Great chapter! your a really good writer! The last part is just a teeny bit cliche, but whatever. it's still a wonderful story!
Ooooooh! Busted!!!! Well done, great as always, please update soon!
Why, oh why? Cliffhangers, oh why? Please update soon!
“Well, no one believed Noah, either,” muttered Sirius, making Lily snort with laughter.
This is my favorite quote!
hahahahahahahaha...the last comment had me laughing soo hard for so long! please update soon ;)
haha! I love the last part with the rain and cloud. Especially the no one believed Noah line. James Sirius and Lily make a good team! lol Update soon, I really like this story.
OMG....that is hilarious!!! Keep writing!!! Also I really like how you don't make James and Lily just fall in love magically all of a sudden...that totally ruins a story!!!
LOL I LUV THAT L8ST SENTINCE!
Tee hee, this is really really really good!! Please update soon, it's fantastic!!! 10/10!!!!
Oooh, nice start! I really like this, well done! 10/10
I like this chapter! I love the swimming part, very nice. The last comment made by Sirius mde me laugh so hard! I know, I'm a dork. Oh well! Update soon!
Good chapter! Please update quickly!
the end was really funny.
i like where this story is going. its not like most lily/james fics.
I really like this story. When are you going to update next? Anyway, I hope you continue this soon!
Author's Response: I'll try to update in around a week... I've already started the next chapter. But reviews make me want to write more! Thanks!
I loved that last line!
This is such a cute story!
I LOVE it!
Keep it up and update soon!
Author's Response: Yeah, I wasn't sure about the last line, because I'm not sure if absolutely everyone that read this would know who Noah was... But I figured the majority would, and if they didn't, it wouldn't me that hard to look up. Thanks!
hahah. loved the last line. cant wait for another update =]]]
Lol! Nice way to end a chapter. UPDATE!!!!
haha, plz keep going! its really great!