Reviewer: loonylongbottom
Date: 02/21/08 17:43
Chapter: Story Text

haha that was right good...at first i thort it may have been hermione's POV but then t got towards the end n i was like oh its lavendar lol

very well written and an interesting take =]

Author's Response: Thank you very much!

Reviewer: PygmyPuffAmanda
Date: 10/26/07 7:59
Chapter: Story Text

Oh my! I thought it was Hermoine talking about Lavendar until the last part about strangling her with her bushy hair! That was amazing how you did that!

Author's Response: Thank you very much! Glad it worked. :)

Reviewer: red haired mom
Date: 08/10/07 15:40
Chapter: Story Text

Definitely what a girl would think if confronted with a boyfriends ‘infidelity’. I was so disgusted with the whole Ron/Lavender relationship in the book, but I suppose J.K. wanted him to have a love interest before Hermione and he got together. I mean she had Krum, and Cormac, so why not let Ron have Lavender.
After the yelling and they were broken up, I could see her lying in bed and crying about it. You should’ve written the missing moment, let her have her tantrum and blast Ron with her temper. I wouldn’t mind her doing a little yelling at Hermione either. But that’s just me.
Great job, and I’ll see you at another soon.


Author's Response: Thanks -- hmm, I wasn't too confident with this one (never having been a sixteen year old girl!) so I'm glad it rang true! Ron/Lavender surprised me too, but it kept Ron and Hermione from getting together too soon and helped them grow up a bit first.

Reviewer: Radiant_817
Date: 08/04/07 15:26
Chapter: Story Text

that was different, at first i thought it was hermiones POV. but when i read the authors note, i was like, seriously.i had to go back a reread it.

Author's Response: Thanks -- glad it worked. :)

Reviewer: Prongs92
Date: 07/28/07 17:10
Chapter: Story Text

OMG, this is one of the most creative pieces of writing I have ever read! You fooled me. I totally believed it was Hermione! Then I read the bushy hair thing, and I thought "Lavender has bushy hair?" And then I realized it was Lavender's point of view the enitre time. BRILLIANT! That's a really smart idea!

Author's Response: Thank you very much -- that's pretty much exactly the reaction I was going for. :)

Reviewer: FelicisQuill
Date: 03/09/07 20:38
Chapter: Story Text

Very crafty! I liked it. I really thought it was Hermione crying her eyes out until the end. Now, looking back over it, I can see that she never would have said "you-know-who business" and that she and Ron weren't dating so they couldn't keep going out. But the Yule Ball ideas and the "pretty and popular" friend referring to either Ginny or Parvati was nicely done.

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad I managed to bluff you with the ambiguous clues to start with. :)

Reviewer: susa_hp
Date: 02/18/07 10:17
Chapter: Story Text

I'd almost review in spanish, luckily I could errise it Iike your story it was cleaver.

Author's Response: Thank you very much!

Reviewer: LexiGirl
Date: 01/06/07 0:04
Chapter: Story Text

wow...Lavender's point of view!?! I thought it was Hermione up until the very end! Did you plan it that way? Or did it just kind of end up like that? Oh, but anyways, I liked it! 10/10

Author's Response: Oh, it was definitely planned. :) It just struck me that there were certain parallels between them. Thanks, and glad you liked it!

Reviewer: LexiGirl
Date: 01/06/07 0:04
Chapter: Story Text

wow...Lavender's point of view!?! I thought it was Hermione up until the very end! Did you plan it that way? Or did it just kind of end up like that? Oh, but anyways, I liked it! 10/10

Author's Response: See above.

Reviewer: novalearae
Date: 01/04/07 5:22
Chapter: Story Text

actually, its his last name is scotish, i dont know about the first name.

Author's Response: Usually it's 'MacSomething' for Scots, 'McSomething' for Irish, although there is crossover? Mind you, when I started Googling for the name McLaggen just now to check there were very people actually called that, so I couldn't really tell. :)

Reviewer: novalearae
Date: 01/04/07 5:22
Chapter: Story Text

actually, its his last name is scotish, i dont know about the first name.

Author's Response: See above.

Reviewer: AliKt716
Date: 12/19/06 20:02
Chapter: Story Text

That was very nicely written. The thoughts were played out good and making everyone think it's Hermione talking was just so foolishly crafty and cunning! Very good.
~AliKt716~

Author's Response: Thank you! Glad the cunning plan worked. :)

Reviewer: beauty and brains
Date: 12/09/06 14:35
Chapter: Story Text

Wow! What a twist! A very hilarious twist at that! Very unexpected! Keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Thank you! Glad you liked it.

Reviewer: theflyingcolors
Date: 11/15/06 20:57
Chapter: Story Text

a bit confusing, but I liked it.

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: die and let die
Date: 10/31/06 2:03
Chapter: Story Text

i really liked the different POV that you took, the writing/plot could be better, but i really liked the technique you used! good job!

Author's Response: Thanks -- the writing and such plot as there was were a bit experimental! Glad the POV worked though.

Reviewer: _Dumbledores Girl_
Date: 10/27/06 19:00
Chapter: Story Text

WOAH, that was ok I guess, but I just figured out who's POV when you mentioned "the irish boy" but i thought that could mean Seamus too so... now it's all making sense...

Author's Response: Thanks -- if you got the POV from the 'Irish boy' reference, that was really well spotted! :)

Reviewer: May91
Date: 10/26/06 6:45
Chapter: Story Text

Ooooh, I was sure that was Lavender's POV, but it's very nice!^^

Author's Response: Thank you very much!

Reviewer: JJ220
Date: 10/24/06 19:03
Chapter: Story Text

I thought is was in Hermione's pov, so I had to go back and read it all in Lavenders. I like it tho.

Author's Response: Thank you very much! Always nice when people do that.

Reviewer: phoe_gurl
Date: 10/24/06 16:27
Chapter: Story Text

haha! that was so good. i so thought it was hermione's pov at first, it was a good twist. unless i was just really dense and it was obvious all along.

Author's Response: Thank you very much! I was hoping that people would think it was Hermione at first. :)

Reviewer: Adelfore Flamell
Date: 10/24/06 1:05
Chapter: Story Text

thats an interesting point of veiw! I like it thoguh. Good short fic!

Author's Response: Thank you very much!

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