Reviews For The First Kiss
Reviewer: HermioneGrangerfan
Date: 01/12/09 14:19
Chapter: The First Kiss

Good x

Reviewer: xoxoZMHxo
Date: 07/10/08 20:19
Chapter: The First Kiss

awww thats sooooo sweet

Reviewer: lola_lovegood
Date: 06/26/08 11:16
Chapter: The First Kiss

that was soo good i loooved it

Reviewer: ginnyrulz13
Date: 03/04/08 19:24
Chapter: The First Kiss

great story!! i didnt really get the beginning, but i like it all the same!!

Reviewer: R_U_LDS_2
Date: 11/10/07 11:46
Chapter: The First Kiss

awwwwww this one is so cute and nice and sweet.... ;]

Reviewer: Clarita
Date: 09/06/07 16:46
Chapter: The First Kiss

that is soooooooooo cute!!!

Reviewer: hpfreak101
Date: 08/10/07 17:09
Chapter: The First Kiss


Reviewer: Love_Sirius55
Date: 06/16/07 7:56
Chapter: The First Kiss

Ah Brilliant. Perfect. Can't put it into words. I hope you write more! I have got to read more that you wrote...

Reviewer: hpismylove812
Date: 06/04/07 22:28
Chapter: The First Kiss

aw. love james/lily!
good story!

Reviewer: theawesomeness
Date: 05/11/07 20:16
Chapter: The First Kiss

except i think this story makes james look kinda pathetic. but then again maybe he is.
great story love.

Reviewer: alyvenessa
Date: 04/03/07 7:58
Chapter: The First Kiss

not bad it was ok.... BUT WHERE IS THE SEX???!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Herm i oh ninny
Date: 03/11/07 18:07
Chapter: The First Kiss


So sweet!

I felt all...fuzzy inseide...

Reviewer: HPAndHG4ever
Date: 01/27/07 23:54
Chapter: The First Kiss

Wow! I loved it! I like how Lily started the kiss. My favorite part was when she got James all worried, but was really smiling! Great story!!
P.S. If you really like H/Hr then read Secretkeeper's "Avenged Sevenfold". It's awesome but she is still writing it.

Author's Response: I have read it, actually. It's on my favorites list. I'm glad you liked the story-I've always thought that when James starts the first kiss, it's kind of unrealistic. Thank you!

Reviewer: Elody_Evenstar
Date: 01/09/07 13:12
Chapter: The First Kiss

I thought the description of the kissing was a bit vicious really

Author's Response: Vicious? how?

Reviewer: Elody_Evenstar
Date: 01/09/07 13:11
Chapter: The First Kiss

I thought the description of the kissing was a bit vicious really

Reviewer: Elody_Evenstar
Date: 01/09/07 13:11
Chapter: The First Kiss

I thought the description of the kissing was a bit vicious really

Reviewer: hpfreaky56
Date: 11/27/06 16:36
Chapter: The First Kiss

I think that was a very decent story. But I think you should add more I think you could have a good story if you add more.

Author's Response: that possibly a chapter request? Well, sorry, it'll probably be unfulfilled, since I only intended this to be a one-shot, but I'm glad you wanted to read more!

Reviewer: james and lily fan
Date: 11/21/06 21:24
Chapter: The First Kiss

awww how cute!

Reviewer: hattiepotter
Date: 11/15/06 11:03
Chapter: The First Kiss

Awww bless Lily and James ... love it

Reviewer: adalittle
Date: 11/10/06 21:43
Chapter: The First Kiss*...

Author's Response: Awww... Don't cry! I mean, I'm glad you felt something, but... *plies you with tissues and chocolate*

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