Reviews For An Unclear Past
Reviewer: pottergurl
Date: 11/04/06 14:37
Chapter: Chapter One - Returning Home

you killed off ron!!!!!!!!!!!! awwww no way harry better get better or this will be a very sad story. no matter who you kill though this is still an awsome story keep up the great work and update fast!!=)


Author's Response: all i can say to you is: wait and see and read the summary. :) Ron's not dead...but you're not supposed to know that. and thanks so so much!

Reviewer: nuw255
Date: 11/02/06 16:17
Chapter: Chapter One - Returning Home

Just wanted to say I'm liking your story so far. I think it's well-written, and I agree with everyone else that it's just so... SAD right now. I'm glad to hear that things will get fluffy later on.

Please update soon; we HAVE to know what happens. And I'm really interested to see how you bring Harry back from the brink of death and Ron back to life. You ARE going to, right? :D

Author's Response: Kill Harry and Ron? ::passes out:: In your dreams, my friend! Haha. Yeah, they'll be back...Just wait and see. I'm going slow with Chapter Two because I'm writing two other fics at the same time. But thanks for the review, and I might just go and work on that now.... ;-)

Reviewer: Anya_Jenkins
Date: 10/31/06 14:38
Chapter: Chapter One - Returning Home

You total tease!!

I like it! :D

Author's Response: That's what i was aiming for. Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: Anya_Jenkins
Date: 10/31/06 7:38
Chapter: Chapter One - Returning Home

I don't think Hermione and Ginny are OOC - Ginny always had a firey temper and Hermione was always much more docile unless she was bickering with Ron.

Even if they're even slightly out of character their husbands have just died, its completely understandable.

You've got me all choked up, and I'm dying to know what happened next. And I'm DYING to know where they were that they didn't tell Molly where they were going or what they did to get Ron and Harry killed when they're untouched...

Surely this can't be the final fight against Voldemort? I've gotten the impression that they're a lot older than the canon characters, I'd say around 26 or 27.

Anyway, MORE!!

Author's Response: So glad you liked it. I agree, their OOC-ness is acceptable, I just feel bad. It's sort of the final Voldie-fight - of course, there will be more Death Eaters trying to bring Voldemort back, but thiswas the ultimate blow to Tom Riddle. In chapters 3-5, things will get all unfoggy and it will really start flowing. From what I've planned, #4 is when the major plot kicks in, but I shall say no more! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Sileny
Date: 10/29/06 23:29
Chapter: Chapter One - Returning Home

I must say you are a very great writer even though your story is so sad. I hope things get slightly happier as they go along. Well, update soon!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! Things are going to get happier. My sister was reading this, and at the end of this chapter she was just like, "That was so sad." I haven't actually started #3 yet, but I've got a pretty good view of what's happening. #4 is when it gets all fluffy. Thanks for your review! -Hannah

Author's Response: Thanks so much! Things are going to get happier. My sister was reading this, and at the end of this chapter she was just like, "That was so sad." I haven't actually started #3 yet, but I've got a pretty good view of what's happening. #4 is when it gets all fluffy. Thanks for your review! -Hannah

Reviewer: Sileny
Date: 10/29/06 23:29
Chapter: Chapter One - Returning Home

I must say you are a very great writer even though your story is so sad. I hope things get slightly happier as they go along. Well, update soon!

Author's Response: wait....double post?

Reviewer: KitKat517
Date: 10/28/06 21:16
Chapter: Prologue - Inside St. Mungo's

Very good. I saw that the first chapter is waiting on the mods approval and I am looking forward to reading it. I checked the HP Lexicon and Ginny's eyes are brown not blue so you might want to go back and change that. Despite that, I enjoyed reading the prologue and am patiently waiting for chapter one to be approved. Keep up the good work!
~KitKat

Author's Response: Thank you!

Author's Response: Oh, and I'm changing the eye color! Hope you like #2!

Reviewer: pheonixflame
Date: 10/27/06 16:02
Chapter: Prologue - Inside St. Mungo's

Oooh so far, it's great!
It's quite vague... who's the guy? Harry possibly?
Can't wait for more!! =]

Author's Response: double post!

Reviewer: pheonixflame
Date: 10/27/06 16:02
Chapter: Prologue - Inside St. Mungo's

Oooh so far, it's great!
It's quite vague... who's the guy? Harry possibly?
Can't wait for more!! =]

Author's Response: thanks so much! uhm, it's actually ron, but it would apply to harry, too. chapter one is in the queue, so many questions will be answered then. :)

Reviewer: lunalovegood97
Date: 10/23/06 15:28
Chapter: Prologue - Inside St. Mungo's

Please Update soon1

Author's Response: i'll try! I'm pretty busy, but I've been working on it! It should be in the queue by Friday.

Reviewer: shadowmagus
Date: 10/23/06 11:54
Chapter: Prologue - Inside St. Mungo's

Just FYI but Ginny has brown eyes, as described in the books. Ron is the Weasley with blue eyes.

Author's Response: oh! thanks so much! i had no idea. hehe.

Reviewer: Peppermint123
Date: 10/23/06 6:48
Chapter: Prologue - Inside St. Mungo's

Oh, that is so sad! Please update!!

Author's Response: Glad you liked it! Haha. I'll try to update soon - I had nearly forgotten about this so when I got an email saying it was accepted I sighed. I'm ferociously trying to think of the first chapter. I'm pretty sure of what's going to happen. Thanks so much for you review, too! Positive feedback makes me get all fluttery and want to write more!!! -Hannah

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