Reviewer: gleam
Date: 10/22/06 23:28
Chapter: Story Text

Good job! I liked you writing tactics, keep showing us some more work.
Besos
Marwa

Author's Response: Thank you very much!

Reviewer: dancergirl117
Date: 10/21/06 19:30
Chapter: Story Text

omg. I seriously thought it was Hermione's POV the ENTIRE TIME!!! lol and then I read the part that was like "That's why tonight, I finally knew. When Ron came down the boys' stairs with Her, and Harry was nowhere in sight, I knew. I knew I was out of luck. I knew I couldn't keep pretending Ron really wanted to keep going out with me, not any more. I knew She'd cut me out. I knew She'd won." I was like, wait a minute WHAT?

Author's Response: Heh. That was thw passage that was meant to show what was happening. :) Thanks!

Author's Response: Author's Response: Heh. That was the passage that was meant to show what was happening. :) Thanks!

Reviewer: ProtegoNox
Date: 10/17/06 14:53
Chapter: Story Text

I never really liked Lavender anyway

Author's Response: Oh well, never mind. :)

Reviewer: nadine29
Date: 10/17/06 13:15
Chapter: Story Text

oh and btw..i knew it was levander from the start!! haha smart huh? lol

Author's Response: Congratulations. :)

Reviewer: nadine29
Date: 10/17/06 13:09
Chapter: Story Text

aww! now i feel soo bad for her!! is that ur point tho?? is that how you want us to feel?...i feel soo bad. us gurls can be such bitches can't we ? lol..not that hermione did anything..but u do kno wat happened next dnt u? lavender told all the gurls abt wat hermione "did" with ron, and then they'll shut her out right? ugh the suckiness...gd fic tho....im positive ur a gurl(ddnt check ur name yet..i will in a sec)...and if ur not...srry! no offence meant lol.

Author's Response: Well, it's reasonable to feel a bit bad for her, she was hurt too ... I don't suppose Hermione would have too many problems, everyone probably had a pretty good idea of what happened. :)

Reviewer: EtherealElation
Date: 10/16/06 19:37
Chapter: Story Text

Ooh... Lavender is a quite bitter dear, isn't she? *smiles* Love this one - who wouldn' ? ' hard to feel sorry for Lavender when she's calling Ron her "rag". Great story!

~Juli

Author's Response: Thank you! Yes, Lavender's not in a good mood here. :)

Reviewer: ginevra715
Date: 10/16/06 17:17
Chapter: Story Text

that was so cool. you had me until the end. i thought a couple of things were a little out of character for Hermione, but I never suspected this. really good!

Author's Response: Thanks -- that was the effect I was going for. :)

Reviewer: AKA294
Date: 10/16/06 16:21
Chapter: Story Text

I knew it had to be Lavender's pov! Hermione wouldn't call Ron a bastard and say it felt good. I liked how you used that moment in the HBP to build a story upon. It was very original!

Author's Response: Thank you -- with the 'felt good' I was trying to evoke the punch in the PoA movie, which never did seem that much like Hermione anyway! Mind you, I wouldn't be surprised if she called Ron some very nasty things in the privacy of her own thoughts. :)

Reviewer: RememberDumbledore
Date: 10/16/06 15:08
Chapter: Story Text

It's very good, but I thought it was Hermione's POV, talking about Lavender in HPB.

Author's Response: Thank you -- I was trying to draw out a certain degree of analogy between them!

Reviewer: shimotsuki
Date: 10/16/06 14:52
Chapter: Story Text

Oh, that was really nicely done.

Ginny vs. Parvati, Seamus vs. Cormac -- very well thought out. (Although McLaggen could be a Scottish name, couldn't it?)

Author's Response: Thank you -- glad the parallels worked. As I understand it, the Scots form would usually be 'MacLaggen' and the Irish form 'McLaggen' -- although a lot of Scots do have Mc names too, yes.

Reviewer: dumbledorefluertwins
Date: 10/16/06 10:45
Chapter: Story Text

oh! I thought it was Hermione's POV at first! It could work either way! Very good read!

Author's Response: Thank you very much!

Reviewer: EmilyJayne
Date: 10/16/06 8:30
Chapter: Story Text

VVEEERRRRRRRRRRRRRYY Sneakey!
You had me fooled! Great Job!

Author's Response: Thank you very much!

Reviewer: sakata_sarah
Date: 10/16/06 2:19
Chapter: Story Text

OMG I so thought that was Hermione. That was brilliant!

Author's Response: Thank you very much!

Reviewer: mionelove
Date: 10/15/06 21:13
Chapter: Story Text

I like it. I can see why Lanveder would be upset though I am not much for the couple Lavender/Ron. But I can see how Lavender would be upset losing Ron to someone like Hermione.

Anyways, I like it. You did a really good job. Keep writing.

Author's Response: Thank you -- I don't think Lavender/Ron would ever really have much chance given Ron's underlying feelings for Hermione, but she definitely did seem upset by the breakup. :)

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