Reviews For Torn
Reviewer: Siri_luver
Date: 02/19/05 12:05
Chapter: A Stolen Kiss

oh, and i forgot to mention that i also read your story a letter for my love, and boy, you're just an AMAZING writer, you just introduce things into the story so well, and the fight was good...but it was REALLY REALLY REALLY sad! because harry and hermione BELONG together!!! it just breaks my heart, oh, and that, with voldemort inside her head, that was really good too, i never would've thought of that! well, i mean, the idea of entering one's mind with a spell that you had talked about before in the story. well, this is going REALLY well, and i hope that you finish the 6th chapter soon!

Reviewer: Siri_luver
Date: 02/19/05 12:01
Chapter: Awake in a Dream

wow, i'm utterly, lol, well, so far what you have written could inspire the whole world! goodness gracious, i just don't know what to say! i'm definately adding this to my favourites! well, good on you mate! like the australians would say!

Author's Response: Aww, gee... thanks a lot for reviewing. I'm so happy you're enjoying the story so far. THsi review does wonders to my ego by the way.

Reviewer: horseluver689
Date: 02/19/05 11:46
Chapter: Awake in a Dream

you are a very good writer. i had almost forgotten that it wanst J.K.R's...keep on writing

Author's Response: Wow, I'm absolutely flattered that you think that way. Though I'm sure that I'll never amount to the genius that is Ms. Rowling. (after all she did create thsi whole Potter universe) Thanks for the reveiw, I'm glad you ejoyed the chapter.

Reviewer: bittersweet8186
Date: 02/17/05 23:42
Chapter: Awake in a Dream

oh and by the way... that ginny-draco-scene was fantastic! i really enyojed it! ... some sexual tension in that scene or just a really tough ginny? anyway: it was great!

Author's Response: Yes there was definitely some sexual tnseion bewteen Ginny anddraco, but shhhh, she doesn't know it yet. Thanks again for reviewing! Cheers!

Reviewer: Aidayla
Date: 02/17/05 21:54
Chapter: Awake in a Dream

that was great! so sad how Hermione has to do distance herself from Harry like that... Brilliant story=)

Reviewer: chimaera
Date: 02/17/05 19:41
Chapter: Awake in a Dream

brilliant chapter. i love the argument idea, and u executed it perfectly. im becoming a big fan of ur work. keep it up!!

Author's Response: I'm all smiles right now. Thanks so much. I'm actually pretty relieved at seeing the great responses for the argument. I was pretty worried that i rushed it.

Reviewer: lipiana
Date: 02/17/05 19:17
Chapter: Awake in a Dream

wow.. very nice!! Cant wait for the next chapter!!! How long do you think itll take to be up?

Author's Response: It's gonns be awhile before I have ch. 6 up. So far I've got bits and peices but I'm just too musy at the moment to finish it. So just be patient with me. Thanks for reviewing. I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter

Reviewer: Vianne
Date: 02/17/05 17:22
Chapter: Awake in a Dream

Wow! This was certainly worth the wait! :) Great chapter!!!!

Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you enjoyed and I hope the next is worth the wait as well. Oh, by the way, if you like this stroy, why don't you check out my other entitled "A Letter for my love"

Reviewer: bittersweet8186
Date: 02/17/05 16:49
Chapter: Awake in a Dream

okay... i'm sorry! this chapter just knocked me down! it's so absolutely breath-taking. it's... just brilliant! it's a thrilling atmosphere and i'm just shocked, because it's so good!! you did a really, really well job with that chapter. i wonder where you learned how to write like that? i mean... the emotions are awesome. i like how everything is going on. can't wait till harry discovers (or anyone else) what's going on with hermione. damn! they need each-other badly, but this is all so complicated, dangerous and... everything! it's a fantastic story!!! *claphands*

Reviewer: bittersweet8186
Date: 02/17/05 16:46
Chapter: Awake in a Dream

wow--- this is so thrilling! i need to read the next chapter and then review! great work!!

Reviewer: bittersweet8186
Date: 02/06/05 12:01
Chapter: Take the Chance

THRILLING! Absolutely thrilling! I can't explain what I felt when I read your story! You did a really great job with it and I'm really looking forward for the next chapter! This fiction is breathtaking ... it's just amazing!

Author's Response: thanks man, you don't know how much your review means to me cuz it 's probably the only good thing that I've come across today...Should be feelin better tomorrow...u know, it's just one of those days, but thanks again and as soon as my beta sends me back ch. 5 I'll have it up and running in no time. cheers!

Reviewer: lipiana
Date: 02/02/05 1:01
Chapter: Take the Chance

I cant find the right words to tell you what I think of this story, so I guess the best I can say right now is that it ROCKS!! Post chapter 5 sooon!

Reviewer: sugarquill
Date: 01/27/05 21:29
Chapter: Take the Chance

Wow Beth. YOu absolutely HAVE to update this story. Please!!! I'm dying to know what happens next!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm happy you like it. I've just about finished ch. 5 and am working on the next. It'll be up and running as soon as i get it back from my beta. Cheers!

Reviewer: CANADA
Date: 01/15/05 12:48
Chapter: A Stolen Kiss

Very Cool, Cant wait to read the next one.

Reviewer: hermione4harry
Date: 01/14/05 10:24
Chapter: Take the Chance

That was suspenceful, it's killing me, can't wait for more!

Reviewer: cookiedoughicecream
Date: 01/14/05 10:06
Chapter: Take the Chance

Oh, good fic! I can't wait for the next chappie. Very well written, update soon!

Reviewer: blondie
Date: 01/12/05 23:19
Chapter: Take the Chance

You had me hanging off every word. Where did you learn to write that well?!? It was absolutely brilliant. Please update soon

Author's Response: the talent comes naturally...and so does my modesty... thanks for the review man i'll have ch.5 up soon

Reviewer: Jenry
Date: 01/12/05 15:12
Chapter: Take the Chance

omfg, that was briliant, w8in 4 mor eagerly...cmon....hurryup! w8in!...

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it, man. As for the next chapter, it'll be up and runnin as soon as i get it back form my beta.

Reviewer: Swimangel57
Date: 01/12/05 13:28
Chapter: Take the Chance

Oh my gosh!!! I absolutely loved it! You have to update soon!! I can't wait another second to read it! (well, actually I guess I can since it isn't up here!) but PLEASE hurry!!! It was fantastic!!!

Reviewer: Blaqlives
Date: 01/11/05 23:10
Chapter: A Stolen Kiss

Really good stuff! I can't wait to read more.

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