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Reviews For Mourning

Name: Skewper (Signed) · Date: 01/04/07 19:16 · For: Mourning
*sniffles* That was sad..... :(


Name: Potter_freak0515 (Signed) · Date: 11/10/06 10:24 · For: Mourning
Oh! Great fic! I feel like crying!

Author's Response: Umm. Is that good that you feel like crying?? I'm glad you liked it.


Name: qwerty83 (Signed) · Date: 10/29/06 3:39 · For: Mourning
I just reviewed but I forgot to say I really liked the subtlety of the description of Remus and Sirius' relationship. Because although nothing overt was said, and there was no mention of them actually being together, it leaves you guessing.

Author's Response: This was a really nice positive review, and I want you to know that I liked it just as much the second time. ;) You can never have too many nice reviews.


Name: qwerty83 (Signed) · Date: 10/29/06 3:39 · For: Mourning
I just reviewed but I forgot to say I really liked the subtlety of the description of Remus and Sirius' relationship. Because although nothing overt was said, and there was no mention of them actually being together, it leaves you guessing.

Author's Response: Thank you!!!!!! I really appreciate your lovely response! Is there anything you think could do better?


Name: qwerty83 (Signed) · Date: 10/29/06 3:34 · For: Mourning
Oh no poor poor Remus, I feel so sorry for him. How sad....


Name: _Dumbledores Girl_ (Anonymous) · Date: 10/25/06 13:05 · For: Mourning
I saw that no one had reviewed this, so i gave it a shot.
This didn't seem particulary slashy slash, maybe cuz one of the ppl is dead i dunno...

some suggestions... all that stuff about James and Lily didn't seem at all relevant to the plot, you should have put more in about Lupin's feelings for Sirius. it seemed more of a James/Lily fic, with a R/S backround. also, to make this more believable, you needed to put in more detail, I couldn't really picture the setting. also, I think Lupin should be a leeetle more upset, his best mate and love just died right? but you did many things well, you made the account of James and Lily's dating very realistic, and you made Jame's reaction to Sirius very poignant and touching. also, you had a very powerful ending, it really moved me. all in all, i think it was a very good attempt for your first ever fan fic, and you should definately keep writing! Greatomundo jobina!

Author's Response: Thanks! I wasn't sure what qualified as slash, and I sort of thought that if I didn't warn ppl 200 reviews would pop up that were like "eww, slash!" Thanks a lot for all your great feedback!


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