Reviews For Taken
Reviewer: siilly_bookworm_28
Date: 12/23/08 23:18
Chapter: Taken

Very cute! What year is this set in? Their 7th or 1st? Love the penname as well! Amelia Bedelia is one of my favorite childhood book characters!

Reviewer: lilyrox
Date: 07/13/08 14:06
Chapter: Taken

Hee Hee! Loved it.

Reviewer: Afifa
Date: 06/26/08 9:08
Chapter: Taken

Lovely! =D

Reviewer: Potterworm
Date: 06/16/08 14:18
Chapter: Taken

Wow. I like this, but I wish there was more. The ending seemed abrupt...

Reviewer: ginnyrulz13
Date: 02/25/08 14:37
Chapter: Taken

that was a good story, just everybody seemed kinda OOC.

Reviewer: REMi iS AWESOME
Date: 02/04/08 17:12
Chapter: Taken

Ah so sweet ususally wsoemthing that happens to me gettign stood up just change the name lily with the name remi change the name james to teh name teo and change the name siruis into the whole middleschool and youve got a remi teo story!!! Ah except well the happy ending usually teos friends do it to make a fool out of myself and teo laughts at it cause he hates me!! Ahh amazing one shot now i must read all of your other one shots!!

Reviewer: AllFairInLoveOrWar
Date: 12/22/07 16:35
Chapter: Taken

Lily had friends.I hate the stories where she doesn't.

Reviewer: baby b
Date: 11/28/07 15:56
Chapter: Taken

this was brilliant but i think you should continue it one so that we can see what James and Lily says to Sirius and what they do in hogsmeade.

Reviewer: hpfreak101
Date: 08/24/07 13:26
Chapter: Taken

I very much enjoyed this. Very well written.

Reviewer: abunnynamed_sirius
Date: 08/22/07 20:18
Chapter: Taken

Totally awsome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! But who sent her the letter?

Reviewer: koolio_jollymints
Date: 08/07/07 15:58
Chapter: Taken

Aww...This is so sweet! Great job!

Reviewer: flyingphoenix
Date: 06/06/07 20:12
Chapter: Taken

I really liked this! I felt so bad for Lily, but i guess everything turned out ok. I can't believe this doesn't have more reviews -it deserves them!

Reviewer: rowenaravenclaw1
Date: 05/18/07 20:34
Chapter: Taken

great! It is official. you must become a fav author

Reviewer: jenny b
Date: 01/31/07 2:47
Chapter: Taken

ooohhh! sequel! sequel! it was so good!

Reviewer: ellienellie111
Date: 01/19/07 18:30
Chapter: Taken

more!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: babekitty_92
Date: 12/02/06 7:09
Chapter: Taken

oooh! cute, well done, 10/10

Reviewer: hedwigandme
Date: 11/26/06 20:01
Chapter: Taken

IT'S GREAT you should really write some more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: hedwigandme
Date: 11/26/06 20:00
Chapter: Taken

IT'S GREAT you should really write some more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: LovelyxLena
Date: 11/20/06 23:59
Chapter: Taken

Oh and I just remembered who Amelia Bedelia is! I loved her! I had a book about her in second grade. She is the really clumsy one, that likes that one pie, right?

Reviewer: LovelyxLena
Date: 11/20/06 23:57
Chapter: Taken

Oh so, this is technically AU.

Honestly I hate how you portrayed the characters but now that I know when you wrote this it all makes more sense.

If I didn't already have my own images of the characters I have to say I loved this. All the emotions seemed so real. Especially when lily was stood up. I knew when she read the note that it was a prank. But the way you had her just waiting, with false-hope and switching back and fourth from present to past. Oh it was beautiful.

Author's Response: Yes, a bit AU... But I'm really glad that you told me the truth about the characters! (I love it when people can say exactly what they're thinking and not what they want others to hear!) Thank you SO much for the review! Yours truly, Amelia Bedelia

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