Ahh! such a great story!!!! you did a really great job! my only comment is i think you mixed up some of the character's names a couple of times. other than that it was fantastic!!!!!! one of my favorites. when will it be updated???
Author's Response: Who's name's did I mess up? Please show examples so I can fix them :] I've already started on the next chapter!
ooooo, where wil they go?! I can't wait to find out, so update!!!!
haha! i jst realized that i was your hundredth reviewer! sweet!
awww thats cute! i like how ther still kind of shy and tentative around each other. its sweet :) great chapter the writing is awsome! im so glad kathleen is okay though! UPDATE!!!!!!
i love this story but i dont love cliff hangers! the writing and the story are amazing pleas update soon! :)
No, no, no! How can you leave us hanging like that??? This fic is so good you HAVE to update soon or else I will go crazy. Pleeaasseee update soon, this story is just too amazing! Seriously, it rocks. Keep on rocking, please.
Begging for an update I loved it!!
what the heck was written on the paper??
and whos the figure??
update soooonn.
good story btw. =)
Oooh, dun dun duuun! Shouldn't Remus have been wearing the Invisibility Cloak, though, if he looked so bad? At least one of them should have been wearing it...
Your story has some pretty big spaces in between the paragraphs. Is it meant to be like that? Because it messes up the flow a little. It's odd, since I have a friend whose story was rejected on the grounds that the spaces in it were too big...
Oooh, dun dun duuun! Shouldn't Remus have been wearing the Invisibility Cloak, though, if he looked so bad? At least one of them should have been wearing it...
Your story has some pretty big spaces in between the paragraphs. Is it meant to be like that? Because it messes up the flow a little. It's odd, since I have a friend whose story was rejected on the grounds that the spaces in it were too big...
Author's Response: Remus didn't think anyone would be up to see him that early, and he could always just make an excuse if he ran into someone. He just had trouble lying to Lily. Also, the other Marauders needed the cloak the most to get back because what they had been doing was illegal. Yeah, it made big spaces when I uploaded it from the file. Now I just copy and paste, and in later chapters the gaps between paragraphs aren't as big. Thanks for reviewing!
Lmao! That last comment by Sirius made me burst out laughing XD Thankfully there's no-one around or they'd know I've gone mad!
Ah! Lily, what the heck are you doing?! I love this chapter! I love Sirius, it's so sad. What happened to Kathleen?! UPdate update, update!!!! Please?
Is it Sirius? James? Remus? Who is it? Huh? Huh? Huh?
Great story, update soon!
:)
Very well written, too.
Is it James? Who's the figure? Update soon, please! Good chapter, btw! =)
--RP
