omg i love this chapter..this whole story is really well written. plz update soon!!
Author's Response: Thank you! I've already started Chapter 5, and that one should be a bit longer than Chapter 4.
Can't wait for it to be validated!
cutes tory, a litle bit of a slow start, but i still really like it!
This is good! Hm...swimming....Should be interesting. Update soon!
u r writing more right!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! u cnt just stop dere
Author's Response: Of course it's not done! =) There's still many more chapters. I'm thinking very roughly 20.
Awwww!! I love it!! Just started reading. It feels so real! Can't wat for an update!!
Ooooo! Both you (the author...who else) and this story is going into my favourites!
I love this story a lot! Keep it up! James is so cute when he flirts with Lily!
i really like this story. expect this end. would she seriously do that? but i figure its ur story so u'll make it work.
Author's Response: Well, Lily's starting to accept James's change, so she's not as uptight around him as she used to be. And if she never made any progress toward them, how would they ever get married? =)
can't wait for more
Great start!! Keep these chapters coming!! =) Update soon? 10/10 so far!! --RP
I wanna know what happens!
They're so cute!
I love how Lily is gradually forming a liking towards James and then she excepts his invite to go swimming and takes his Hand!
Awww, they're so cute. Loved this chapter. Can't wait for the next one!
Author's Response: Thank you! Chapter four will begin... tonight.
I want to read more!
James and Lily are my favourite couple!
I can't wait to see how this ends!
I love it so far!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm working on chapter three....
:D Another great chapter! I love your story so far and I'm really looking forward to the next chapter...and the one after that... 10/10
Very good first chapter! I love the way you portray Lily and James...I especially like how you started it with Lily still hating James. Anyways, I look forward to he rest of the story! 10/10
Author's Response: Thanks! Chapter 3 up soon...
Great!! I would love to read more!! ~Ginny~
Author's Response: Thanks! Chapter three should be up around the end of the week.
Author's Response: Thanks! Chapter three begins tonight!
Awwww. I love it. It's great. The characters are really how I picture them.
Author's Response: Thanks! Chapter three will be started today or tomorrow, probably.
Sorry 3rd Tiem i reviewd but this is soooo good
plz plz write more soon ;)
Author's Response: Haha... Thank you so much! It means a lot that people review... but three times! I'll work on it right now. :-D --XOXO Melody