Reviewer: Ghostclown
Date: 07/24/07 19:20
Chapter: Two Down, More To Go

Great chapter. I'm looking forward to the next one, as their ambition to become animagi hasn't been touched upon in quite a while.

Keep up the great work!

Author's Response: Yeah, they've been worried, or at least Harry has, about the Heir. But they finally come back it for real this time! Thanks! ~Sara

Reviewer: Irith
Date: 07/24/07 18:05
Chapter: Two Down, More To Go

Cool chapter!
Hehe, I savored DH, but I still finished it around 2 am the following morning.
Anyway, I'm definitely continuing to read your stories! Fanfiction makes it so HP is never really over... and I know this series will be going for a long, long time.
Anyway, next chapter looks cool! I've been dying to see the whole Animagus process...

Author's Response: Thanks!! I'm pleased to hear it!!

The Animagus part will hopefully be up shortly! I know this chapter was just submitted, but I want things to get going! Hehe! And this is only the 2nd year! ~Sara

Reviewer: Dragontamer1
Date: 07/24/07 17:56
Chapter: Two Down, More To Go

Just because the last book came out doesn't mean we'll stop reading your stories! We're better than that.
Nice chapter! Percy is just taking a beating in this book, physically and emotionally, isn't he? Draco's pureblood obsession is scaring me. I know Harry'll be out to stop the beast, but I don't know how keen Draco is gonna be to help him.

Author's Response: Thanks! I guess I was just being stupid then. I'm really pleased you'll keep reading!!

Draco isn't going to help Harry...I guess you'll have to see what happens. Thanks again! ~Sara

Reviewer: Neptunas
Date: 07/17/07 13:14
Chapter: The Stiffened Body

Really good

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: the_wind
Date: 07/17/07 8:46
Chapter: The Stiffened Body

Better and better...

Harry's really stupid, isn't he? It's believable, and it certainly makes for a great story, but it's so ANNOYING!

Author's Response: He'll get smarter because...did I say that? Nothing. Haha. But he will. You'll see!! Thanks! ~Sara

Reviewer: Dragontamer1
Date: 07/16/07 19:57
Chapter: The Stiffened Body

That seemed quick. Didn't the last chapter just come out? Or maybe I only read it recently.
Good chap all the same. I can't believe that Harry's not trying to figure out who tried to kill him. if he yet realizes it was to be murder.
I was torn. I've been cheering for Gryffindor all this time, and now Slytherins are the ones to cheer for. Oh well, Harry's team won. Yay.


Author's Response: Harry isn't really sure he was poisoned or not. He was curious at first, but then focused mainly on the pain and his want to get better. But I understand.

I know!! Even I get confused sometimes!! Plenty of times, I've written Gryffindor instead of Slytherin, or that Hary was wearing red robes. Thanks!! ~Sara

Reviewer: Sing Hallelujah
Date: 07/16/07 16:56
Chapter: The Stiffened Body

Gd chapter
I like how tom has gotten Harry 2 really trust him
Bad idea Harry =s

lool
I hope that Harry and Draco do stay friends because they don't seem as close now!
=[
Oh well

the wonderful writing makes up for that!

*SH*
xxx

Author's Response: :)

Reviewer: Sing Hallelujah
Date: 07/16/07 16:55
Chapter: The Stiffened Body

Gd chapter
I like how tom has gotten Harry 2 really trust him
Bad idea Harry =s

lool
I hope that Malfoy and Draco do stay friends because they don't seem as close now!
=[
Oh well

the wonderful writing makes up for that!

*SH*
xxx

Author's Response: Thank you!! I'm glad you like my writing!! I think you mean Harry and Draco, and they will become better friends. Tom is kind of in the way of that right now. ~Sara

Reviewer: RNCybergate
Date: 07/16/07 15:51
Chapter: The Stiffened Body

Another good "filling" chapter...I especially liked the quidditch match...
Would slytherin have won the cup or something if Harry had caught the snitch with +80 up?

