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Name: Soccer_rocks_likeHP (Signed) · Date: 04/05/07 14:48 · For: Chapter 3: Dumbledore
That was great! Keep up your amazing work!

Author's Response: I love compliment showers. ^^" Thanks for the review!

Name: Soccer_rocks_likeHP (Signed) · Date: 04/05/07 11:02 · For: Chapter 2: Flying, Lessons, and a Screaming Painting
This was a great chapter! I loved the way Lara met Mrs. Balck! Keep up the great work!

Author's Response: Hehe, thank you! I always wanted to incorporate that painting. I love it to death, even if it is annoying. >< Thanks for the review!

Name: Soccer_rocks_likeHP (Signed) · Date: 04/04/07 17:58 · For: Chapter 1: Harry Potter...Harry Potter is in my bedroom
This was VERY cool! I've always wondered what it's be like if a plain muggle got a letter one day and met all the wonderful characters. I think I'd probably act the same way as Lara did, although I'd probably think Harry was hot.

Author's Response: lol! She likes Ron better, sorry, Harry. XD Well, she is a witch; it's kinda complicated and I'm still working out how she can be known about in 1997. It makes my brain hurt, but I'll get it at some point in time. ^^ Thank you for the review!

Name: ahye (Anonymous) · Date: 04/03/07 10:30 · For: Chapter 1: Harry Potter...Harry Potter is in my bedroom
sounds a little too much like Peter Pan

Author's Response: Ok...I didn't notice Lara and Harry flying out the window. Is that just me?

Name: KateH (Signed) · Date: 04/02/07 16:59 · For: Chapter 5: Beyond the Brick Wall
Great chapter as usual! Can't wait for the next one! I really like where you're going with this story! =D

And I hope you had a very Happy Birthday!!

--Kate =D

Author's Response: I did, thank you, Kate! Chapter six is being hatched as we speak. :D

Name: a_new_author (Signed) · Date: 02/10/07 17:20 · For: Chapter 4: Double, Double, Boil and Trouble--Emotions run high
Your story line is new and refreshing to see. I like how you have started to shy away from the reflections from the original series. Good fans know the story and they are not really needed in such great detail. But a little reflection keeps the reader in tune with your points. I like where you are going with the story and I love your personality and how much you are shinning through the story. Keep up the good work. I will be looking for the future installments.

Author's Response: Wow...thank you! I like how you put that--I'm 'shying away' from the original story. Makes me think of horses. XD *pokes my inflated head* Thanks for the compliments, my friend. Happy Reading!

Name: HermioneOfCali (Signed) · Date: 02/06/07 21:27 · For: Chapter 4: Double, Double, Boil and Trouble--Emotions run high
YAY!! I can't wait for Diagon Alley! Her reactions should be priceless. I really liked this chapter even if it did present more questions than answers. Good job!

Author's Response: I'm already planning Diagon Alley; I'll be starting it soon. Ah, but questions are a good thing, m'dear--they keep you guessing! teehee! Thanks for the review!

Name: readerchic (Signed) · Date: 02/06/07 14:52 · For: Chapter 4: Double, Double, Boil and Trouble--Emotions run high
i loved the talking to the cat thing!! ive always wanted to do that!! sweet!!

Author's Response: Thank you! My cat is actually an inspiration for that, silent black-as-night Midnight, Spotty's complete opposite. ^-^ Thanks for the review!

Name: DogLover4Life (Signed) · Date: 02/06/07 9:08 · For: Chapter 4: Double, Double, Boil and Trouble--Emotions run high
My good luck wish worked! I'm not sure how I feel about Lara being able to talk to animals. But Buckbeak is really cool! And Sirius is alive! *sniffles* Is he going to stay alive? *eyes go wide* Are you going to kill him off?

I spotted two typos, I don't mean to be a bother, sorry.

"something glinted in the light let in by the door, snaking out to bit me" I think you meant to type 'bite'

Also, I don't know where the second typo went. *nervous laughter*

I loved the cat sex bit, that was so funny! Which reminds me, is Spotty the toad lady? Because the way you described her voice and appearance, that reminds me of one person... Umbridge! *gasp*

Oh yeah! *gasps again* Is there a flicker of romance between Lara and Ron?! Wasn't Hermione in the room too? Or did I read that wrong? Oh my! Now I have to get dressed because I have to leave for school in about twenty minutes. Funfunfun. If I didn’t have to leave this review totally would have been longer. :D

Author's Response: Heya, fellow 'Claw! Why did I tell you guys to point out typos...*shrugs* No, Spotty is not Umbridge--if she was an animagus, I don't think she'd be abe to put up being Lara's pet, honestly. :D Yes, Sirius is going to stay alive for now. I actally don't know if he's going to die yet. That talking to animals thing may not last, the potion may wear off by the end, but have some weird after-effect. Thanks for the review!

Name: JZ1124 (Signed) · Date: 01/21/07 21:43 · For: Chapter 3: Dumbledore
This is absolutely fascinating. I LOVE it! I can't wait to read more! Granted, I'm new the the HP fan fic world. But, this story is so different from the other stories I have read.

