it was as good as out of the blue but what do i know any way we all feel different and my opinion is like dust in the wind to you
Author's Response: No it's not! Everyone's opinion matters very much to me, never say tht it doesn't! I'm very happy you stopped by to read and have an opnion!
I loved this poem- especially the start. Although I don't think it is quite the format Harry would write it in I feel that the thoughts and feelings are exactly what Harry would feel.
Author's Response: *giggle*..harry wouldn't write a poem to begin with, so i guess this is the best it'll get until Harry decides to become the next lovesick poet. :-)...It's hard to look at things from the broken heart of the boy who lived, and then see what he'd write. Hehe, harry writing a poem, and then ron comes up behind him, and reads the poem: "harry, what the bloody hell are you writing?"..."n-nothing..im especially not writing about GINNY or anything, why would you say that??!"..."I didn't mate "...*ron looks suspicious while hermione smirks behind a book about horcruxes*
I really liked this. It was so romantic. I don't know what else to say. Excellent job!
Author's Response: thanks!! i think the descriptions are what make it romantic, and im happy they did...when i was writing this i tried to see ginny's attractiveness from a boy's (i.e. Harry's) POV and im glad to see it worked nicely :-)
Very sweet! And it isn't OOC at all - I mean, really, so the Golden Trio and everyone else doesn't write poetry....who says they won't start? *grins*
First off - my favorite part:
Her lips were those of an angel,
A simple kiss would mean the world,
I yearn to feel them again,
To be loved again.
Harry would want to be loved again...after losing all of those he's loved. He would need love, right?
My second favorite part: (I just had to add this)
Burned through my own like fire,
Could see my soul.
Like magic. *sigh* Very eloquent and touching and just...wow. I love it.
I love this...amazing.
~Tyger, tyger, burning bright - Euphrates
(Note: Sorry for not reviewing earlier...*feels foolish* I've been meaning to but got sick....first time I've been on the computer [out of bed, really] for like...48 hours, I think, so, sorry. :-))
Author's Response: I LOVE YOU ATTITUDE, DUDE! Thanks for the nice review u seriously made my morning!...I know what you mean by the poetry thing, i mean harry and and a good half dozen of his other friends have seen enough to be the next edgar allen poe! Anyway, you chose my my fav stanza, (the golden eyes one), and i like the way you see the poem, and i just had to add the 'like magic' part, i mean who would miss an opportunity such as that in their poems? those words are very touching, especially coming from harry. :-) Im happy you..LOVED IT!! I HOPE UR FEELING BETTER!!!!!
That's sweet. Although I think Harry is a bit obsesive, no? ;-) Ginny and Harry really should be together. I hope Harry get's the point from the fan fics!
Author's Response: tee hee...WELL he needs to be obsessed! How else ami going to turn his ~undying love~ for her into a poem? *stern look*....I hope he gets the point, too!
oooooh, *crys* sooo sweet, so sad! it- it- was *blows nose* ok, that's enough. It was beautiful! It was like... art, a masterpiece painted by words.
Author's Response: :-) THANKS!!! so happy u like it, you know how its so great to hear praise, you feel better about urself......take a cyber kleenex..........................ok :-)...thanks again, i think that's the best praise ive gotten so fa!
Me again! That one great! What a lovely poetical Harry! I wish I could be constructive or something because you were, but... um.... I can't. You don't need to change a thing.
Author's Response: haHA!!! gotcha this time ;-)!...Thanks for the review and im happy like my poetical harry!
SARAH, WHERE'S RANIA??? wish she would come back =(
Author's Response: *sniffle*...i know...here...have a kleenex *hands cyber-kleenex*.....she'll come back, i know she will :-(...anyway ur my 20th reviewer....only 18 days till xmas ;-)
im a princess
Author's Response: umm....have u taken ur pill today heather?....or slept well last night? i think u need just a tad bit of rest..ok...don't worry me now...ok...;-)...luv u
oh, yeah. I can't WAIT for book seven (who can??) !!!!!!!
BTW, did U know that JKR keeps the final chapter of book seven in a safe? I bet you did, but...
MUSTMUST MUST read book seven!!!
Author's Response: *eek* u have questioned my knowledge in harry potter(ness)? OF COURSE I KNEW THAT AND THATS SO COOL! i wish my plots and drafts and all that could be locked up in a safe! but sadly, i can only keep them in my drawer...I SOOOO CANT WAIT TILL BOOK 7!!!!!!!!!...im hoping for a teensy clue (maybe) sumtime this christmas!...ugg i just remembered i have an orthodontist appointment today...tighten me braces, ya know..well im sure u like long author responses and there are 2!!...AND TELL ME WHEN UR NEW POEM IS VALIDATED!!
Um, yeah....hi. So...you seem to have a lot of tests...and stuff. Yeah. Well. Yeah. So. Yeah. My first name's Jane, BTW...gag...I don't really like it, so I have my friends call me JJ...better that than old-fashioned Jane...sorry to anyone who likes that name...
Well. Yeah. Hi. So. I'm a good conversationalist, huh? Is that a real word? I think it is.
I finally got all my grades up in school. Yipee. I had a spanish test today...hard stuff...yeah.
I wrote a new poem. Could you check it out if it gets validated? It's kinda sad....
This is a pretty long review. Filled mostly with 'yeah' 'hi' and 'well'. Well. Yeah. HI.
Okay, that's enough for now. Byeas from JJ.
PS: Who says I'm stalking you? *shify eyes* :-)
Author's Response: jane is such a cute name!! anyway ill make sure to check it out when its validated!...hope u did good on ur spanish test! i had a math ttest today, im gonna have one in grammar tomorrow, chemistry on friday, and biology on monday!...but i hav no homework today ;-)....anyway.yea.well.ok.bye....again.so.yeah.bye!!!!>>>>>>Sarah
You were right, the other one is better. NOT that this one isn't good, it most certainly is!
