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Name: purple_pen (Signed) · Date: 09/07/09 16:21 · For: Chapter 1
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Name: purple_pen (Signed) · Date: 09/07/09 16:04 · For: Chapter 1
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Name: purple_pen (Signed) · Date: 09/07/09 16:01 · For: Chapter 1
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Name: HagridsTheMan (Signed) · Date: 03/20/08 19:23 · For: Chapter 1
Ron's always a popular character to write a humor fic about, and the story was unique, the situation he found himself in familiar to most. I found most humor in the different essays that Ron wrote--very funny when he attempted the "creative approach." Very entertaining, surprisingly believable subject matter for the students to write an essay on.


Name: Lutien (Signed) · Date: 02/26/07 11:05 · For: Chapter 1
Haha! Absolutley true, all of itXD


Name: _Dumbledores Girl_ (Anonymous) · Date: 12/06/06 18:13 · For: Chapter 1
hehehe, funny stuff! i


Name: _Dumbledores Girl_ (Anonymous) · Date: 12/06/06 18:11 · For: Chapter 1
hehehe, funny stuff! i

Author's Response: Thanks!


Name: emmaholloway (Signed) · Date: 12/02/06 5:28 · For: Chapter 1
this was really good
cant believe ron would steal from harry though... actually thats a lie, i kinda can
and i cant imagine snape giving ron an O even if it was up to that standard
emma
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Author's Response: Thanks. My justification for Ron stealing from Harry is that he was REALLY desperate, plus his sense of judgement was impaired by his tiredness. Yes, Snape is a bit OOC, but I couldn't think of a better ending.


Name: Ardnassac (Signed) · Date: 10/22/06 23:58 · For: Chapter 1
This is an extremely clever and witty, not to mention outstandingly hilarious, fic that is quite entertaining all the while: canon. *laughs and re-reads!*

Author's Response: I actually was scared it wasn't funny enough for a Humor fic, because I had no dancing llaamas. But I guess I was wrong. Thanks for reviewing!


Name: deanine (Signed) · Date: 10/22/06 20:42 · For: Chapter 1
Okay this was a lovely humor fic. You had a fresh approach with Ron's homework as the frame. In the frame you show off the character's wit and humor and mild ineptness when it comes to schoolwork sometimes.


It had me first giggling and then chortling and finally rolling around on the floor. Bravo. The characterization of Ron was really just outstanding and funny. Ron is a witty boy and no he isn't brilliant but neither is he a doofus (as many fics portray him). You captured him so well here.


Constructive comment: This is a bit silly but there was a word that should have been hyphenated, greasy-haired or something equivalent.


Overall, really lovely job. This fic is what the humor category is around for.


Author's Response: Thanks. I was aiming for a canon humor story, so my main goal was to avoid OOCness. And I guess I hit the mark. And yes, hyphens are evil. XD



Name: Schmerg_The_Impaler (Signed) · Date: 10/15/06 20:02 · For: Chapter 1
*Is madly in love with this story* It reads exactly like something directly pulled from JK Rowling's own discarded works, possibly written when she was slightly high. This is hilarious and extremely well-characterised.

Author's Response: Ha, "slightly" high. Glad you liked it, although perhaps too much. I was aiming for a Jo-type humor, and I guess I hit the mark.


Name: froggerlotr (Signed) · Date: 10/13/06 16:40 · For: Chapter 1
Excellent work! Rather a creative idea--I can feel Ron's pain. Ron was very in character, too, and I loved the sarcasm--reminded me a bit of the 'There's no need to call me sir, professor' scene from HBP =)
Nice writing style--easy to follow, and you give a lot of insight into Ron's thoughts.
Overall very well-written =)

Author's Response: Thanks. I was aiming to due a "canon" humor story, as there are a serious lack of those.

Author's Response: Thanks. I was aiming to due a "canon" humor story, as there are a serious lack of those.

Author's Response: Thanks. I was aiming to due a "canon" humor story, as there are a serious lack of those.


Name: Dumbledore Prince (Signed) · Date: 10/13/06 8:33 · For: Chapter 1
Wow, that was really funny and in-character! I was roaring with laughter when I was reading all the sarcastic references to Snape! This story is perfect for a Snape-hater like me ... :D

Even though the story is AU (Crabbe and Goyle never passed their OWLs), it's really enjoyable. Crabbe and Goyle's
silly antics with their wands cracked me up.

But, I did notice some punctuation errors, especially with the possessive case. For instance ...

Snape stared down at Rons essay, disbelieving.

'Rons' should be 'Ron's'.

Déjà vu, he thought, before drifting off into a land of dreams.

Awesome ending sentence! You've got lots of talent, especially with humour! I hope to read more of your stories!

~Mini.

Author's Response: Thanks a lot. I'm glad you liked it and that I actually made someone laugh! Yah-ness. I didn't even realize the Crabbe and Goyle thing, thanks for pointing it out. And yes, I am very bad with possessives. XD

Author's Response: Thanks a lot. I'm glad you liked it and that I actually made someone laugh! Yah-ness. I didn't even realize the Crabbe and Goyle thing, thanks for pointing it out. And yes, I am very bad with possessives. XD


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