Reviewer: ron_hermione_love
Date: 10/17/06 1:45
Chapter: Chapter 1: Mugwump

Wow this is brilliant! It's interesting to read a fanfic with Lily and Petunia when they were young. I really like it, please update!

Author's Response: Thank you! :) :) The first couple chapters are going to be before Lily ever goes to Hogwarts. James, Sirius, Remus, and Peter will fall into the picture soon.

Reviewer: gryffinclawz
Date: 10/16/06 17:26
Chapter: Chapter 1: Mugwump

Nice twist. :) I really enjoy it. I especially like how Petunia is in total an complete denial about the letter. She is a rather bitter sister... and I like it. She isn't a terrible sister, but she isn't great. She is misunderstood and somewhere in the middle. Great job! :) 100/10

Author's Response: Hmm... what could be better than eating crumb cake and reading my lovely reviews? :) Maybe a glass of milk. :) Thank you very much! Hope you continue reading... ;)

Reviewer: cedrics_chick
Date: 10/16/06 16:57
Chapter: Chapter 1: Mugwump

hihi cute very cute I really liked the whole Petunias point of view

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. I wanted to make it different. After all, no one really knows how Petunia was like as a child. So, I decided to make her in complete denial about this "rubbish magic." I find it rather funny (even though I wrote it) how she thinks throwing the letter away will help at all. This IS magic that we are talking about. ;)

Reviewer: confidentialroze
Date: 10/16/06 16:48
Chapter: Chapter 1: Mugwump

ha! that was bloody brilliant! completely wicked! *grins* 10/10 ~roze

Author's Response: Aww! Thanks! Reading that made me think of Ron. :) I'm very flattered... 10/10... :)!

Reviewer: Magical_Lily
Date: 10/16/06 14:28
Chapter: Chapter 1: Mugwump

ooooooooooooooooo
how very wrong she is
cant wait for more

Author's Response: Thanks. :) I decided to make it a light cliff-hanger. I think it is totally EVIL how they make drastic cliff-hangers on the first chapter. Just beware: drastic cliffhangers will come. ;) :) I'm glad you liked it.

Reviewer: halfbloodprincess22
Date: 10/16/06 14:09
Chapter: Chapter 1: Mugwump

this story looks good. continue soon, i want to see how it turns out. interesting incident with petunia, helped set the stage well :)

Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad that you liked it. I didn't want Petunia to be the most hated person in the world, but I surely didn't want her to be the nicest. I just decided to make her in denial.

Reviewer: hermionelove
Date: 10/16/06 14:01
Chapter: Chapter 1: Mugwump

Cute chapter, Petunia sure is evil! =)

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! :) Yes, I decided to make Petunia in total denial about the witch thing. I thought that it would make things a lot more interesting. ;)

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