Reviews For Her Other Half
Reviewer: hpfan14
Date: 02/19/07 16:36
Chapter: Chapter Five: Wacky Weasley Wedding

omg, please update soon, i feel like its been forever! I still loved this chapter though, hilarious!

Author's Response: I am still working on the next one.

Reviewer: mrsdan
Date: 02/14/07 13:26
Chapter: Chapter One: An Experiment Gone Horribly Awry

wow.... I thought in the begiining that she was Nagini.

Author's Response:

Author's Response: She is.

Reviewer: CrazyChimp
Date: 01/16/07 20:11
Chapter: Chapter One: An Experiment Gone Horribly Awry

Let me start off by saying how much I loved The Boy Who Lived. I followed it thru as you were writing, but didn't send a review. and for that I'm sorry. Now, imagine my surprise as I look you up, and see you made a sequel! It was enough to make my day! Keep up the good work, and have Chapter 6 posted soon, Please!

Author's Response: I am trying to get back into the wing of things, unfortunately RL has been throwing me some curveballs. I full yintend to finish this story, but it might take me a little bit longer to get working on it properly.

Reviewer: William B
Date: 12/13/06 2:43
Chapter: Chapter Five: Wacky Weasley Wedding

It's not Ginny or Molly. I think it's Máirín she is tring to get. But I could be worng

Author's Response: I hate being worng. And, I hsitate to say anymoe about Nagini's target, as the more people I eliminate as targets, the easier i will be for you guys to guess. Le sigh!

Reviewer: GinnyPottergirl
Date: 12/10/06 1:47
Chapter: Chapter Five: Wacky Weasley Wedding

Nice weddings! Did Nagini fall in love with Tom?!?

Author's Response: Thank you! She was in love with him, but I would like to think that he was too in love with himself to ever fall in love with someone else.

Reviewer: hpnut
Date: 12/03/06 22:29
Chapter: Chapter Five: Wacky Weasley Wedding

Great chapter, I loved it!!! I think the prank on the twins was awesome. So, is she after Ginny or Molly? My guess is Molly. Update soon. Did you get my emails about that story on another site?

Author's Response: I was hoping this chapter would come across well. I meant it to be light and free (Well, as free as possible) from the terror that Ciara has inflicted) It's not Molly. I am working on chapter six right now, where you will definitely find out more about Ciara's plans, if I can get her to cooperate! I did get your emails, and I loved the story. Thanks for the tip!

Reviewer: Ginzig
Date: 12/03/06 17:39
Chapter: Chapter Five: Wacky Weasley Wedding

You are so baaaaad! Hooters! Arthur at the airport! The pranks! Arthur's fabulous comment to Molly before then went to their room. Just a few of my favortie things about this chapter. I really like your history on Ciara! Get working on the next chapter. I hope to read it when you get back from your vacation! What am I going to do without your emails all day?! Bored, lonely, but go have fun, don't worry about me. sniff I'm just teasing. Have as much fun as you can and call me!

Author's Response: Sniff, myself. I will miss you terribly, as well as hearing from all my fans (Where are you, fans?!? I'm lonely without your reviews.) I have already started on chapter six, but again, Ciara is NOT behaving. I am at a loss for how to punish her for her errant behaviour. As it is, I may have a WHOLE LOT more writing time very soon, so I am hoping to finish up the story much earlier than anticipated. :)

Reviewer: dumbles
Date: 11/22/06 19:57
Chapter: Chapter Two: A Celebrated Birth

This was such a good chapter - I've missed your writing so much. The new plotlines are all extremely creative, and your style is just overall better. You keep the reader guessing without releasing too much information or not telling enough. Sorry that I'm analyzing so much - I'm just so glad to be reading again. Incredible chapter.

Author's Response: I am so glad that you are enjoying this story. I really feel as though this story is taking me in a direction I was not able to go in the last story. I'm glad that you are enjoying it!! Keep reading. Chapter five is done and with Beta. I will post it as soon as I get it back. :)

Reviewer: dumbles
Date: 11/22/06 11:45
Chapter: Chapter One: An Experiment Gone Horribly Awry

Wow this chapter was EXCELLENT. What greats ideas, you've grown so much as a writer.

I'm sorry I haven't read anything in about 3 months, but life has been crazy. I'm home for thanksgiving break so i'll try and get through what you have of Her Other Half and then tackle a few one shots.

Author's Response: Wow! Just when I think I've gone too far, someone comes along and makes my day!

Reviewer: hpnut
Date: 11/06/06 21:53
Chapter: Chapter Four: A Ficus is Worth a Thousand Words, Honey

Who is she after!?! Update soon, great job.

Author's Response: You'll have to wait a bit before I can tell you. I want to apologize to everyone right now. I have the flu. And, I started my second job yesterday. I have a good portion of chapter five written and I am hoping to finish it on Friday. Barring being on my deathbead, which is how I currently feel, I will get chapter five to Beta on Friday and get it posted as soon as possible. I know that many of you are anxious to see what I have cooked up for Fred and George as they marry their long suffering sweethearts. Be patient, as I hope to have it in the queue by this weekend. And, I hope to have six done by Sunday. I have high ambitions for my three day weekend that I actually have a whole day off between both of my jobs.

Reviewer: raveralways
Date: 11/05/06 11:55
Chapter: Chapter Four: A Ficus is Worth a Thousand Words, Honey

I think I like where this is going so far. SO when are we going to get more background info? Will it be a chapter of it's own, or will we have to wait for the heros to uncover it and piece it together?I guess I'm just waiting to see this Ciara D'arcy's connection to Hogwarts, Dumbledore, and Tom Riddle himself. Please don't make me wait too long.

