Excellent form. The rhyme and meter are smooth and effortless. And, it really does tie with themes from Macbeth like you said.
That was so cruel and evil and totally Bella. I'd give you top marks for characterization and nearly as much for the poetry itself. Indeed a job very well done.=Sammy
this is fantastic . . . your poem made Bellatrix's character seem more multi-dimensional to me; i'll never be able to see her the same way again!
This story is sort of dark... that makes it really good! I like your imagery... it is really descriptive! :) Great job!
Author's Response: You've discovered my fics. :) Thank you so much.
The way the poem is written it gives me the slightly unbalanced feeling of Bellatrix's mind. The use of exclamation marks and hyphens excentuate her craziness. I particularily enjoyed the image of the hate being poured into her. She's quite the evil one, isn't she?
Author's Response: Ooh, thank you for reviewing! Yes, Bellatrix is definitely evil, I think she is totally and completely evil and that she is willing to give herself up to it. I'm glad you liked it! Congratulations on being a runner-up in the QsQ awards - I read A Ghost Story and it was very good. Thank you!
Wow! This is really good! Fantastic imagery... :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! This is my favourite poem I wrote and posted. I'm so happy the imagery was fantastic. I was reading Shakespeare before I wrote this, can you tell? :P Hehehe. Thank you.
Wh-hoo! First reviewer. Sorry. Great poem, very dark and scary. Good job!
Author's Response: First review response! No problem. Thank you so much. It's dark and scary, that's perfect.