Poor Gryffindor...to think that they would be the ones winning if only Harry hadn't been sorted into the cursed serpent tongued house . lol
...its nice too see Flint ticked off though...that man has some real issues ...as if winning isn't enough :)

I'm surprised how fast we had the first attack...wouldn't it have been dangerous for slytherins pet snake (basilisk) to come out at this time....shouldn't it have given Harry more time to kill the roosters before petrifying the first person...that was too close....

Anyway ...good work..

Next chapter please ;)

ps...who was the coward who poisoned Harry?

Author's Response: :)

Reviewer: RNCybergate
Date: 07/16/07 15:49
Chapter: The Stiffened Body

Another good "filling" chapter...I especially liked the quidditch match...
Would slytherin have won the cup or something if Harry had caught the snitch with +80 up?

Poor Gryffindor...to think that they would be the ones winning if only Harry hadn't been sorted into the cursed serpent tongued house . lol
...its nice too see Flint ticked off though...that man has some real issues ...as if winning isn't enough :)

I'm surprised how fast we had the first attack...wouldn't it have been dangerous for slytherins per snake (basilisk) to come out at this time....shouldn't it have given Harry more time to kill the roosters before petrifying the first person...that was too close....

Anyway ...good work..

Next chapter please ;)

ps...who was the coward who poisoned Harry?



Author's Response: I know, it's yet another filler chapter. Sorry. It should be the actual story starting from now on.

Flint just wanted a substantial amount of points to assure they had a good number of points.

Hahaha!! It's too bad we didn't really see much of Flitwick in the books.

Well, it's about time something happened in the story. But I guess overall it's kind of early.

Thank you!!! And you'll see who poisoned him later! ~Sara

Reviewer: Irith
Date: 07/16/07 10:37
Chapter: The Stiffened Body

wow....wierd... and awesome....so it's justin and nearly headless nick next, right? it's been forever since i've read CoS...
UUURRRRGGGHHH! Can't wait for the next chapter! At least I'll have DH to counter my thirst for more of this story....

Author's Response: Oooo! I forgot about Nearly Headless Nick. No, he won't be Petrified, but Justin will be. An many others. More than the book anyway.

OMG!!! I can't wait for DH!! I think I'm going to cry when it's over! Ahh! ~Sara

Reviewer: Ghostclown
Date: 07/16/07 10:30
Chapter: The Stiffened Body

Finally itís approved! The chapter was great; I loved the detail of the Quidditch match. Out of curiosity, though, why did Flint want Harry to wait until they were at 80 points? Was it because they had to beat them by a certain amount to get a shot at the house cup, or because he just wanted to embarrass the Gryffindors?

Anyways, keep up the great work!

Author's Response: Flint wanted them to get enough points to make sure that they had enough to win the Cup.

Thank you!! ~Sara

Reviewer: RNCybergate
Date: 07/11/07 19:14
Chapter: Severe Sickness

Just to follow on from my last review...

It should be possible for the trio to get along/get together again...after all i'm sure it would make Dumbledore very happy to see some interhouse friendlyness...

I think Harry is the sort of person who wouldn't care if a few Slytherins were to get unfriendly towards him....well... he will survive....that is if his fellow slytherins feel like doing something to their heir :)

I believe it should be possible for the trio to get together again...use it as an excuse for Harry to practice a few defensive spells against angered house mates. lol

Should Mr Malfoy ban Harry from his house (which I don't think he will do) Harry can always go to the weaslys....

hmmm..I wonder if Draco could join Harry and co (once he becomes friends enough with them....maybe even as far as protection from his family when Voldy comes back again...

Draco could join the good side after all...

Just some ideas...

Anyway no matter what you do...i'm sure you will do the right thing.

Keep up the good work!!!

Author's Response: These are all very good ideas, but I'm sorry to say that I've already planned what's going to happen. And I'm even more sorry to say (since I don't want to give anything away) that life doesn't usually work out they way we want it to, and that's exactly what happens to Harry. Won't say much more.

Thank you though!! It's the thought that counts!! ~Sara

Reviewer: RNCybergate
Date: 07/11/07 11:10
Chapter: Severe Sickness

You have found another fan!
Great story so far...I love it :)

If you can, could youbring the trio back together again...oh and I really would love to see Ginny back together with Harry...I really miss the relationship.

