You are a terrific writter.

Oh... Wow.

This is awsome. Completely... Spectacular. I've never seen one like it - amazing writing, amazing emotion drawn up into this masterpiece that is just so powerful... It took my breath away.

I loved this part... Very striking.
Harry and Ron are not here today. Neither is Ginny, nor Neville, nor Ernie, nor Luna, nor so many others. Why? Because we won. We won the war. But they aren’t here to celebrate. Why? Because it’s only for the living. Those who didn’t survive can’t celebrate their survival. It's so sad, and yet so attractive... And so very true.

Wonderful work... I hope to see more of this type! Commendable, certainly. Bravissima!

~Juliet

Author's Response: Thanks for your very kind words. I'm glad you liked it. :) I tried to pass on, to express the feeling of utter desperation, loss, and grief, but at the same time show that you can't really understand it unless you have felt it. Yes, it is rather sad, but... I don't know... tragedies always seem much more emotional than happy stories, and while happy stories can be sweet and wonderful, I always find sad endings more beautiful & powerful than happy ones.