Reviews For Not a Maybe Thing
Reviewer: NeLLyRaE
Date: 02/17/07 16:19
Chapter: Chapter Five

Great chapter! your a really good writer! The last part is just a teeny bit cliche, but whatever. it's still a wonderful story!

Reviewer: Siriuslyinluvwithharry
Date: 02/17/07 14:19
Chapter: Chapter Five

UPDATE

Reviewer: babekitty_92
Date: 02/17/07 9:30
Chapter: Chapter Five

Ooooooh! Busted!!!! Well done, great as always, please update soon!

Reviewer: Ginny Guerra
Date: 02/16/07 18:21
Chapter: Chapter Five

Why, oh why? Cliffhangers, oh why? Please update soon!

Reviewer: HJPCATI
Date: 02/15/07 20:39
Chapter: Chapter Four

“Well, no one believed Noah, either,” muttered Sirius, making Lily snort with laughter.

This is my favorite quote!

Reviewer: California
Date: 02/15/07 20:17
Chapter: Chapter Five

plz update!!

Reviewer: HPdiva
Date: 01/18/07 12:55
Chapter: Chapter Four

hahahahahahahaha...the last comment had me laughing soo hard for so long! please update soon ;)

Reviewer: loonyluna63
Date: 01/17/07 20:54
Chapter: Chapter Four

haha! I love the last part with the rain and cloud. Especially the no one believed Noah line. James Sirius and Lily make a good team! lol Update soon, I really like this story.

Reviewer: writa_sista
Date: 01/17/07 15:05
Chapter: Chapter Four

OMG....that is hilarious!!! Keep writing!!! Also I really like how you don't make James and Lily just fall in love magically all of a sudden...that totally ruins a story!!!

Reviewer: Draco_is_hot
Date: 01/17/07 5:33
Chapter: Chapter Four

LOL I LUV THAT L8ST SENTINCE!

Reviewer: babekitty_92
Date: 01/17/07 4:12
Chapter: Chapter Four

Tee hee, this is really really really good!! Please update soon, it's fantastic!!! 10/10!!!!

Reviewer: babekitty_92
Date: 01/17/07 3:54
Chapter: Chapter One

Oooh, nice start! I really like this, well done! 10/10

Reviewer: heartachin4harry
Date: 01/16/07 22:19
Chapter: Chapter Four

I like this chapter! I love the swimming part, very nice. The last comment made by Sirius mde me laugh so hard! I know, I'm a dork. Oh well! Update soon!

Reviewer: NeLLyRaE
Date: 01/16/07 21:29
Chapter: Chapter Four

Good chapter! Please update quickly!

Reviewer: Padfoot101
Date: 01/16/07 21:07
Chapter: Chapter Four

the end was really funny.

i like where this story is going. its not like most lily/james fics.

Reviewer: oceanianow
Date: 01/16/07 20:56
Chapter: Chapter Four

I really like this story. When are you going to update next? Anyway, I hope you continue this soon!

Author's Response: I'll try to update in around a week... I've already started the next chapter. But reviews make me want to write more! Thanks!

Reviewer: DracoLuva4684
Date: 01/16/07 20:04
Chapter: Chapter Four

Haha!
I loved that last line!
This is such a cute story!
I LOVE it!
Keep it up and update soon!

Author's Response: Yeah, I wasn't sure about the last line, because I'm not sure if absolutely everyone that read this would know who Noah was... But I figured the majority would, and if they didn't, it wouldn't me that hard to look up. Thanks!

Reviewer: ariya
Date: 01/16/07 20:00
Chapter: Chapter Four

hahah. loved the last line. cant wait for another update =]]]

Reviewer: TheHighMooster
Date: 01/16/07 19:53
Chapter: Chapter Four

Lol! Nice way to end a chapter. UPDATE!!!!

Reviewer: spazticapple
Date: 01/16/07 18:24
Chapter: Chapter Four

haha, plz keep going! its really great!

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