Reviews For Prying Eyes
Reviewer: XhayleeXblackX
Date: 08/25/07 10:43
Chapter: Prying Eye's

This was really good. I liked how you showed Harry's thoughts on everyone talking about him, and his reaction to her death. It was sublte yet powerful. Good job, Haylee

Author's Response: thanks haylee!

Reviewer: greeneyes
Date: 12/27/06 20:40
Chapter: Prying Eye's

Hmm, I could've sworn I reviewed this a long time ago. Well, I'm quite sorry I didn't.

This is beautiful. It's very Harry, if he was the poetic kind. =]

I can understand what he feels [[even if I can't relate]]. All his life, he's been asked questions about long lost loved ones, and I think your poem expresses his anger and frustration perfectly.

Great job, Roop!

Author's Response: It's all right! Thank-you for the review!

Reviewer: NikkiSue
Date: 12/24/06 1:21
Chapter: Prying Eye's

Ooooh... That was fascinating. I like how the bitterness he was feeling after her death really shows in the poem. He already lost Sirius and slowly moved past that the best he could. I can only imagine the grief he would be keeping inside after losing the girl he cared about. I think is a very accurate reaction that he would have. Nicely done!

Author's Response: Thank-you!

Reviewer: mgle_teacher
Date: 11/26/06 15:16
Chapter: Prying Eye's

I'm not keen on poems - mostly because of the rhyming - never got it.

But I like your poem about Harry. It's angsty and sounds like Harry, that's for sure.
Good work!

Happy Holidays,
The Order of Ravenclaw House Elves

Author's Response: Yep, thats the mood I was trying to create! Thank-you for the review! *Still doesn't know what "The Order of Ravenclaw House Elves" means...

Reviewer: Wand_Waver2006
Date: 11/24/06 8:15
Chapter: Prying Eye's

Oh! *sniff* That made me so sad to read...It was almost like I felt Harry's pain while I read it. But, even though it's sad, it's very good, and besides, I'm due for payment for the loverly banner you made me. ^-^ I give it two thumb's up!

The Order of Ravenclaw House Elves

Author's Response: Thank-you for the review, Star! Now, what is "The Order of The Ravenclaw House-Elves?" We've been talking about it in the Slytherin common room you know, wondering...

Reviewer: Winged Artemis
Date: 11/07/06 11:58
Chapter: Prying Eye's

Wow! I really really liked this! It's very well-written! You should get some more stories up, you have a great writing style. :) -Hannah :)

Author's Response: Thank-you! I'm glad you thought it was well written, I have a plot bunny in my head at the moment and Iv'e got out the first few sentences, I just cant seem to figure out what to write next... I guess I'll just have to either go over to skelo-grow to help myself flesh it out, or just wait till inspirations hits.... Anyways, thank you for the review you guys always make my day~ ~Roop

Reviewer: mugglegurl
Date: 11/01/06 20:25
Chapter: Prying Eye's

'Twas a very sad, beautiful poem. I'm not very great at analysizing poetry, so I probably can't give you any deep advice, but I'll just say that they poem was very clear and very well written.

Author's Response: Thank you very much!

Reviewer: some_kinda_superstar
Date: 10/25/06 5:19
Chapter: Prying Eye's

Absolutely beautiful poem. It was really believeable, I can imagine Harry feeling that way. Very sad, it made me want to cry. Well done!

Author's Response: Thank you~ I'm reaaaally happy you liked it! ~Roop ^_^

Reviewer: lady magician
Date: 10/23/06 10:26
Chapter: Prying Eye's

awh great, really nice..i love it..its so sad and harry-ish...10/10

Author's Response: Aww,thanks, I'm glad you liked it! <33

Reviewer: urbanmate_wv
Date: 10/22/06 20:18
Chapter: Prying Eye's

Nicely written. I would love to read more from you!

Author's Response: Thankyou! I have 2 WIP's I'm working on at the moment so you will see more of me, hopefully soon!

Reviewer: Ginny Weasley Potter
Date: 10/22/06 13:12
Chapter: Prying Eye's

Hey, nice poem. Its really touching, actually.

I think I had forgotten to mention all these compliments when I had critiqued your poem. Yes, I had actually critiqued this one in the forum, as I had not seen the Half Blood Prince's post. I don't think you saw my critique, anyway. Well, I'm sorry for putting up that critique without seeing the rest of the posts properly.

Once again, a very well written poem!


Author's Response: Oh really you did? I'm sorry, I've been kinda out of it for a while but I'm here now. Thanks for the compliments, I'll go check out your critique now :D

Reviewer: crazy_purple_hp_freak
Date: 10/20/06 12:20
Chapter: Prying Eye's

I really like this poem Roop! :D
You've really hit the nail of the head as far as Harry's feelings go. Both his sense of loss and anger are coupled well together in this poem, and I really like the imagery, especially at the end.

I hope we'll be seeing more of you on here! :p

Author's Response: Thanks for the compliments! I was tring to make sure I portaryed his feelings just right and I think I suceeded :) Thankyou!

Reviewer: Beautiful_soul2006
Date: 10/20/06 11:25
Chapter: Prying Eye's

Just beautiful, I loved it.
5 stars=)


Author's Response: Double Review! *woot* :D

Reviewer: Beautiful_soul2006
Date: 10/20/06 11:24
Chapter: Prying Eye's

Just Beautiful. I loved it.
5 stars =)

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for reviewing :)

Reviewer: EtherealElation
Date: 10/19/06 19:22
Chapter: Prying Eye's

Oh... Yes, this is truely the Harry we all know and love. Great poem - you really absorbed all Harry's emotions very well indeed. I loved this part:

How can I move on, when you donít let me forget?

It is a beautiful work. Brava!


Author's Response: Thankyou soooo much! All of you guys that reviewed just made my day. Thanks soooo much, you dont know what this means to me~

Reviewer: Sly Severus
Date: 10/19/06 14:06
Chapter: Prying Eye's

Hey Roop!

Poor Harry. I really liked your poem. I think you nailed his feelings pretty good. If he were in that situation he would probably want to be left alone.

Author's Response: Hi Elle, I'm glad you liked it, and thanks!

Reviewer: Sentinelity
Date: 10/19/06 14:01
Chapter: Prying Eye's

Second to review!
I love your poem Roop, these themes are one of my favorites~


Author's Response: Yay~ I'm glad you like it, im estatic right now! So glad I finally have somthing up!

Reviewer: unicorngirl22
Date: 10/19/06 10:31
Chapter: Prying Eye's

Great poem.

Author's Response: Thanks!

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