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Reviews For The First Kiss

Name: HermioneGrangerfan (Signed) · Date: 01/12/09 14:19 · For: The First Kiss
Good x


Name: xoxoZMHxo (Signed) · Date: 07/10/08 20:19 · For: The First Kiss
awww thats sooooo sweet


Name: lola_lovegood (Signed) · Date: 06/26/08 11:16 · For: The First Kiss
that was soo good i loooved it


Name: ginnyrulz13 (Signed) · Date: 03/04/08 19:24 · For: The First Kiss
great story!! i didnt really get the beginning, but i like it all the same!!


Name: R_U_LDS_2 (Signed) · Date: 11/10/07 11:46 · For: The First Kiss
awwwwww this one is so cute and nice and sweet.... ;]


Name: Clarita (Signed) · Date: 09/06/07 16:46 · For: The First Kiss
that is soooooooooo cute!!!


Name: hpfreak101 (Signed) · Date: 08/10/07 17:09 · For: The First Kiss
Lovely.


Name: Love_Sirius55 (Signed) · Date: 06/16/07 7:56 · For: The First Kiss
Ah Brilliant. Perfect. Can't put it into words. I hope you write more! I have got to read more that you wrote...


Name: hpismylove812 (Signed) · Date: 06/04/07 22:28 · For: The First Kiss
aw. love james/lily!
good story!


Name: theawesomeness (Signed) · Date: 05/11/07 20:16 · For: The First Kiss
awww
except i think this story makes james look kinda pathetic. but then again maybe he is.
great story love.


Name: alyvenessa (Signed) · Date: 04/03/07 7:58 · For: The First Kiss
not bad it was ok.... BUT WHERE IS THE SEX???!!!!!!!!!


Name: Herm i oh ninny (Signed) · Date: 03/11/07 18:07 · For: The First Kiss
Aw...


So sweet!


I felt all...fuzzy inseide...


Name: HPAndHG4ever (Signed) · Date: 01/27/07 23:54 · For: The First Kiss
Wow! I loved it! I like how Lily started the kiss. My favorite part was when she got James all worried, but was really smiling! Great story!!
HPAndHG4ever
P.S. If you really like H/Hr then read Secretkeeper's "Avenged Sevenfold". It's awesome but she is still writing it.

Author's Response: I have read it, actually. It's on my favorites list. I'm glad you liked the story-I've always thought that when James starts the first kiss, it's kind of unrealistic. Thank you!


Name: Elody_Evenstar (Signed) · Date: 01/09/07 13:12 · For: The First Kiss
I thought the description of the kissing was a bit vicious really

Author's Response: Vicious? how?


Name: Elody_Evenstar (Signed) · Date: 01/09/07 13:11 · For: The First Kiss
I thought the description of the kissing was a bit vicious really


Name: Elody_Evenstar (Signed) · Date: 01/09/07 13:11 · For: The First Kiss
I thought the description of the kissing was a bit vicious really


Name: hpfreaky56 (Signed) · Date: 11/27/06 16:36 · For: The First Kiss
I think that was a very decent story. But I think you should add more I think you could have a good story if you add more.

Author's Response: Ooh...is that possibly a chapter request? Well, sorry, it'll probably be unfulfilled, since I only intended this to be a one-shot, but I'm glad you wanted to read more!


Name: james and lily fan (Signed) · Date: 11/21/06 21:24 · For: The First Kiss
awww how cute!


Name: hattiepotter (Signed) · Date: 11/15/06 11:03 · For: The First Kiss
Awww bless Lily and James ... love it


Name: adalittle (Signed) · Date: 11/10/06 21:43 · For: The First Kiss
i..think..i..am..starting...to...cry..sniff*...

Author's Response: Awww... Don't cry! I mean, I'm glad you felt something, but... *plies you with tissues and chocolate*


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