Haha, interesting. I like how you incorperated Umbridge's "fairly wide load." It's an unusual idea, and you pulled it off really well. The only stanza I had a problem with would be the second one... it just didn't seem to flow as well as the others. Nice job, though!
Author's Response: Secon stanza, huh? I'd say you're right, but that happens when you write a rhyming poem like this, I suppose. Thanks for your review!
Author's Response: Oooooops, misspelled second. Tee hee.
Author's Response: At least I didn't misspell "misspelled."
That was awsome! And they validated it SO quick!
Author's Response: I know! Kinda unfair to you, huh?
Im so stupid! ur the same one who wrote unicorn's blood! and here i am thinking i never read a peice by u! well now that i know that, here's what i SHOULD hav wrote: woah..ur really great :-D..i like that u can go from such a dark poem to well...umbridge-itis *grins*....i wonder, can u review my poem, Out of the Blue? it would be an honor to get a poet as talented as u with a review on my board (and of course i would like some more reviews :-)....
Author's Response: That is so sweet! Thank you soooooo much! Of course i'll review yours! Give me a minute, tho!
*laughing*..complete awesomeness! ur a funny writer! please write more! 10/10
Author's Response: Thanks!
Hahaha that was good
Author's Response: I luv to get laughs from people! Thanks!! :-)