Reviews For Prying Eyes
Reviewer: XhayleeXblackX
Date: 08/25/07 10:43
Chapter: Prying Eye's

This was really good. I liked how you showed Harry's thoughts on everyone talking about him, and his reaction to her death. It was sublte yet powerful. Good job, Haylee

Author's Response: thanks haylee!

Reviewer: greeneyes
Date: 12/27/06 20:40
Chapter: Prying Eye's

Hmm, I could've sworn I reviewed this a long time ago. Well, I'm quite sorry I didn't.

This is beautiful. It's very Harry, if he was the poetic kind. =]

I can understand what he feels [[even if I can't relate]]. All his life, he's been asked questions about long lost loved ones, and I think your poem expresses his anger and frustration perfectly.

Great job, Roop!

Author's Response: It's all right! Thank-you for the review!

Reviewer: NikkiSue
Date: 12/24/06 1:21
Chapter: Prying Eye's

Ooooh... That was fascinating. I like how the bitterness he was feeling after her death really shows in the poem. He already lost Sirius and slowly moved past that the best he could. I can only imagine the grief he would be keeping inside after losing the girl he cared about. I think is a very accurate reaction that he would have. Nicely done!

Author's Response: Thank-you!

Reviewer: mgle_teacher
Date: 11/26/06 15:16
Chapter: Prying Eye's

I'm not keen on poems - mostly because of the rhyming - never got it.

But I like your poem about Harry. It's angsty and sounds like Harry, that's for sure.
Good work!

Happy Holidays,
The Order of Ravenclaw House Elves

Author's Response: Yep, thats the mood I was trying to create! Thank-you for the review! *Still doesn't know what "The Order of Ravenclaw House Elves" means...

Reviewer: Wand_Waver2006
Date: 11/24/06 8:15
Chapter: Prying Eye's

Oh! *sniff* That made me so sad to read...It was almost like I felt Harry's pain while I read it. But, even though it's sad, it's very good, and besides, I'm due for payment for the loverly banner you made me. ^-^ I give it two thumb's up!

The Order of Ravenclaw House Elves

Author's Response: Thank-you for the review, Star! Now, what is "The Order of The Ravenclaw House-Elves?" We've been talking about it in the Slytherin common room you know, wondering...

Reviewer: Winged Artemis
Date: 11/07/06 11:58
Chapter: Prying Eye's

Wow! I really really liked this! It's very well-written! You should get some more stories up, you have a great writing style. :) -Hannah :)

Author's Response: Thank-you! I'm glad you thought it was well written, I have a plot bunny in my head at the moment and Iv'e got out the first few sentences, I just cant seem to figure out what to write next... I guess I'll just have to either go over to skelo-grow to help myself flesh it out, or just wait till inspirations hits.... Anyways, thank you for the review you guys always make my day~ ~Roop

Reviewer: mugglegurl
Date: 11/01/06 20:25
Chapter: Prying Eye's

'Twas a very sad, beautiful poem. I'm not very great at analysizing poetry, so I probably can't give you any deep advice, but I'll just say that they poem was very clear and very well written.

Author's Response: Thank you very much!

Reviewer: some_kinda_superstar
Date: 10/25/06 5:19
Chapter: Prying Eye's

Absolutely beautiful poem. It was really believeable, I can imagine Harry feeling that way. Very sad, it made me want to cry. Well done!

Author's Response: Thank you~ I'm reaaaally happy you liked it! ~Roop ^_^

Reviewer: lady magician
Date: 10/23/06 10:26
Chapter: Prying Eye's

awh great, really nice..i love it..its so sad and harry-ish...10/10

Author's Response: Aww,thanks, I'm glad you liked it! <33

Reviewer: urbanmate_wv
Date: 10/22/06 20:18
Chapter: Prying Eye's

Nicely written. I would love to read more from you!

