Reviews For The Edge
Reviewer: ChaChia
Date: 12/29/07 7:19
Chapter: one-shot

You are a terrific writter.

Reviewer: Sileny
Date: 10/27/06 17:19
Chapter: one-shot

Wow, you are a great author. You have a wonderful way of potraying the characters, making them come to life. Your story is sad, but it makes you think.
Great Story, write more please!

Reviewer: EtherealElation
Date: 10/27/06 1:33
Chapter: one-shot

Oh... Wow.

This is awsome. Completely... Spectacular. I've never seen one like it - amazing writing, amazing emotion drawn up into this masterpiece that is just so powerful... It took my breath away.

I loved this part... Very striking.
Harry and Ron are not here today. Neither is Ginny, nor Neville, nor Ernie, nor Luna, nor so many others. Why? Because we won. We won the war. But they arenít here to celebrate. Why? Because itís only for the living. Those who didnít survive canít celebrate their survival.
It's so sad, and yet so attractive... And so very true.

Wonderful work... I hope to see more of this type! Commendable, certainly. Bravissima!


Author's Response: Thanks for your very kind words. I'm glad you liked it. :) I tried to pass on, to express the feeling of utter desperation, loss, and grief, but at the same time show that you can't really understand it unless you have felt it. Yes, it is rather sad, but... I don't know... tragedies always seem much more emotional than happy stories, and while happy stories can be sweet and wonderful, I always find sad endings more beautiful & powerful than happy ones.

Reviewer: Crazy Rat
Date: 10/26/06 23:16
Chapter: one-shot

aww, so sad. i can really feel her pain. I feel kinda stupid, but why exactly is she going to drag malfoy down with her? anyways, very good.

Author's Response: I think that mostly because she is afraid that he will try to save her, and she does not want to be saved. Thanks for the praise, I'm glad you liked it! :)

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