Reviewer: darkorangecat
Date: 10/09/10 20:23
Chapter: Chapter 2

I thought that you addressed Hermione's parents' possible misgivings quite well and like how she and Professor McGonagall were able to make sure that she was able to attend Hogwarts in the next year. I am looking forward to seeing how your plot will develop and how the three will come together.

Reviewer: darkorangecat
Date: 10/09/10 20:21
Chapter: Chapter 1 - Sealing a Friendship

You have woven an extremely creative, intriguing background. I like how you use Ron as a vessel for memories of ancient magicks. I also like how you address the issues that such traumatic events would have on three teens. Excellent opening chapter.

Reviewer: Tatewin
Date: 05/20/07 15:30
Chapter: Chapter 1 - Sealing a Friendship

This is very interesting! At this point, I can see where some of the information Ron is getting through his dreams could be a real assett if he would talk to one who had the knowledge of what the dreams meant and how to use the magic in them...which might just be an Unspeakable!!!! Can't wait to read chapter 2, but it will have to wait until later! I have to leave for a while!

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