Reviewer: ILuvSirius01
Date: 07/03/07 21:55
Chapter: September 1st

That was soooo good! U have got to UPDATE soon!! I luved it! And I love James having a crush on that girl, you have GOT to UPDATE ppleasse! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I know I've said this a lot, but I'm going to try to have the third chapter up relatively soon (key word being relatively). I've been having major writer's block, but I'll try harder to work through it. :) ~Sammie

Reviewer: Queen_Lily
Date: 05/05/07 0:35
Chapter: September 1st

You need to update soon! This is a really good story you've got here!

Author's Response: Thanks :) I'm working on the third chapter, I've just been really busy and I've had major writer's block. ~Sammie

Reviewer: Pigwidgeon92
Date: 02/19/07 15:45
Chapter: September 1st

Awww this is soo cool! update soon please! your story is really good I'll be checking...

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm so flattered. :) Unfortunately, writers block has stricken me, so I might not have the next chapter up for a while, but I'll get it to you as soon as I can.

Reviewer: ILuvHP4Ev3r
Date: 02/16/07 9:30
Chapter: September 1st

ooh i like it!! update soon =)

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm having a bit of writer's block, but hopefully it'll be over soon and I'll get the next chapter up.

Reviewer: ILuvHP4Ev3r
Date: 02/16/07 9:24
Chapter: Sock Puppets and Crushes

very good first chapter, i like it

Author's Response: Thank you! :)

Reviewer: oceanianow
Date: 01/16/07 19:48
Chapter: September 1st

Oh my! I just realized that YOU wrote this! It's been on my favorites for a while now, and I keep chekcing it for updates. Speaking of which, when are you updating? Hopefully soon!

Author's Response: Haha, thanks! Unfortunately, I'm not very far into the third chapter, but hopefully I'll get it done soon....Trust me, you'll be one of the first to know when I update. :)

Reviewer: greeneyes
Date: 01/13/07 20:48
Chapter: Sock Puppets and Crushes

I liked it. It was humorous, original, and and enjoyable read.

I've never read a fic where James starts out liking a girl other than Lily. I mean, it's mentioned that he's dated other girls besides her during their Hogwarts years, but I've never read something like this before. I really like it. =]

The only thing I found questionable was James' behavoir near the end. I cannot picture him saying that to his father. Growing up in a wizarding family, James would know not to use magic of his own. But, perhaps it will mean something later on in the story...?

I'm excited in any event! Great job!!!!

Author's Response: Thank you! Ireally wanted to do something different, so I'm so glad you liked it!
About James' behavior near the end...Really, since when has James listened to any rules? ;) But really, you're 100% correct, and I'll try to fix that. But the fight with his dad will become somewhat important later.
Thanks so much for the reveiw and the constructive criticism!

Reviewer: Gin_Drinka
Date: 01/08/07 18:08
Chapter: September 1st

That's cool about Penny. I like Lily's friends they seem fun. And that prank was funny...but of course cruel. Well I like this story and I found it because you favorited my story, The Epic Tale of the Hogwarts Food-fight. Lol, glad you did!

Author's Response: Thankies! I'm glad I did too. Honestly, that story is so good and I can't wait to read more of it. :)

Reviewer: Gin_Drinka
Date: 01/08/07 17:44
Chapter: Sock Puppets and Crushes

I think it's great. I loved that whole story with Melinda. It was adorable! I can just imagine James trying to show off like that, so cute. Can't wait for more. Oh wait...I can read it now...silly me!

Reviewer: oceanianow
Date: 01/08/07 15:56
Chapter: September 1st

Can I say that I can't wait for the next chapter? I thought that bit about James and Sirius was just down right mean, especially because they were pretending to befriend Lily. Humph. Anyway, I hope you update soon!

Author's Response: Haha, sorry about that! But Lily can't just hate them for no reason, y'know?

Reviewer: Banana Shroogle
Date: 01/07/07 17:45
Chapter: September 1st

And the bucket over door prank wasn't amaturish. It was unexpected.

And I'm guessing those C.R.a.Bs are going to turn into their enemies, or just boy obsessed girls, or just become plain annoying. If that's possible.

Author's Response: Nice to know :) Yupp, they're definitely going to play some sort of role in later chapters!

Reviewer: Banana Shroogle
Date: 01/07/07 17:39
Chapter: September 1st

Awsome start!

Well, awsome story, more like.

Does James think Lily is incredibly pretty from the start, or does he like her after she yells at him a couple of times? :D

Author's Response: Haha, thanks! Hmm, I hadn't thought of that. :D I guess you'll see in the third chapter....

Reviewer: Her_mi_o_ne 16
Date: 01/07/07 12:38
Chapter: September 1st

This is a very good start! I generally don't like J/L fics that begin in the first year, but this one is very good! I really liked how you portray James. I'll keep an eye out for chapter three . . .

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad you like it. :)

Reviewer: heartachin4harry
Date: 01/07/07 11:57
Chapter: September 1st

Your story is really good1 I like it a lot! Update soon!

Reviewer: heartachin4harry
Date: 01/07/07 11:57
Chapter: September 1st

Your story is really good1 I like it a lot! Update soon!

Reviewer: heartachin4harry
Date: 01/07/07 11:57
Chapter: September 1st

Your story is really good1 I like it a lot! Update soon!

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm writing the third chapter now, so I'll update asap.

Reviewer: pureevil
Date: 01/07/07 9:04
Chapter: September 1st

i think i didn't already review this 1. its way kwl. i like the prank. It's so sirius-James like. lol update!!

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm currently writing the third chapter, so I'll update as soon as possible.

Reviewer: pureevil
Date: 01/07/07 9:03
Chapter: Sock Puppets and Crushes

Wow, that was funny lol

Author's Response: Thanks :)

Reviewer: nikki_harry
Date: 01/07/07 1:20
Chapter: Sock Puppets and Crushes


Author's Response: Haha, thanks!

Reviewer: loony_lily
Date: 01/06/07 18:28
Chapter: September 1st

Love it so far! update soon please!

Author's Response: Thanks! I''m currently working on the third chappie, and I'll have it up as soon as possible.

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