Reviews For Umbridge-itis
Reviewer: BuckbeakBeyond
Date: 10/19/06 14:43
Chapter: Umbridge-itis

Haha, interesting. I like how you incorperated Umbridge's "fairly wide load." It's an unusual idea, and you pulled it off really well. The only stanza I had a problem with would be the second one... it just didn't seem to flow as well as the others. Nice job, though!

Author's Response: Secon stanza, huh? I'd say you're right, but that happens when you write a rhyming poem like this, I suppose. Thanks for your review!

Author's Response: Oooooops, misspelled second. Tee hee.

Author's Response: At least I didn't misspell "misspelled."

Reviewer: Dragon_Spirit
Date: 10/13/06 17:24
Chapter: Umbridge-itis

That was awsome! And they validated it SO quick!

Author's Response: I know! Kinda unfair to you, huh?

Reviewer: lady magician
Date: 10/13/06 11:56
Chapter: Umbridge-itis

Im so stupid! ur the same one who wrote unicorn's blood! and here i am thinking i never read a peice by u! well now that i know that, here's what i SHOULD hav wrote: woah..ur really great :-D..i like that u can go from such a dark poem to well...umbridge-itis *grins*....i wonder, can u review my poem, Out of the Blue? it would be an honor to get a poet as talented as u with a review on my board (and of course i would like some more reviews :-)....

Author's Response: That is so sweet! Thank you soooooo much! Of course i'll review yours! Give me a minute, tho!

Reviewer: lady magician
Date: 10/13/06 11:50
Chapter: Umbridge-itis

*laughing*..complete awesomeness! ur a funny writer! please write more! 10/10

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: fullmoonwolf
Date: 10/13/06 9:13
Chapter: Umbridge-itis

Hahaha that was good

Author's Response: I luv to get laughs from people! Thanks!! :-)

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