Author's Response: Okay. This is the second time trying to get this review to stick. I can't remember everything I wrote the first. The rest of the infor on Ciara will be reveleaed through her contact with the 'hero's' and through her witty dialogue at the end of the next couple of chapters. For those of you who are confused, let me explain that chapters two-four are all taking place during the same day. Chapter five and six moves the timeline along a few days. Then, chapters seven-nine are all taking place during the same day. After chapter nine, all holds are released and time is free to move forward at will. Ciara does not have the luxury of time, as Voldemort did. Her plan requires that her victims be attacked and out of the way before an antidote is discovered. The longer it takes her to complete her tasks, the closer they will get to finding out how to heal her victims and prevent anymore 'accidents'. Many people, by the way - to answer you questions about Ciara's connection to Hogwarts and Dumbledore - make the incorrect assumption that Ciara was at Hogwarts at the same time as Voldemort. Let me set the record straight... She was not. Ciara was homeschooled by her mother while she learned to control her morphing. Could you imagine her being at Hogwarts as a young student and morphing into a snake when she was upset? Her mother would have had some mighty detailed explaining to do. Her lack of social interaction is what led her to Voldemort. In later chapters, you will see that she connected with him on a personal level, seeing her own traits and shortcomings in him.

Reviewer: bookworm123
Date: 11/04/06 18:46
Chapter: Chapter Four: A Ficus is Worth a Thousand Words, Honey

wait close to who??????

Author's Response: I can't tell you. Don't throw anything! *Ducks, just in case* I promise it will be very clear who her intended target is in a few chapters.

Reviewer: nadine29
Date: 11/04/06 14:35
Chapter: Chapter Three: Twin Troubles

woah..she speaks weird..she's soo full of herself!!....wat is going onnnn!! i need to kno!

Author's Response: She is bent on completing her task and getting revenge.

Reviewer: georgiegirl15
Date: 11/04/06 12:44
Chapter: Chapter Four: A Ficus is Worth a Thousand Words, Honey

a bit confusing in parts, but an interesting idea.

Author's Response: I am so sorry that it's confusing. It might help that chapter two, chapter three, and chapter four all take place during the same time frame. (The three chapters chronical the golden group's first day back at Hogwarts/work) The next chapters will move the story along slightly, but understand that this entire story takes place in a matter of days. Ciara (Nagini), unlike Voldemort, does not have the luxury of time. She is racing against the clock, attempting to remain anonymous in her endeavour to get to her chosen target. Think 'Gone in 60 Seconds' when they stole all the cars in one night so they would be done before the cops noticed the first car was gone. That's what Nagini (Ciara) is trying to do.

Reviewer: Ginzig
Date: 11/04/06 11:37
Chapter: Chapter Four: A Ficus is Worth a Thousand Words, Honey

You know how much I love H/G, but I do think this is my very favorite chapter. It has Neville, of course I love it! That ruddy bum-biting duck!!! Fabulous chapter, but you already know that. Hurry up with that wedding! I can't wait to read it!!!!!!!

Author's Response: You are such a doll! I'm going to start work on the wedding again tomorrow. I'm miserable sick today. I know, excuses excuses.

Reviewer: Hopeless
Date: 10/26/06 18:35
Chapter: Chapter One: An Experiment Gone Horribly Awry

Dark and enticing. I must read on. I loved the boy who lived and this one is starting out nicely.

Author's Response: I am so glad you like it! I am finishing up chapter four soon!

Reviewer: potter_mad_4_eva
Date: 10/26/06 6:22
Chapter: Chapter Three: Twin Troubles

This person (i'm guessing it is nagini) is down right under handed and sneaky, i know she wants to get to harry but how is this going to help her achieve her goal other than getting harry all angry and wanting to kill her and everything she stands for, but would this be harder than it was with voldemort becasue she taught voldemort so she must ultimatley be more powerful. please update soon

Author's Response: Ciara is underhanded and sneaky. I'm glad she's coming across that way. She also has the worst luck (a trend that unfortunately will not continue for too much longer). And, while she is ultimately more powerful that Voldemort (a man who was tricked into becoming everything he was), she has a major flaw in her plan... Just remember, at one point in time, she was a young girl with a life's goal. Without revealing too much, all I can say is that, while getting even with Harry is one of her goals, she is not trying to get to Harry. *I can't say any more or I'll blow it*

Reviewer: hpnut
Date: 10/25/06 15:29
Chapter: Chapter Three: Twin Troubles

I forgot to say, that I love the idea of giving thier children the magic to transform. Great idea!!!!

Author's Response: Ah. I have inherited some interesting traits, I thought they should too! And, I can't tell you the exact ending, but I can assure you that the story will be getting both lighter and darker as the chapters progress. :)

Reviewer: hpnut
Date: 10/25/06 15:25
Chapter: Chapter Three: Twin Troubles

This was a fast update!!! This story seems to be a bit darker than your other one. I hope it has a happy ending ( I know, you can't tell me) like you other one did. I love this story, so update soon.

Author's Response: I know. I was incredibly impressed with Robin's lightening fast speed. Now all I have to do is get the rest of chapter four typed... (whistles innocently) Is this one really darker? I thought it portrayed the family lives in a much less chaotic sense... Maybe that's not what I mean to say... Let me think on this!

Reviewer: sskywalker00
Date: 10/25/06 6:31
Chapter: Chapter Three: Twin Troubles

great chapter what's next i must know keep up to good work

Author's Response: Next is Luna and Neville's portion of the story. Keep your eyes peels for some ornery water fowl! :) Thank you for the lovely review.

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