I felt really sad in the first story when you mentioned that they could have become great friends (just after harry walked away with Draco -before harry got sorted into Slytherin-)

It would be great if they could become real friends again.

Don't even dare to kill of Ginny in the Chamber of secrets...i'd never forgive you if you did....
......................

Just looking ahead...
I can hardly wait to see Sirius in the 3rd book...for instance, to see the look on his face when he finds out that Harry got sorted into Slytherin...poor Padfoot :D

Also...I wonder what People will say when Sirius breaks into the Gryffindor common room even though harry isn't even in there.

How many books do you intend to write?
I hope its all 7
Ill be looking forward to each and every one of them.

Keep up the good work!!! :)

Author's Response: Well, Harry is friends with Ron and Hermione, but they're in different Houses, so they'll never be like they are in the books. I know, its so sad. I wish they could be.

Ginny doesn't have the diary, so she won't be in the Chamber at all.

Sirius will find out Harry's in Slytherin before Harry tells him because Sirius will probably see him in his Slytherin robes when he's in dog form. It will just be apparent from then on.

Everyone thought that Harry would be in Gryffindor like his parents, they're going to assume that he thought the same. I don't know why I'm telling you ahead of time. I hope this doesn't ruin the story or anything.

Yep, I intend to write all 7!!! I've finished the 2nd, I've written about 20 chapters of the 3rd, and a few chapters of 4. I also know what's going to happen in the 5th and 6th. 7th is a mystery as of yet.

Thank you!!!!! ~Sara

Reviewer: Dragontamer1
Date: 07/09/07 20:04
Chapter: Severe Sickness

SO the change of cups, I'm assuming, was the cup being switched and a potion or poison added. But what was the pop? And if you can't appparate then who switched out the cups? I have an idea, but it is very foggy and has a lot of holes...
As for book three, I'm assuming there won't be a timeturner, since Hermione plays a small part now, not being in Harry's house.
Also, in book three I'm expecting you to make it very interesting if Harry finds out about the marauder's animagus plan, because he is planning on doing that himself. What will Sirius' and Lupin's response be? But that's a while away. Approximately how long will book three be?

Author's Response: Yep, a poison was added and it was also a "pop" that you heard. And whoever it was did appear and then disappear, but not by Apparation. If you don't know, then I won't say.

Well, Hermione will still have her Time-Turner, but Harry won't need it since--well, i'm not going to tell you now. You'll have to wait for the story. Harry will find out abou them being Animagus, but not until the end, like in the story. I don't think Harry will tell Sirius or Lupin. But he might only tell Sirius. I'm not sure yet.

I haven't finished it yet, so I don't know how long it's going to be yet. The summer is really, really long though. You'll see why later. ~Sara

Reviewer: Sing Hallelujah
Date: 07/08/07 11:46
Chapter: Severe Sickness

Good chapter
Could really imagine how harry felt
and the Essence of Rue thing was a gd touch

Update sooooon

*SH*

Author's Response: Thank you!! I'll add the next chapter soon!! ~Sara

Reviewer: the_wind
Date: 07/07/07 1:21
Chapter: Severe Sickness

Refer to my review for chapter 22.

Author's Response: thanks!! i went to see what you wrote! ~Sara

Reviewer: Ghostclown
Date: 07/06/07 19:31
Chapter: Severe Sickness

Great chappie; without a doubt one of the best ones Iíve read thus far. As for ideas in Year 3, I donít really have any, but I hope that the Buckbeak situation is handled differently than in the books. There are so many new possibilities now that Harry is in Slytherin, and I just hope you make use of that. Anyways, keep up the great work; I can hardly wait for the next chapter to be posted.

Author's Response: Ooo!! I hadn't thought about Buckbeak! I'll think of something good! Thanks!! ~Sara

Reviewer: Irith
Date: 07/06/07 15:51
Chapter: Severe Sickness

awesomeness! the next chapter sounds cool...

Author's Response: thanks! ~Sara

Reviewer: the14me17ha
Date: 07/06/07 15:07
Chapter: Severe Sickness

great as usual! i'm excited to hear youre already on the third... nice stuff!

Author's Response: thank you!!!

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