Reviewer: Talon_Strike
Date: 08/17/07 19:35
Chapter: Unexpected Offering

From your note, I know you are worried about your depiction of Draco. Personally, this is just how I seem him away from school. Lucius is forboding and demanding, and Narcissa is a doting wife. Don't change him a bit, he seems to act out at school because Lucius isn't there to stop him, or worse.....

Author's Response: Thanks! That's actually very reassuring and makes a lot of sense. I hope you continue to read and enjoy the story!! ~Sara

Reviewer: Dragontamer1
Date: 08/15/07 6:56
Chapter: The Malfoy Circle of Friends

I loved that chapter! (And every other chapter)
I liked the Polyjuice bit. I'm just wondering how/if he'll figure out it was them. AS for the Circle of Friends... It seems a tad egotistical on the Malfoy's part, but I like the idea and the fact that HArry is a part of it Who else is?
Harry getting smarter... and Amybe Draco too. I'll wait to see how that turns out before saying anything.
Also like the_wind, I have a smallish theory as for the death. MAybe >-------< that big a theory.

Author's Response: Thanks! I know the Malfoy Circle is not really necessary, but I wanted some sort of equivalent to the Weasley sweater. I would say the other Death Eaters and some people in the Ministry would be in the Malfoy Circle of Friends.

Yep, Harry and Draco are getting smarter. Well, you'll see who dies later! ~Sara

Reviewer: Ellie4Harry
Date: 08/15/07 6:41
Chapter: The Malfoy Circle of Friends

Hey! I havn't gotten to read your fic in weeks so it was nice that I got to read all these wonderful chapters in one go :D

I really loved the Polyjuice potion scene and all of Harry's presents! Keep up the great work! Ellie :D

Author's Response: Thank you very much!!! ~Sara

Reviewer: RNCybergate
Date: 08/14/07 16:03
Chapter: The Malfoy Circle of Friends

Another good Chapter.

For a moment there I thought Harry was going to find out that it was actually Ron and Hermione when their hair started to change...but since he is friends with them he wouldn't say anything...alas it was not to be ..oh well...can't have everything :)

Nice touch with the Polyjuice potion...I kind of missed 'Hermione the Cat' though ;)



Author's Response: Hermione transformed...and not into a cat! Haha! I was going to have them transform more, but decided against it. I like this way better. There's a hint of it, but yet nothing's given away to Harry. Thank you! ~Sara

Reviewer: 001anonymous
Date: 08/14/07 7:28
Chapter: The Malfoy Circle of Friends

This is one of the best hp alternate universe fics ever! Keep 'em coming! Im your fan! haha!

Author's Response: Yay!! Thank you!!! I love getting new fans!! ~Sara

Reviewer: the_wind
Date: 08/14/07 2:30
Chapter: The Malfoy Circle of Friends

Oh, by the way, I've just been struck with a sudden idea about who's going to die...

Author's Response: Well, you'll see later if you're right! ~Sara

Reviewer: the_wind
Date: 08/14/07 2:29
Chapter: The Malfoy Circle of Friends

The plot thickens! I liked the way you worked in the Polyjuice Potion bit.

Author's Response: thank you!!

Reviewer: Irith
Date: 08/13/07 19:31
Chapter: The Malfoy Circle of Friends

Hah, I didn't think about the whole Polyjuice potion incident! And I like how Harry is reading a lot now, an intelligent Harry could be very interesting...
Great chapter, and I can't wait for more, as usual!

Author's Response: Thank you very much!!! I'm glad you like it!! Intelligent Harry will be very insterying, very instering indeed! ~Sara

Reviewer: Ghostclown
Date: 08/13/07 15:02
Chapter: The Malfoy Circle of Friends

lol, whats up with the italics?

Brilliant chapter. I love the perverseness of Ron and Hermione spying on Harry; fantastic idea.

Without a doubt, one of the best chapters of A Different Road 2, and I must say it was well worth the wait. Keep up the great work.

Author's Response: Wow, thanks!! I really wanted to put the Polyjuice Potion in some how, so ta-da! ~Sara

PS--the italics has been fixed.

Reviewer: Irith
Date: 08/05/07 11:17
Chapter: Animagus Plans

Cool chapter! Hmmm... just thought of this, maybe Sirius will help Harry and Draco become Animagi at some point! Anyway, I do like how Harry is slowly caring less about the attacked people. It's quite interesting to see how his character changes in this story. Can't wait for next update!

Author's Response: Thanks!! It's not that he doesn't care -- Harry was going to tell someone -- it's just that he doesn't want everyone to think of him as the Heir.

I'm sure Sirius would help Harry, maybe not so much Draco, but considering how the 3rd story is going to end, I don't think Sirius will be able to help them. You'll see...

