Reviews For Torn
Reviewer: hp_freak666
Date: 06/16/05 14:10
Chapter: Awake in a Dream

i totally love this story. this has to be the best h/hr fan fic i have ever read. *going to read next chapter* u r a great writer...

Reviewer: kernkraft_21
Date: 06/06/05 6:18
Chapter: Awake in a Dream

whens your next chapter coming, because i want to read more of your story you cant leave it their it is soooooooooooo goood

Reviewer: kernkraft_21
Date: 05/18/05 6:46
Chapter: Awake in a Dream

hello when are you updating next if you cant get it through would you be able to send it to me at

Reviewer: a muggle named Caity
Date: 05/03/05 1:13
Chapter: Take the Chance

Hi Beth, will you please update soon?? This was the very first story I read on here and I really liked it, so could you PLEASE update very soon!!?? We are all waiting.

Author's Response: hey Caity! I know, and I'm sorry, but it's gonna be a while longer as I want to get the other story I'm working on out of the way. But I do have the first part of ch. 6 of 'Torn' done, so I'm almost there. Just be patient with me.

Reviewer: kernkraft_21
Date: 04/29/05 6:00
Chapter: A Stolen Kiss

i really really really really really like this story and plz update really really really really really soon

Reviewer: kernkraft_21
Date: 04/26/05 21:48
Chapter: Awake in a Dream

plz update soon i really like this story and i cant wait to read it

Reviewer: SiriusStar07
Date: 03/11/05 13:52
Chapter: A Stolen Kiss

Please Update!!!! I look forward to seeing chapter 6! Definetly a 10!

Reviewer: dark arts master
Date: 03/04/05 13:43
Chapter: Awake in a Dream

Draco fancies Ginny!!!! She's a Weasley! For some reason, when you think about it, it was bound to happen, but when it did it was a shocker none the less. I love the idea however and I hope to God that it will continue and develop in later chapters! I'm also hoping Hermione will lighten up a little? She's hurting my feelings? I am a little confused, not criticizing 'cause i love it, but Hermione would probably be the first one to run to Dumbledore with something like this going on-wouldn't she? It's the best chapter yet! The voldemort scenes have my skin crawling and I love it!

Author's Response: WOW. You responded to each and every one of my chapters. I'm so happy. Not a lot of people actually take the time to do that. I'm glad you like the fic so far. The whole draco/ginny thing will develop in further chapters but i won't concentrate on it as much as harrt/hermione. The reason why Hermione won't run to dumbledore will be made known in further ch also. Thanks again for reviewing!

Reviewer: dark arts master
Date: 03/04/05 13:38
Chapter: Take the Chance

Wow! All I can say is-Harry, be a Neville! That bedroom scene really had me in stitches, I loved it. I am completely shocked and in suspense as to how Voldemort is climbing inside of Hermiones usually perfect brain-I must find out! Great job, you rock!!

Reviewer: dark arts master
Date: 03/04/05 13:33
Chapter: The Shadow that Stalks Me

Oh my god! Your are an incredible author! You keep the suspense and mystery full mell with the Voldemort thing, but you don't reveal what he's actually up to!! It keeps us reading! I love your style, I love where this is going.

Reviewer: dark arts master
Date: 03/04/05 13:30
Chapter: Remeber When

I loved how you dropped hints in the first chapter, and than here finally showed what Hermione had gone through--excellant style! I can't stand the fact that Harry is going to let her slip away however, NNNOOOOOO!

Reviewer: dark arts master
Date: 03/04/05 13:28
Chapter: A Stolen Kiss

Utter Perfection! A great opening! I love how you show both Harry and Hermione's feelings and then you write about the event. OOOOHHHH!!!!! The entire scene, and later flashbacks of the scene, gave me butterflys! Maybe we will see these love scenes get a little bit more graphic and, oh I don't know, even more exciting than they already are! You get a 10!

Reviewer: dancrazy
Date: 03/03/05 3:34
Chapter: Awake in a Dream

wow,great plot,plz update soon

Reviewer: SiriusStar07
Date: 03/01/05 13:36
Chapter: A Stolen Kiss

Excellent! I'm desperate to read the next chapter please hurry and do Ch 6! I would love to see more ron/ luna and ginny/ malfoy *?* Plot could not be more suspenseful! Keep up the great work! - Kap

Author's Response: I'll try and finish ch, 6 as soon as i can assure you that there will be more ron/luna and ginny/draco in the future. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Jenry
Date: 02/21/05 16:00
Chapter: Awake in a Dream

wot a gr8 chapter, hermione must be really confused and all, cos its not like her 2 hide stuff, well, the death oif her parents and voldy stuk in her hed wud probably hav an affect on her i spose! gr8 wrk 1nce again, eagerly w8in 4 nxt update, but dnt rush urslef, i no u must hav a real life 2 liv aswell!...james

Author's Response: and it doesn't get any easier for her from here on. Thanks a lot for the review, James. I'm glad you liked the chapter. I've got bits and peices of ch. 6 scttered in random books, sheets, and various napkins here and there so it's coming along... sort of

Reviewer: RemusMoonyLupin
Date: 02/20/05 18:06
Chapter: Awake in a Dream

This is a brilliant story! Is there going to be more Ron/Luna romance in the next chapters, because I think they make a brilliant pair! Poor Hermione. You could say she knows what its like to feel like Harry at the moment. Anyways, great story, definite 10!

Author's Response: Yes there will definitely be more Ron/Luna in further chapters as i absolutley LOVE the idea of them together. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: BeckyRose
Date: 02/19/05 18:12
Chapter: Awake in a Dream

Wow. This fic is extremely intriguing and I can't wait until your next update. I absoloutley love the plot you have thus far and all that goes with it...keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Hey, thanks so much for the review. I'm glad you're liking the story. You've been along for the ride from the start and I thank you.

Reviewer: HPLiNKN92
Date: 02/19/05 15:47
Chapter: The Shadow that Stalks Me

....Angelina is stil there? i thought that she was in seventh year in OotP.....unless im wrong. and i think im right about this. ive read OotP about 5 tiems i think.....btu anyways. great chapter. hwo do you make them so long?

Author's Response: whoops, i forgot to put a note on teh whole Angelina thing. I remember doin it on i guess i forgot here. Well to clear things up: YES Angelina is supposed to have graduated already, and YES ido have her in my fic, but only because, well i couldn't think of anyone else brilliant enough to be captain. Harry, will be too easy and as for Ron, i don't really see him as captain. So I've decided to have Angel stay back a year. As for the long chapter thing, I have no idea. Actually my chapters are not that long compared to others. Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: MissAmanda
Date: 02/19/05 12:09
Chapter: Awake in a Dream

No! You can't not update for 4-5 months! *and yes, I know that I used a double negative* It's so terrific! And you then tell us that the romance is coming in the next two chapters, which aren't coming for months! Lets just say that I love you and hate you at the same time! Update soon"er" hopefully! Keep writing like this, and you could make JKR jealous!

Author's Response: Wow, I'm extremely flattered that you think so, though i doubt that I'll ever have the ability to make Ms. Rowling jealous. Sorry for the long wait, I'll try to get the chapter up as soon as i can. In the mean time why don't you check out my other story entitled "A Letter for my Love". I get the chapters done in the span of a day so I know this will be finished in no time. Plus the chapters aren't as long as 'Torn' but the plot is just as great. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Siri_luver
Date: 02/19/05 12:07
Chapter: A Stolen Kiss

and sorry, but that last review was meant for chapter five, lol, sorry for the confusion!

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