Oooo. Yumminess. :) That was really good. Almost exactly how I feel about this right-hand curse to the Big Avada. Very well done.
Author's Response: Why, thank you!
Amazing description. Very, very nice work. I loved this.
~Lindsey :)
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Nicely described!
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You put feelings into words very well. The last stanza is a very interesting idea - how after one is put under the Cruciatus Curse hurtful memories are part of them. Very thoughtful and descriptive poem.
Author's Response: Thank you for the nice review! I appreciate it! Glad you liked it!
One word: ouch.
The imagery in this is incredible; I think you've captured the sense of the curse really realistically. Well done :)
Author's Response: When I saw the word 'ouch' I got a little scared! Luckily this is a good review, so I'm a bit calmer. Thanks for the review!
YAY!!! Nice to see that your still posting poems on MNFF. I have had you on my fav authors list 4 a while and havent heard anything from you. But now I finally have! Do you still go on your matmice?
Author's Response: TRIPLE POST!!!
YAY!!! Nice to see that your still posting poems on MNFF. I have had you on my fav authors list 4 a while and havent heard anything from you. But now I finally have! Do you still go on your matmice?
Author's Response: Double post!!
YAY!!! Nice to see that your still posting poems on MNFF. I have had you on my fav authors list 4 a while and havent heard anything from you. But now I finally have! Do you still go on your matmice?
Author's Response: Ha ha. Nope, I really don't. That's really the least of my worries at the moment.
Wow. You captured this really well! I love your poetry!
Author's Response: Well, gee. I'm so thrilled that you love my poetry! I love getting good reviews like yours! You are definitely one of my favorite reviewers.
Wow I really love it! Nice choice of words.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm happy that you liked it!
very good, descriptive, and dark. Wonderful.
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nice work
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That is a very descriptful poem, and I admire you for writing it. Great job.
Author's Response: Aw, thanks! I'm truly touched!
