Reviews For Direst Cruelty
Reviewer: Stubbornly_appeared
Date: 01/07/08 0:14
Chapter: Direst Cruelty

Excellent form. The rhyme and meter are smooth and effortless. And, it really does tie with themes from Macbeth like you said.

Reviewer: MissyQuill
Date: 01/01/08 2:35
Chapter: Direst Cruelty

That was so cruel and evil and totally Bella. I'd give you top marks for characterization and nearly as much for the poetry itself. Indeed a job very well done.=Sammy

Reviewer: liquid_silver
Date: 04/14/07 11:42
Chapter: Direst Cruelty

this is fantastic . . . your poem made Bellatrix's character seem more multi-dimensional to me; i'll never be able to see her the same way again!

Reviewer: AKA294
Date: 11/19/06 11:49
Chapter: Direst Cruelty

This story is sort of dark... that makes it really good! I like your imagery... it is really descriptive! :) Great job!

Author's Response: You've discovered my fics. :) Thank you so much.

Reviewer: mcclure_512
Date: 11/03/06 13:10
Chapter: Direst Cruelty

The way the poem is written it gives me the slightly unbalanced feeling of Bellatrix's mind. The use of exclamation marks and hyphens excentuate her craziness. I particularily enjoyed the image of the hate being poured into her. She's quite the evil one, isn't she?

Author's Response: Ooh, thank you for reviewing! Yes, Bellatrix is definitely evil, I think she is totally and completely evil and that she is willing to give herself up to it. I'm glad you liked it! Congratulations on being a runner-up in the QsQ awards - I read A Ghost Story and it was very good. Thank you!

Reviewer: crazy_purple_hp_freak
Date: 10/25/06 12:28
Chapter: Direst Cruelty

Wow! This is really good! Fantastic imagery... :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much! This is my favourite poem I wrote and posted. I'm so happy the imagery was fantastic. I was reading Shakespeare before I wrote this, can you tell? :P Hehehe. Thank you.

Reviewer: Dragon_Warrior
Date: 10/22/06 8:42
Chapter: Direst Cruelty

Wh-hoo! First reviewer. Sorry. Great poem, very dark and scary. Good job!

Author's Response: First review response! No problem. Thank you so much. It's dark and scary, that's perfect.

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