Reviews For Taken
Reviewer: sweet4potter
Date: 11/14/06 19:02
Chapter: Taken

Awww! That was sooo cute. I think you summed up the feelings of a teenage girl VERY well. That trick was soo mean though, and it made me want to cry for Lily. But you made it all better in the end. James was so sweet. Again, like your other story, this was fantastic. Fresh and different. I love it! Brilliant story. I really can't wait for you to write more!

Reviewer: _Ivy_
Date: 10/25/06 10:29
Chapter: Taken

oo sweet but u made sirius seem so... cold. wat year is this in anyways?

Author's Response: Yeah, this story was written sometime ago before the sixth book came out, I believe... Maybe even the fifth book... I'm sorry for the confusion! As for Sirius, personally, I love him, but I've always had that part of me that has wondered about whether he's really this lovable character that the fans usually portray him as... :) This was just my little experiment. :) Yours truly, Amelia Bedelia

Reviewer: HermionePotter
Date: 10/23/06 17:41
Chapter: Taken

This seemed really AU... so I have a few questions... is this after Snapes worst memory? What year are they in?? -lol- sorry, but i gotta ask. other than that, I really liked it.

Author's Response: Sorry, I forgot to put an author's note on this story... I wrote it before OotP, I believe... I apologize for the confusion, but I hoped you liked the story either way! Yours truly, Amelia Bedelia

Reviewer: KASK
Date: 10/22/06 17:36
Chapter: Taken

I really liked it. It was very cute. I like how you portrait James -- very grown up! The only thing I wasn't fond of was Lily. I always pictured her (through OotP and Jo's information of her) to be popular and independent. In the story, she seems kind of desperate and not very liked by people. Jo said she was very smart and had a lot of friends. I can't see her not going to Hogsmeade because of not having friends or never getting asked out. I liked the story line though :)

Author's Response: I agree with you... To be completely honest, I wrote this before OotP, I think, but I still loved the story when I wrote it so I posted it... Thanks for your opinion, though! :D Yours truly, Amelia Bedelia

Reviewer: atkarid
Date: 10/22/06 16:22
Chapter: Taken

Nice story! I like how you have Lily all worked up, and then all these flashbacks. I think James was very in character, maybe a bit too mature, but nevertheless, nice.

And I love that last line. :)

Reviewer: Magical_Lily
Date: 10/22/06 15:30
Chapter: Taken

This Is Such A Good Story
I Bet It was Sirius

Reviewer: SimplyCharmed
Date: 10/22/06 15:13
Chapter: Taken

I really like the story, though I don't like Lily's personality much.

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