Imperturbatus a better verison of muffliato used by adult snape and no tby (emo)teen snape?..i like this chapter.. i knew ron and harry would fall ou eventually but i also know they will become friends and fall out endless time at least until harry decides between what its righ and what is easy 44 chpters? wow thats long.. maybe u cna cut some parts.. about romance in the story what about harry/susan or better harry/myrtle ..kidding wahtever u chos ewill be fine

Author's Response: Emo Snape! lol!! thats funny!

Imperturbatus makes objects such as doors impenetrable (by everything, including sounds and objects).

I've looked back to what can be shortened slightly, but its all good! So until further notice, it's 44 chapters. Thanks!! ~Sara

Reviewer: Wicked Wench
Date: 03/20/07 17:48
Chapter: Crimson Facade

I'm ready! Keep posting!


Author's Response: okay! i will!!

Reviewer: AprilPotter
Date: 03/20/07 17:12
Chapter: Crimson Facade

44 chapters long? Yah! I'm happy! Are you going to continue with the series after that though? Please do!

Author's Response: of course i'm going to continue!! the stories will only get better!!! ~Sara

Reviewer: MAYATRAU
Date: 03/20/07 13:36
Chapter: Crimson Facade

:)

Author's Response: :) :)

Reviewer: Faethe
Date: 03/20/07 10:38
Chapter: Crimson Facade

I hope Ron and Harry make up, but I can understand why Ron would be so upset! I look forward to the next chapter! Thanks for the quick updates.

Author's Response: Ron's upset because his brother got hurt because of something Harry and Draco did. Thanks! I'm glad you do! ~Sara

Reviewer: cocain
Date: 03/20/07 8:46
Chapter: Professor Parish

Lol.Nice idea.I have always been wonderring what would've happened if Harry was in slitherin.Are you planning on writing version of all the books or just of the first and second year.

Author's Response: Thanks! All seven books! woo! ~Sara

Reviewer: Mordrian
Date: 03/20/07 0:48
Chapter: Crimson Facade

I thought today was the worse day... I started it on a mission, finishing a book and intent on going to the school library to find the sequals, only to find that they were on loan. Not only that, but there was double maths. In the last lesson of the day, there was Computer Studies. Being the rebellious, and bored student that I was, I accessed hotmail, and I was surprised to see that the fic was updated. Thanks to you, my day was not horrid. It was quite good. ^__^ Well, it's a shame that I'm reading about Ron 'doing a book 4', but hey, he still has Drakey... I feel like calling Draco 'Drakey' from now on. o.o Yeah. It's that time of the day...

Uh. Yeah. I can't wait for the rest of the story. =P 44 chapters? Bring it on, I say, as well as the third and fourth and... up to seventh story if you have the time. Gosh, that'd occupy lives, especially yours, for a while.

Author's Response: It does occupy a lot of my time, but I don't mind it. I like writing!

Well, I'm glad I made your day better!! That's cool! Thanks! ~Sara

Reviewer: the_wind
Date: 03/20/07 0:47
Chapter: Crimson Facade

Am I ready? Bring it on! I like long stories, because I can enjoy them for longer. Good chapter and keep writing!!!

Author's Response: That's good! Thanks! ~Sara

Reviewer: AprilPotter
Date: 03/12/07 20:57
Chapter: The Old Diary

Good chapter! I was wondering if Ron would be mad about it though. Hurry and update! : )

Author's Response: Thanks! Ron gets very mad. You'll see. I added the chapter to the queue a day or two ago. ~Sara

Reviewer: Janus
Date: 03/11/07 8:58
Chapter: The Old Diary

Nice chapter. And the fog...it's a perfect idea.

Author's Response: Thanks!!

Reviewer: Ellie4Harry
Date: 03/10/07 13:50
Chapter: The Old Diary

Wow, brilliant chapter! But why did they choose Percy of all people? If it was for revenge wouldn't Draco have prefered Ron or Hermione? The bit with Colin in it had me up in stitches I can't wait to have a moment with him again! Great Chapter 10/10

Author's Response: Ron and Hermione would never be walking around in the Dungeons for no apparent reason, but Percy would be walking around there since he's a Prefect. Also, he's the brother of Ron, so that's all the better for Draco.

Actually, there aren't any other moments with Colin, but I should add some now that I think about it.

Thank you!! ~Sara

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