Author's Response: Thankyou! I have 2 WIP's I'm working on at the moment so you will see more of me, hopefully soon!

Reviewer: Ginny Weasley Potter
Date: 10/22/06 13:12
Chapter: Prying Eye's

Hey, nice poem. Its really touching, actually.

I think I had forgotten to mention all these compliments when I had critiqued your poem. Yes, I had actually critiqued this one in the forum, as I had not seen the Half Blood Prince's post. I don't think you saw my critique, anyway. Well, I'm sorry for putting up that critique without seeing the rest of the posts properly.

Once again, a very well written poem!


Author's Response: Oh really you did? I'm sorry, I've been kinda out of it for a while but I'm here now. Thanks for the compliments, I'll go check out your critique now :D

Reviewer: crazy_purple_hp_freak
Date: 10/20/06 12:20
Chapter: Prying Eye's

I really like this poem Roop! :D
You've really hit the nail of the head as far as Harry's feelings go. Both his sense of loss and anger are coupled well together in this poem, and I really like the imagery, especially at the end.

I hope we'll be seeing more of you on here! :p

Author's Response: Thanks for the compliments! I was tring to make sure I portaryed his feelings just right and I think I suceeded :) Thankyou!

Reviewer: Beautiful_soul2006
Date: 10/20/06 11:25
Chapter: Prying Eye's

Just beautiful, I loved it.
5 stars=)


Author's Response: Double Review! *woot* :D

Reviewer: Beautiful_soul2006
Date: 10/20/06 11:24
Chapter: Prying Eye's

Just Beautiful. I loved it.
5 stars =)

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for reviewing :)

Reviewer: EtherealElation
Date: 10/19/06 19:22
Chapter: Prying Eye's

Oh... Yes, this is truely the Harry we all know and love. Great poem - you really absorbed all Harry's emotions very well indeed. I loved this part:

How can I move on, when you donít let me forget?

It is a beautiful work. Brava!


Author's Response: Thankyou soooo much! All of you guys that reviewed just made my day. Thanks soooo much, you dont know what this means to me~

Reviewer: Sly Severus
Date: 10/19/06 14:06
Chapter: Prying Eye's

Hey Roop!

Poor Harry. I really liked your poem. I think you nailed his feelings pretty good. If he were in that situation he would probably want to be left alone.

Author's Response: Hi Elle, I'm glad you liked it, and thanks!

Reviewer: Sentinelity
Date: 10/19/06 14:01
Chapter: Prying Eye's

Second to review!
I love your poem Roop, these themes are one of my favorites~


Author's Response: Yay~ I'm glad you like it, im estatic right now! So glad I finally have somthing up!

Reviewer: unicorngirl22
Date: 10/19/06 10:31
Chapter: Prying Eye's

Great poem.

Author's Response: Thanks!

You must login (register) to review.
Find out everything you need to know about the site right here.

We have stories and authors in this archive.


Choose Theme:
Severus's Prince by DestinyMoonStar Professors
What does Severus Snape do when a one night stand turns into a baby boy? ...
The Youngest Death Eaters: Year III by DestinyMoonStar 6th-7th Years
Year 3 A year of hard choices and tough talks: Destiny learns about...
Allegiance by ToBeOrNotToBeAGryffindor 6th-7th Years
During his final year at Hogwarts, Draco Malfoy had few illusions about where...
The Pretender by littlebird Professors
She feels the familiar pang of disappointment that they've never been better...
A Light in the Gap by WeasleyMom 3rd-5th Years
When Harry woke that first morning in Grimmauld Place, he wondered if Ron and...
Tapestry by Equinox Chick 1st-2nd Years
As Walburga Black stitches, Sirius rebels. Two poems written about the infamous...
The Weird Sisters - B-Sides and Rarities, Vol. 2 by ToBeOrNotToBeAGryffindor 1st-2nd Years
The Weird Sisters are back for an encore. Ten more tracks from your MNFF authors.