I must say, you have a way with titles : )
Author's Response: i ALWAYS save choosing titles for last..its cool cuz i like it to really define the poem..titles tell alot about the story..anyway i know what u mean by the other one was better but heck, i am not harry!!! (and i am most certainly not 16)...btw, sorry i havent submitted anything new lately, guys, but ive been having ALOT of action at school these days AND writers block! boooooooo!!!!
Yes...you're correct...It's the infamous Dragon_Warrior, haunter of your review page! JK, I know you like reviews. Right? BTW, my initials are JK. Random, I know.
Well...hello. It's been a while. So I wanted to say hi...I read your whole bio for the first time...I want to read some of your friends' stories...Hmm...
Well, it's getting late, and I have to wake up at six 2morrow...I'm sick of school and I've only been back one day...at least I have a good book...Maximum Ride, have you read it?
Okay, better sign off and copy this review in case I get logged off again...Bye!
--DW, review page haunter.
Author's Response: szzzupppp, JK...hehe my real initials are SK (first name being the infamous 'Sarah')...how are u doing? i had an exhausting day at school 2day!..hmm...maximum ride....it rings a bell...i think my teacher showed it to us in 6th grade but i never read it....anyway u have to sleep and i have to study *2 qiuzzes and a MATH test!*..gah...anyway it was a pleasure seeing u review again and u definately made my day!>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>LadyM, the-girl-who-doesn't mind-having-a-stalker.......oh btw Jo said that book 7 cuming along good! wheee!!!!
Wow i am getting reeely good at chosing awesome crap to read. But your poem deserves a cookie!
Author's Response: i know what u mean *laughs*..after a whole year on this thing or even a month, u know which authors are the good ones and u can pick out the good stories just by the titles :-)...thanks for the cookie! u remind me SO much of my friend...sorry to keep saying that *laugh*....
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Author's Response: sorry...i dont speak german...........wuv yew heather cum online more!!!!!
I know what you're thinking. Another one, right? But I rereread you poem and I found the part I love most of all!
And I quote:
Her long, scarlet hair would dance behind her,
Curl loosely to frame her face,
As fire, as the blood red sunset,
Like it was woven from silk
That's just amazing. A combo of the best poets and Jo. Okay, I reall have to work on my scarf (I don't know why). Thanks for your review (we kinda communicate through reviews, have ya noticed?) and byeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!
Author's Response: i think ur mind reading skills need refreshing...I LOOOVEE REVIEWS!!!..and i know what u mean about the communicating thing lol..anyway what abotu today!! ORDER OF THE PHOENIX PICTURES AND MOVIES RAINING LIKE NOBODY's BUSINESS!!..and how bout the harry kissing cho thing?*shrug*..lol i like that stanza too...
"And I am foolish again/To not be with her" The second part maybe should be "Not to be with her" I think it would flow better. sorry, yet another review. speaking of reviews...*grins sheepishly* I have a new poem up, please tell me what you think. I'm dying here...I don't know what anyone thinks.
Author's Response: i dont mind i looovee it when u review so stop apologizing or ill be mad at u for 5 whole minutes ;-)...thanks for the suggestion ill reference to see which will go better *takes out huge-mungous book that says 'Hogwarts, a History'...they have everything in this book* ;-)...im a bit crazy today dont mind me..i didnt have my chocolate :-D
umm...yeah. thanks for the author's response 0_o. Yes, I DO think that is how Harry might think of Ginny, wonderful job. What took me so long? Well, I've kinda been busy with my stories...which you should check out(I got new ones)! I can't wait for the next part in this..series poemy thing (It IS going to be a series poemy thing, right?). Continue, please! Oh, by the way, you have a cousin/French tutor? Argh, you and Dragon_Spirit are all frenchies. Espanol is me personal preferance (is that how you spell it?). OK, by now I'm so off subject that you might even want to delete this, but don't since I spent forever writing it. Anywayz, I STILL love this poem AND the other one, and you should keep writing PLEASE!! OK, I gotta go work on this dream house proj. thing that is due in Tech Ed on WEDNESDAY and I only have about 1/2 done...ARGH!!! Beautious poemy thing...goodbye! :-)
Author's Response: :-D..i wuda answered this sooner but i get early relase from school on wednesays :-)...anyway thanks again and ill put it on my *rather disorganised* agenda to check out ur new works and leave a review! btw ur 10th reviewer and oh its mnff's birthday :-)...i didnt CHOOSE to take french, ya know..my school requires it..i much better prefer spanish but french aint so bad....au revoir, ma copine..;-)
Sarah what's up?? blah im bored... =D
Author's Response: hello bored my name is tired....god heather i wish u would come online more often im on until like 11:30 my time on weekends! (thats like 9:30 ur time right? day light savings ended like 2 or3 weeks ago..)...au revoir, mon ami Heather :-) ...im LOADING THE NEW MUGGLECAST RIGHT NOW YAY!! :-)
thanx for the tip. sorry, its probably really disappointing to see that you have a review and it's just a stupid thank you...oh well.
Author's Response: lol its okay even a stupid thank u is great from u people..just to see that u care:-P...its great to see that we all haven't died from the strenuous wait for book 7/movie 5 yet, cause that plus all the school work im getting these days! sheesh! i do hope ur well and im happyto tip u off! OOTP TRAILER THIS FRIDAY AND IM IN STINKING LEBANON I HOPE YOUTUBE OR MUGGLENET HAS IT!!! :-) *wishes to be back in good ol' brooklyn* wuhv u all :-)