Seriously, I think the writing for this is awesome. Keep up the great work! I'm adding this to my favorites ASAP.

Author's Response: Why, thank you, JZ! I'm glad you like it. Thanks for the review!

Name: HermioneOfCali (Signed) · Date: 01/21/07 20:02 · For: Chapter 3: Dumbledore
That didn't tell me anything!!! It was still good though and I still expect more soon.

Author's Response: Didn't tell you anything? Alrighty then. Every author is entitled to their useless chapters, I reckon, if you didn't learn anything. *sigh* I'm working on Chapter 4, it'll be on its way soon!

Name: LiaWitch20 (Signed) · Date: 01/21/07 18:50 · For: Chapter 3: Dumbledore
Gush! I think you'r writting everyone wish on here!!! XD. Nobody wants see Sirius dying, though!!!
Man! I hope this story isnt gonna be too short, I LOVE long stories!!!
Keep up with the good job!!!

Author's Response: I know, neither do I! I don't even though if he WILL die. *wink wink* XD I dunno how long it's gonna be, but it'll be more than ten chapters, at the rate I'm going! Thanks for the review!

Name: readerchic (Signed) · Date: 01/21/07 17:45 · For: Chapter 1: Harry Potter...Harry Potter is in my bedroom
this is so amazing!! I love the story!!! I too am a bookwork!!! your idea was so original!! i really don't have anything else to say except she mentioned there were six books but disregards all of them except the first four. but thats just a minor detail. even Jo makes those kinds of mistakes so yeah. oh and just to let you know... i added this to my favorites!! and i hope you don't abandon it or anything. wow this is one long review. da... dang. lol! i loved that part it made me lol!

Author's Response: Um...*blinks* Thanks! Darn, I thought I fixed that! Did you see it in Chapter 2? If you did, I;ll look over it again. Thanks for the review!

Name: KateH (Signed) · Date: 01/21/07 17:05 · For: Chapter 3: Dumbledore
Yay! It was accepted!
Great chapter!!!!
--Kate =D

Author's Response: As always, Kate, these complimant showers do my swelled head no good. ^-^ Thanks!

Name: insanitea (Signed) · Date: 01/21/07 16:43 · For: Chapter 3: Dumbledore
this is interesting.. and you're right, it is every fan's dream! i kept visualizing the situation of harry just randomly showing up in my room, me accusing the poor kid of being delusional and thinking he's a fictional character...anyway, it was funny.
but i'm still confused about what they're all saying whenever lara brings up the fact/idea that they aren't real:
“So…you know J.K Rowling made you up?” I asked timidly. “Made your whole world up, too?”

“Of course we do,” Dumbledore replied, a bit surprised. “Though, regrettably, those numbers are very few. But we make do, and keep it a secret so no one else shall know or try to change it. Or, worse, deny it."

oh well, i guess we'll find out as you write, right?

Author's Response: ^-^ That's funny. Well, only a few know they were created by another human being through the minds of her fans--and a good thing, too, or else they might take JK hostage and try and get her to do stuff for them. It's all very complicated. Thanks for the review!

Name: beautifulromantic (Signed) · Date: 01/21/07 16:42 · For: Chapter 3: Dumbledore
This was written before the Fifth book right? Great job, this would probably be the way I acted if I got a chance to jump in. Except that I would give away everything.

Author's Response: Yes, it was. I know, I actually am taking from my own hopes that I would've goten my letter. Thanks for the review!

Name: DogLover4Life (Signed) · Date: 01/21/07 16:27 · For: Chapter 3: Dumbledore
*GASP* I read the first two chapters of this before my account!

Wow. So, JK really has created them? She didn't just write about them. Wait... How did she create them? Does this imply that anything someone writes is true someplace? Because that would be bad. How did she do it? And why does Voldy want her? How come she's 14 and she's magical but she didn't get her Hogwarts letter until now? So many questions! But yay an update!

Author's Response: *waves at fellow 'Claw* Heya! Well, she wrote about them, but it was the fans who brought them to life. (still working that out) I also ahven't figured out why Voldy wants her (but, then again, who knows what Voldy wants in the first place?) and the reason she hadn't got her letter before now is because her grandparents had intercepted it. (They had to go through their mother, they werne't going through it again)

Name: KateH (Signed) · Date: 01/19/07 14:03 · For: Chapter 2: Flying, Lessons, and a Screaming Painting
=D =D =D

Great Great Great Story!!!!!

Keep up the FANTASTIC writing!!!

Looking foward to the next chapter!!!

~~Kate =D

Author's Response: I like taking complement showers, they are very refreshing. XD Thanks, Kate. I hope it gets validated soon!

Name: joyheart (Signed) · Date: 01/15/07 1:26 · For: Chapter 2: Flying, Lessons, and a Screaming Painting
nice story.

Author's Response: Wow, a two word response. <.< ^-^ Thanks!

Name: joyheart (Signed) · Date: 01/15/07 1:12 · For: Chapter 1: Harry Potter...Harry Potter is in my bedroom
i love this so far

Author's Response: Thanks!

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