Reviews For Torn
Reviewer: hpfan_1212
Date: 10/14/07 14:07
Chapter: A Stolen Kiss

omg i almost cried when harry was taliking about the pain her had felt when he lost sirius and the pain he felt when he almot lost hermione

Author's Response: hey, I'm so happy that my writing has managed to affect you in such a way. I write to gather up emotion and it seems that so far I'm getting the job done. So I thank you for your thoughts and kind words. Also, I'm not sure if you already know this, I've sent you a message, but just in case: I'm no longer continuing this story on this site. Instead I've directed my chapters to under the same penname. (Beth Brown) It's still not finished and I haven't updated in quite some time, but there's about 20 chapters up now. If you like, if you're still interested you can read the rest there. Thanks again, man for the wonderful review!

Reviewer: FreeFlyDragon
Date: 10/09/07 9:17
Chapter: A confession, an argument and a kiss

awwwwww what a sweet story!!!!!!!!!!!! update soon please

Author's Response: hey, I'm not sure if you already know this, but I'm no longer updating this story on this site. I do have though, 20 chapters of it up on under the same penname (Beth Brown) so if you're still interested, you can check it out. Thanks for the review

Reviewer: xxophelia156
Date: 09/14/07 11:44
Chapter: A confession, an argument and a kiss

write soon...i've already been waiting for ages and i simply can't wait any more!!!

Author's Response: It's been a while and I haven't kept track of who I've told and haven't told, just in case: I'm not longer posting new chapters on this site. If you're still interested though, then you can hop on over to and look me up under the same penname (Beth Brown). I haven't updated in quite some time (Writer's block is the worst) but I do have 20 chapters of it up and running right now, so... Thanks for the review by the way. I'm glad I've managed to please.

Reviewer: lindy_qtgrrl
Date: 04/01/07 19:21
Chapter: A confession, an argument and a kiss

Love it! You are an amazing writer and I absolutely cannot WAIT for the next chapter!!! But please, please, PLEASE don't let this fic turn into one of those corny Hermione-Gets-Pregnant fics, cuz those really annoy me and would totally ruin this! Anyway, you are a great writer, please update SOON! Thanks again!

Reviewer: Potter_freak0515
Date: 03/03/07 16:14
Chapter: A confession, an argument and a kiss

Is this done? You haven't updated in FOREVER! I'm not a huge fan of teh fluff (I am an H/Hr shipper, but I never like too much fluff) but I REALLY want to see the whole Voldemort plot unfold. Please update soon!

Author's Response: Hey, I'm not too sure if I've already told you this, but I'm not posting anymore chapters of Torn on this site. I do have the 20 chapters of it so far on under the same name. (beth brown) so if you still wanna take a gander, you can. Thanks for the fantastic review by the way!

Reviewer: WunderWitch
Date: 02/19/07 17:05
Chapter: Awake in a Dream

whaoa......ok im freaked out........nice job....

Reviewer: WunderWitch
Date: 02/19/07 16:04
Chapter: Take the Chance


Reviewer: WunderWitch
Date: 02/19/07 15:12
Chapter: The Shadow that Stalks Me

eek! scary!

Reviewer: WunderWitch
Date: 02/19/07 14:15
Chapter: Remeber When

awww, that's adorable!

Reviewer: WunderWitch
Date: 02/19/07 13:58
Chapter: A Stolen Kiss

awwww, how sad!!

Reviewer: ooblagal24
Date: 12/24/06 12:34
Chapter: A confession, an argument and a kiss


Reviewer: ooblagal24
Date: 12/08/06 13:28
Chapter: A confession, an argument and a kiss

love it

Reviewer: ooblagal24
Date: 12/08/06 13:28
Chapter: A confession, an argument and a kiss

love it

Reviewer: ooblagal24
Date: 12/07/06 17:45
Chapter: A confession, an argument and a kiss

That was so TOUCHING! I loved it. Except it was kinda graphic. But who cares. That makes it better.

Reviewer: ooblagal24
Date: 12/06/06 22:42
Chapter: La vie en rose

*sniff* *sigh* That was BEAUTIFUL. I loved it!

Reviewer: ooblagal24
Date: 12/06/06 22:18
Chapter: No lies, just love

What is IT that he doesn't regret?

Reviewer: ooblagal24
Date: 12/04/06 20:38
Chapter: Take the Chance


Reviewer: ooblagal24
Date: 12/04/06 20:22
Chapter: The Shadow that Stalks Me

I don't get the last part.

Reviewer: ooblagal24
Date: 12/04/06 20:00
Chapter: Remeber When

Even BETTER than the last! Where do you get all of this TALENT?

Reviewer: ooblagal24
Date: 12/04/06 19:49
Chapter: A Stolen Kiss

OMG! You are AMAZING! I LOVED IT. This is the meaning of LIFE! Keep up the good work!

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