umm this is a really good chpater and the sumary is really good i was really looking forward to reading the rest could please not give up on this fic thanks
hmmmm.... good begining, i cant wait for the plot to devlop!
This was an excellent start, I'm quite surprised you didn't continue with the story. I really liked how you give us a glimpse of Lily's personality through her desire to appear inconspicuous at her new school and through the gift petunia gave her. It was also nice to see that they weren't always astranged. I thought Lily accidentally on purpose vanishing her peas off her plate was a very inventive bit of underage magic, I bet all kids would love to be able to do that. I'm adding this to my favourites so if you do decide to continue at some point I'll know.
nice start, but it could have gone faster
I'm rereading this and so far it looks interesting, cool writing style =))
Sounds pretty good, but u GOTTA UPDATE!!!!!!!!
nice chapter when is the next one going to be posted?
nice chapter when is the next one going to be posted?
Are you going to continue this? It's awesome! You should....
~Emma
I just read this for the second time and once again I am very impressed! It has a good flow and seems quite original. I know that this must get annoying, but please update soon because I really want to know what happens next! :)
Why is it that I have to tell everyone to update? I mean, come on!
....Please update?
So I guess you're not big on updating, huh?
This is a really interesting way of beginning the fic! I love the twist on the usual *Lily finds out she is a witch* theme. Petunia's character in this really works well, and I like the way that you have captured her suspicion and dislike of magic. Her thoughts in italics are also interesting to read.
My only small pick, is just to be careful when you're switching between different perspectives. This chapter appears to start with Lily and end with Petunia, with no real switching point. Although it's okay in this case, just look out for it as it sometimes can be a bit confusing.
I really enjoyed reading this :) When's the next chapter coming?
Author's Response: Why, thank you very much! :) The next chapter is already beta-ed. I will submit it later on today and wait for validation. Keep and eye out!
Nice story. Can't wait for next chap. I haven't commented stories in a while, but I have been reading a lot. :)
Author's Response: Thanks. :) I feel honored to see that my story was the first story that you commented for a while.
very nice. i will be adding this to my favourites so i can keep track of it... don't keep us waiting long!
Author's Response: Thank you very much! :) Don't worry, I won't. I am starting to write chapter 2 and my beta is a quick one.
Great start! update soon-i want to know what happens :)
Author's Response: Thanks! :) Happy reading.
Really good! I liked it. The ending was great and wasn't drawn out. It was short, sweet, and to the point. :) GOOD JOB!
Author's Response: Thanks! The endings aren't my strong points... so I'm glad it was enjoyable! :)
lol! I love this story! I laughed when I read that the letter was addressed to her while she was in the kitchen. That probably freaked Petunia out. I can't wait for more! Update soon!
Author's Response: Yeah... it probably did. Key reason as to why she threw the thing out the window. :( You made a good point. Petunia could have been scared for her sister as well. :) Thanks!
wow really good cont soon!!
Author's Response: Ok, I will! Thanks for the review.
