Oh, wow. So powerful! The pjoenix died tonight. What an ending! Wow.
I just...this is such an amazing poem! Especially those two stanzas that sort of mirrored each other...that was a great way to point out the difference...
Great job! What a great poem. You wouldn't mind if I added it to my favorites, hmm? :-)
~Tyger, tyger, burning bright - Euphrates
wow....beautiful. I won't say much because every time I stay on this page too long it logs me off, but you are an awesome writer!!!!!!!!
Wow. I really enjoyed this. The short lines bring across the message really well, and I really like the idea of this about Fawkes.
Gosh that was beauuuuuutiful! I thorughly enjoyed it!
Oh, I really enjoyed it. Your rhyming worked well, and such pretty word choices, too! You have a talent for poetry. =)
I know this is a horrible reason for reading this but we have the same name! that aside, i found your poem simply amazing. 10/10.
I loved that...very pretty, cool rhyming...10/10
absolutely wonderful hey you should
check out my poems if you want to, that is. Keep up the good work!