~Sara

Reviewer: Ghostclown
Date: 08/03/07 19:16
Chapter: Animagus Plans

Excellent chapter. Yes, Slytherin Harry does seem to be taking things differently then the Gryffindor one.

Just out of curiosity, now that you have read Book 7, has there been anything that you felt you needed to go and change, or anything that you're planning to?

Keep up the great work; it just keeps getting better and better!

Author's Response: No, I'm not planning on changing anything. I actually have a fantastic idea for Year 5 that I came up with months ago, and it works even better now that I've read the book! I'm not going to tell you what the idea is though (don't want to give anything away).

The only real problem is that in my first story, Harry caught the Snitch in his hand, so I wasn't sure how he wasn't going to prevent Scrimgeour from seeing the message. But I figured out how to get around that problem.

Thanks!!!! ~Sara

Reviewer: RNCybergate
Date: 08/03/07 13:00
Chapter: Animagus Plans

Sorry for not reviewing for a while...been...well... reading other stories...

Anyway....as usual another great chapter...
I never would have thought Snape would have allowed Harry to leave his classroom...at least not for something like going to the toilet...it's just not like him (at least not without taking away points first)

Looking forward to the final battle.

Cheers
RNC


Author's Response: It's okay. I'm just happy you came back to read!!

Thanks!!

That's good point about Snape. I'll keep that in mind for the future!

I've been thinking about what I'm going to do for the final battle ever since I finished the book! There's going to be a lot more of finger-pointing in mine! ~Sara

Reviewer: Frankie Nicholas
Date: 08/02/07 18:39
Chapter: Animagus Plans

Great Chapter, keep 'em coming!

Author's Response: Thank you!! I will! ~Sara

Reviewer: Sing Hallelujah
Date: 08/02/07 6:18
Chapter: Animagus Plans

LOVE IT
That's all

=]
Update!

hugs
xxxx

*SH*

Author's Response: Thanks!! I'm glad! ~Sara

Reviewer: the_wind
Date: 08/02/07 2:00
Chapter: Animagus Plans

Harry's actions are very different, and once again, IT'S ANNOYING! When will he learn?

Keep it up!

Author's Response: Harry's actions are different for a reason though! He's just annoying 'cause he's young. Thanks! ~Sara

Reviewer: The_Penname
Date: 08/01/07 9:51
Chapter: Two Down, More To Go

I just realized a flaw in your plotline. In the actual Book 5 when Harry is worried that he is being possessed Dumbledore says that Voldemort couldn't possess him because Harry is to full of love, so how can Riddle possess him in your story?

Author's Response: I've thought of that. Well, in Book 5, Harry was literally being possessed -- Voldemort was actually in his physical body --, but in this story, Voldemort is not really in him, but just using his body to do his bidding. I hope that made sense. ~Sara

Reviewer: The_Penname
Date: 08/01/07 9:50
Chapter: Two Down, More To Go

I just realized a flaw in your plotline. In the actual Book 5 when Harry is worried that he is being possessed Dumbledore says that Voldemort couldn't possess him because Harry is to full of love, so how can Riddle possess him in your story?

Author's Response: :)

Reviewer: Frankie Nicholas
Date: 07/28/07 21:59
Chapter: Two Down, More To Go

What an excellent AU story! I've often wondered what might have happened if Harry had become friends with Draco instead of Ron, or if he'd gone into the sorting without any preconceptions about the Hogwarts houses. However, I'm not sure he'd have remained quite so close to R & H.
I also like your portrayal of Draco, truly a character in shades of gray!

Author's Response: :)

Reviewer: Frankie Nicholas
Date: 07/28/07 21:58
Chapter: Two Down, More To Go

What an excellent AU story! I've often wondered what might have happened if Harry had become friends with Draco instead of Ron, or if he'd gone into the sorting without any preconceptions about the Hogwarts houses. However, I'm not sure he'd have remained quite so close to R & H.
I also like your portrayal of Draco, truly a character in shades of gray!

Author's Response: Why, thank you!!! I hope you continue reading my story!! ~Sara

Reviewer: the_wind
Date: 07/25/07 1:54
Chapter: Two Down, More To Go

I notice you didn't show Harry had beenwriting to Tom before Penelope got Petrified. Is that meant to sound suspicious...?

Anyway, keep it up!

Author's Response: Well, I wrote this story differently to how Rowling did it. She wrote that it was actually Ginny who somehow set the Basilisk on each person, but I just had it as Harry writes to Tom, who it therefore growing stronger and can set the Basilisk on people himself. I was going to change it to how Rowling did it, but I forgot and I kept adding the chaters to the queue. So it's not suspicious, it's just not Harry doing it. Hope that made sense! ~Sara

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