Reviews For Broken Pieces
Reviewer: Binka Fudge
Date: 03/01/08 17:40
Chapter: 5 Glass Balls

I really liked this, and even though it appears you won't be updating, there's no reason this couldn't be a one shot to show Hermione finally moving on. The five balls was a nice touch too. Great fic.

Reviewer: Boags
Date: 11/01/06 4:06
Chapter: 5 Glass Balls

The glass balls are a wonderful idea - in fact they sum things up rather well. I like Neville being so successful and taking a risk. Poor Hermoine, she always seems to be lacking in the female friend department....don't suppose you could find her a really good friend somewhere in her travels? Keep going with this story as it's really interesting!!!

Author's Response: Nevillie I think will grow to be someone people can rely on and will really flourish as he gets older and lose that shy ness that we had. I think we saw some of it coming through in the last two books. And yes, poor Hermione. Now Ginny isn't well she is rather lacking in the female friend department. That's actually a good idea of yours, finding someone on her travels. I hadn't really thought about it. Cheers for the review, I appreciate them all :)

Reviewer: flyingarrow
Date: 10/31/06 9:39
Chapter: 5 Glass Balls

this is a really good start to the story and i would love to see where it is heading so please carry on

Author's Response: I'll definatly be carrying on whenever I can find time in RL dammit :) Thanks for taking the time to review!

Reviewer: Natloy_Tee
Date: 10/28/06 13:24
Chapter: 5 Glass Balls

amazing, please please please hurry and update lol, the 5 glass balls are such a good idea, the story line has a strong positive direction amazing

Author's Response: Wow, Thanks. Erm I'm a bit busy with another story of mine over on that I tried to post here but the mods wouldnt allow. Ah well, thanks for your time and a great review :)

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