Reviews For Forever Ember
Reviewer: Euphrates
Date: 02/11/07 19:31
Chapter: The Phoenix Died Tonight

Oh, wow. So powerful! The pjoenix died tonight. What an ending! Wow.

I just...this is such an amazing poem! Especially those two stanzas that sort of mirrored each other...that was a great way to point out the difference...

Great job! What a great poem. You wouldn't mind if I added it to my favorites, hmm? :-)

~Tyger, tyger, burning bright - Euphrates

Reviewer: JewellPotterFan
Date: 11/07/06 23:19
Chapter: The Phoenix Died Tonight

wow....beautiful. I won't say much because every time I stay on this page too long it logs me off, but you are an awesome writer!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: crazy_purple_hp_freak
Date: 10/20/06 12:26
Chapter: The Phoenix Died Tonight

Wow. I really enjoyed this. The short lines bring across the message really well, and I really like the idea of this about Fawkes.

Reviewer: nysuperstarz
Date: 10/19/06 20:59
Chapter: The Phoenix Died Tonight

Gosh that was beauuuuuutiful! I thorughly enjoyed it!

~Roop

Reviewer: GreyLady
Date: 10/18/06 22:06
Chapter: The Phoenix Died Tonight

Oh, I really enjoyed it. Your rhyming worked well, and such pretty word choices, too! You have a talent for poetry. =)

Reviewer: saveginny417
Date: 10/15/06 17:58
Chapter: The Phoenix Died Tonight

I know this is a horrible reason for reading this but we have the same name! that aside, i found your poem simply amazing. 10/10.

Reviewer: Dragon_Warrior
Date: 10/15/06 12:44
Chapter: The Phoenix Died Tonight

I loved that...very pretty, cool rhyming...10/10

Reviewer: comewhatmay
Date: 10/15/06 10:49
Chapter: The Phoenix Died Tonight

absolutely wonderful hey you should
check out my poems if you want to, that is. Keep up the good work!

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