Reviews For An Unclear Past
Reviewer: pottergurl
Date: 12/08/06 16:47
Chapter: Chapter Three - Dreams and Reality

WOW i so tatally love this chap wow draco good nice take nice twist ne way it was cool to see what happened to make them this way ya harry and ron woke up that is awsome too bad no one was there i love this story update fast

Author's Response: haha. thanks so much!

Reviewer: Princess_Nagini
Date: 12/08/06 14:15
Chapter: Chapter Three - Dreams and Reality

Wooo!
Sorry but Draco is keeewel
Anyway very good chappie, update soon!
Princess_Nagini xxx

Author's Response: No need to be sorry - I wanted Draco to be "keeewel", lol. And thank you for all your loverly reviews!

Reviewer: Princess_Nagini
Date: 12/08/06 14:10
Chapter: Chapter Two - Emotions

*sniff*
Too sad!
But good. Very good.
Princess_Nagini

Author's Response: Awwww. Thanks!

Reviewer: Princess_Nagini
Date: 12/08/06 14:04
Chapter: Prologue - Inside St. Mungo's

Wow!
Very good, and very well done.
I like how you have to guess the characters, and there's some brilliant description in there!
Princess_Nagini xxx

Author's Response: Thanks so much! Glad you liked it.

Reviewer: nuw255
Date: 12/08/06 11:49
Chapter: Chapter Three - Dreams and Reality

Yay! They're alive! Well, now we know what happened (more or less, anyway). I'm interested to see what happens next.

Author's Response: Oh, yay! Thank you! nad I'm gload you liked it... it was a blearghish chapter to right. :-)

Author's Response: ...I hate typos. ::sighs::

Reviewer: Gin_PotterGirl
Date: 12/03/06 9:01
Chapter: Prologue - Inside St. Mungo's

I love your story! I'm not saying this because I have to, but I love how Hermione and Ginny are OOC, but then it looks like they are still acting the way they usually act. Also, how you express the feelings is great. I felt like I was really there. Plus, I got the hints, so you did good on not giving give-a-ways, but you made it so that everyone could get it. How Ginny and Hermione are first sad, then mad, then sad again, is very tricky to do, but I think you pulled it off.

I just have one question. Did you get the name for your other characters yet? If so, I can't wait to read them. Overall, good story. I can't wait till you update!

~*~Queen of Strange Happiness~*~
~*~Queen of Harry Potter~*~
~*~Ginny~*~



Author's Response: Thanks so much! If find I have a natural talent for writing Angsty fics, lol. As for the characters, yes, I did. If you want to leave any suggestions, I'd love to hear them, either way. Oh, and the fourth chapter is with a Beta now. Thanks again!

Reviewer: jeanv
Date: 11/29/06 22:17
Chapter: Chapter Two - Emotions

Make it soon,I'm way confused.

Author's Response: the next chapter is with the Beta now. thanks!

Reviewer: Maraurderinchief
Date: 11/24/06 8:19
Chapter: Chapter Two - Emotions

Clear it up! Whats going on!!!!! Memory removed and dead are kinda far away!

Author's Response: as i said, it's coming.

Reviewer: pottergurl
Date: 11/22/06 21:37
Chapter: Chapter Two - Emotions

OMG OMG wow this is really good but how the heck you are going to bring harry and ron back im dying to know cuz i think it is pretty cruel to kill them both off they better come back soon ne way i love the story

Author's Response: thanks so much! you'll seeeeeeeee. i'm writing the next chapter right now!

Reviewer: Schmerg_The_Impaler
Date: 11/22/06 14:02
Chapter: Chapter Two - Emotions

I love Jesse, he's so adorable. Molly's description of Ron was also great, although I personally wouldn't describe him as 'empathetic.' (Still, mums are always so idealistic about their kids...)

This chapter literally made me cry. I love Ron, and the line about Harry going on vacation "To the moon" was somehow really emotionally affecting.

I can't wait for an update!

