Reviewer: TheTrioLivesOn
Date: 06/08/07 22:32
Chapter: Into the Past

draco, draco,draco....

Author's Response: i know. what are we going to do with him?

Reviewer: Big_Kelpie
Date: 06/03/07 17:57
Chapter: A Bloody Hallows Eve Pt. 2

I like the change in points of view but why does harry remember what he did when he was possesed ? ginny sais she just had like blank spaces within memories

Author's Response: Well, I wanted to make it a bit different and unique. Thanks!! ~Sara

Reviewer: Irith
Date: 05/29/07 16:12
Chapter: A Bloody Hallows Eve Pt. 2

awesome as usual....the only thing i don't like is that it's going to take forever for all seven years to be up! too bad things need to get validated...oh well, can't wait for the next update

Author's Response: it takes forever it seems for my chapters to be validated!!! if it were up to me, i would put a new chapter up every week, maybe even sooner.

thanks!! ~Sara

Reviewer: DonR
Date: 05/29/07 8:15
Chapter: Trust

Harry already knew what Floo was.
Hermione told him in his first year;)

Author's Response: Well, I forget those minor things sometimes. Sorry about that. Hope you liked it anyway! ~Sara

Reviewer: Janus
Date: 05/27/07 3:25
Chapter: A Bloody Hallows Eve Pt. 2

fantastic as always

Author's Response: yay!

Reviewer: Janus
Date: 05/27/07 3:24
Chapter: A Bloody Hallows Eve Pt. 2

fantastic as always

Author's Response: thanks!!!

Reviewer: Dragontamer1
Date: 05/26/07 16:18
Chapter: A Bloody Hallows Eve Pt. 2

I liked the omniscient view. At first it felt a bit off, because it hasn't happened in this story before, but I got used to it. In the next chapter, I'd like to see the student reaction to what's going on, from the Slytherin point of view.
I'm happy to see the story advance, i hope it turns out o be a little interesting. I just wonder if the same people are going to be petrified?

Author's Response: Thank you!! I'm glad you liked the change!

I'm sorry but the same people will be Petrified because I don't know what other characters are Muggle-born, but there is one addition, and the person is a Slytherin!! Oooo! ~Sara

Reviewer: the_wind
Date: 05/25/07 21:03
Chapter: A Bloody Hallows Eve Pt. 2

Wow, this keeps getting better and better! Keep writing!

Author's Response: Thank you, thank you!! I definitely will!! ~Sara

Reviewer: TheTrioLivesOn
Date: 05/25/07 14:35
Chapter: A Bloody Hallows Eve Pt. 2

interesting, interesting...

this kind of story really isn't my thing, so i'm not sure why i keep reading, but i do anyways...

Author's Response: Maybe deep down you really do like it! Well, I hope you do keep reading! ~Sara

Reviewer: the_wind
Date: 05/19/07 19:38
Chapter: A Bloody Hallows Eve Pt. 1

It's funny - I think Harry might've noticed by now, seeing as everytime he blacks out, it's directly after Tom writes something to the effect of "there’s something I would like you to do for me". Unless he doesn't remember reading those words, that would fit...

Author's Response: I keep forgetting to add that he doesn't remember those words!!! So, yeah, he doesn't remember reading the words that Tom wrote. He's only 12 and not that smart at the moment, but he'll figure it out. ~Sara

Reviewer: ginny75
Date: 05/18/07 15:32
Chapter: Unexpected Offering

I think he wishes that his father treated him better. Im glad you made him a little more human. And it shows why he is the way he is. Dont change it even if someone tells you yo. I like it how it is.

Author's Response: Thank you!!! I hope you're enjoying the second installment! ~Sara

Reviewer: TheTrioLivesOn
Date: 05/15/07 15:55
Chapter: A Bloody Hallows Eve Pt. 1

I really like it so far, or at least, for a 'what if Harry was in Slytherin?' story. I am patiently awaiting the next chapter.

