Although I adored the exchange between Ron and Hermione, and the idea of Hogwarts multiculturalism, I felt that your plot was too rushed. I understand that sometimes, in a humor fic, an author finds it necessary to hurry along a series of random events, however, I think your end punchline, so to speak, about the oil would have been more potent were you to slow the story's pace slightly, as to keep readers from scratching their heads in confusion.
Hope I helped!
Ummm...that was interesting.
lol...it was funny!
i luv the whole star wars-voldemort thing
and its cool how u gave a shout out to the people who celebrate Hanukah.
Ummm...that was interesting.
lol...it was funny!
i luv the whole star wars-voldemort thing
and its cool how u gave a shout out to the people who celebrate Hanukah.
Very Very very funny! I loved it! The whole thing about voldemort being his father made me doubleover in laughter! Love it!
that was so hilarious! the easy button had me in stiches!!!!! and I'm not Jewish, but all my friends are so it made it SO funy! i lurve you!
HAHAHAHA
I saw a suggestion for a pesach sequel...I second the notion! Your writing shows a good sense of humor.
The only thing I would suggest is maybe explaining what it means to spin a gimmel in dreidel...I think that would confuse most people who aren't Jewish.
Nice : )
Author's Response: Good point. Okay guys, listen up. I won't explain the entire dreidel game, but every Hebrew letter has a certain value, and gimmel is the highest.
uhh.. Voldemort's arrival was too quick. 6/10
That was really good!! It's really awesome!!!!! I love it!!!!!!!!! Exclamation points!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
-Susan!!!!!!!!!!!!
hehehe.. maybe you should elaborate on this one and make a sequel??? Pesach at Hogarts??
hehehe.. maybe you should elaborate on this one and make a sequel??? Pesach at Hogarts??
This is a GREAT story! Probably the best holiday-humor fic I've read, and that's saying a lot. This one's going on my favorites list!
Author's Response: Yay, I'm a favorite! You know, it's odd. I spend months on epic fics that get no response (which is why they're not here) and a fic I dash off during lunch has such rave reviews! Ah, well. I'm not complaining!
Laughing so hard it hurt my stomach. I adored the easy button. I worked in an office over the summer and one of the people I work with had one, I was absolutely facsinated with it.
I cracked up when I read it. And, Draco, oh how in character that one sentence but him in.
I can't wait to see Passover, huh, I bet Ron want like not being able to eat all of his different kinds of foods.
Yea!!! I'm half Jewish and didn't think EVERYONE at Hogwarts celibrated Christmas!
Yea!!! I'm half Jewish and didn't think EVERYONE at Hogwarts celibrated Christmas!
I can't even believe how freaking hilarious this story was! I have an easy button too!! Woot, and GOOOO STAR WARS, YAY, wow, what a hoot, I love this so totally random story...
Author's Response: If you like SW, then see my fanfic 'Harry vs. Anakin: Battle of the Chosen Ones.' Online now at harrypotterfanfiction.com and fanfiction.net.
thanks for writing this. I needed it.
as a jewish hp fan, i say: bravo :)
Author's Response: Boy, this story seems to have drawn in every Jewish fan there is!
That's pretty awesome. Are you Jewish? I'm not, but I still got the references, and I especially liked the demise of Voldemort... and the easy button! The easy button alone had me in stitches.
(Oh yeah... and Draco's evil dreidel skills were amazing.)
Author's Response: Wow, my easy button reference is pretty popular! And yes, I'm Jewish.
I am jewish and loved it!!!! i wish series were back, id like to see the easter/ passover
Author's Response: I'm still gonna do the Easter/Passover, don't worry.