Author's Response: Haha, I know, Jesse's my favorite. But don't tell anyone. ;-) And yeah, Ron is probably the most UN-empathetic person, lol, but you always can look back and say what you WISHed they'd been! Haha. I really liked writing that whole thing, actually. A lot of people say "on vacation" but "to the moon" sounded better and she wasn't really lying - I mean, he did go to the skies, eh? I'm glad it made you cry. That's what I was aiming for! haha.

Reviewer: Schmerg_The_Impaler
Date: 11/22/06 13:57
Chapter: Chapter One - Returning Home

Actually, I don't think Ginny and Hermione were OOC at all. We just haven't seen enough of Ginny's emotional range in canon-- I personally can imagine her blowing up like she did. And Hermione I can definitely see as behaving the way she did in this story.

This is really good, if incredibly saddening. Poor Ron! Poor Harry! Poor... everyone who loved them...

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I totally can imagine her all frail and then the next second, as blowed-up as Aunt Marge, lol. Thanks so much. :)

Reviewer: Schmerg_The_Impaler
Date: 11/22/06 13:51
Chapter: Prologue - Inside St. Mungo's

EEESH! Oh my gosh, this is intense. Have you experienced the death of someone you love before, because Hermione's reaction was so realistic and well-written. The description is good, and it leaves me wondering... WHO DIED?!

Author's Response: haha. no, I honestly have never had anyone close to me die. Well, my grandma, but she was so sick, I saw it coming. Thanks so much, Schmergo!

Reviewer: chickonsticks
Date: 11/22/06 11:59
Chapter: Chapter Two - Emotions

Could you give us some more background... what happend and why are they dead

Author's Response: yeah, it's coming in the next chapter.

Reviewer: AurorGirl101
Date: 11/15/06 16:56
Chapter: Chapter One - Returning Home

Yeah, really OOC. It was okay, though. I liked the kids, they sounded cute. Where's the next chapter at?!

Author's Response: patience, patience, my dear. Haha. It's on it's way! The chapter after the next one I'm having a lot of fun with and it'll be pretty quick between them- they'll come days apart.

Reviewer: AurorGirl101
Date: 11/15/06 16:50
Chapter: Prologue - Inside St. Mungo's

interesting, a tad rushed, yes. But still good. I am ready for the next chappie!!

Author's Response: thanks!

Reviewer: ginny1015
Date: 11/13/06 17:10
Chapter: Chapter One - Returning Home

ummm yeah her eyes are brown not blue so no need changing it.

Author's Response: oh....'kay?

Reviewer: AliKt716
Date: 11/09/06 14:26
Chapter: Prologue - Inside St. Mungo's

HUHA! Ron's not dead! I was reading the reveiws. Yeah. I was kind of wondering because it sounded like they were both alive in the summary. YAY! He's not dead! He's not DEAD! Coolness.

Author's Response: Yes, Ron will be alive....eventually! *dun dun dun* and the plot THICKENS!

Reviewer: AliKt716
Date: 11/09/06 14:24
Chapter: Chapter One - Returning Home

I don't think they wer really out of character. I liked it. I'm going ot put it on my favorites! Yes I am! I can't believe you killed Ronald, though! WAHHH!
9/10

Author's Response: lol, thank you.

Reviewer: AliKt716
Date: 11/09/06 14:18
Chapter: Prologue - Inside St. Mungo's

Oooooh! I like it so far! I'll definately read on! Better do that, now.... Also, I found one place that you might want to revise:

She pulled out a book and started to read, but she couldn't digest the scribbles of ink on the pages. To her, it was a blank page with black scribbles on it.

It's the second paragraph. You used scribbles twice. I don't know if you wanted it to be like that or not, but it sounded weird to me. Otherwise, I loved it!

Author's Response: I realized that - I waas rereading it to a friend and I was like, "uggggh. That sounds bad." I'm working on another fic at the same time as the third chapter, so I don't really have time to fix errors. But thanks, I'll get around to it....someday.

Reviewer: AliKt716
Date: 11/09/06 14:13
Chapter: Prologue - Inside St. Mungo's

This sounds really interesting! Maybe I should read it...?

Author's Response: Haha.

Author's Response: maybe you should!

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