Author's Response: Yay!! I'm glad you like it! ~Sara

Reviewer: Dragontamer1
Date: 05/14/07 21:35
Chapter: A Bloody Hallows Eve Pt. 1

Oooh! I really enjoyed that chapter, and a nice ending, too.
Hmm... I may know who's going to die...
Oh, and you did some wonderful things with the setting at the beginning of the chapter. Also, I think that you should explore a bit with The Bloody Baron, like why he is so bloody.
That's all for now!

Author's Response: Thank you!! I want to know who you think it is. I wouldn't tell you if you were right or wrong, but I'm curious. Hmm...

Why he's so bloody? lol. But I actually do want to add the Bloody Baron to the overall A Different Road Series, unfortunately I don't think he'll be in the rest of this particular story. ~Sara

Reviewer: Eanneil
Date: 05/14/07 16:16
Chapter: A Bloody Hallows Eve Pt. 1

I think it's pretty cool that you put that little extra though into the owl's name, gives it a bit more depth, yeah? And I also enjoy the fact that Harry seems much more aware that's something is wrong than I think Ginny were in the Books. After all, he's the hero so he should be a bit "better" than others right? I'm wondering a bit about the changed words on the wall though, but I assume you've got a reason for that. Really like Tom the Diary, alot like I imagined him to be.

Author's Response: I always do that with names. What would be the point if names didn't have a bit more meaning? I tend to that anyway; it's my thing.

I think it's that Ginny wanted to have a friend so bad in the books that she didn't see the underly or not-so-underly problems. Harry has friends, though they get into fights, so it's easier for him to see what's wrong. I guess he should be better, too. He is the main character.

Well, I changed the words just because I wanted something different from the books. I wanted it to be something I had written. That's really it.

Thank you!! I'm glad he's like what you imagined him to be!! ~Sara

Reviewer: Sergmaster00
Date: 05/14/07 12:12
Chapter: A Bloody Hallows Eve Pt. 1

Nice chapter , but in the books wasn´t the message something like ENEMYS OF THE HEIR BEWARE? Why did you change it? ANd I always though that the blood came from the birds Ginny killed

Author's Response: I changed it because 1) its copyrighted and 2) I wanted to make a new, unique one. Sorry if you didn't like it. Also, in the book Ginny didn't use her own blood, but I just thought it would be if he did. Thanks!~Sara

Reviewer: Aesculapius
Date: 05/14/07 8:12
Chapter: A Bloody Hallows Eve Pt. 1


Author's Response: yes it is!!

Reviewer: the_wind
Date: 05/14/07 2:52
Chapter: A Bloody Hallows Eve Pt. 1

This is great? Will Harry realize what's going on, and try to dispose of the diary, like Ginny did? But surely not, otherwise there wouldn't be that death! So many possibilities... in any case, update soon!

Author's Response: Nope, Harry won't get rid of the diary. He doesn't know that's what's making him blackout yet. The question is: will he before its too late?

Thanks for the review! ~Sara

Reviewer: Janus
Date: 05/06/07 12:24
Chapter: The Strange Daydream

possesed Harry...sounds good

Author's Response: thanks!!!

Reviewer: Ellie4Harry
Date: 05/06/07 5:54
Chapter: The Strange Daydream

Oooooooh! Very interesting! But I have one question: How can Tom posses Harry now when he couldn't in OOTP? Anyway, great chapter can't wait to read the next one!

Author's Response: Here, Tom is only a diary and Harry doesn't know that he's a threat. But in OOTP, he's Voldemort and Harry doesn't want anything to do with him. Also, the way he's trying to control Harry is different. Thanks!!! ~Sara

Reviewer: Emerald Sapphira
Date: 05/05/07 11:53
Chapter: The Strange Daydream

I really liked this chapter they keep getting better and better!

Author's Response: Why, thank you!!! *bows* ~Sara

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