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Name: linnealovegood (Signed) · Date: 04/21/09 21:40 · For: The First
very cute

Name: Hermione Clone (Signed) · Date: 10/04/07 19:53 · For: The First
Great story!
I was going to read "the Second", but when I saw there was "the first" I figured I should read it first(yes, I know, a very novel idea).
All of your stories are different, yet they all are spectacular.
Keep it up!

Author's Response: Thank you so much--I do try to keep them all different from one another. I hope to have the rest of the five up at some point. Thank you so much for reading!

Name: Solemn Kedavra (Signed) · Date: 08/25/07 2:11 · For: The First
Let's just leave it at this: If I had been drinking something while reading that, I would need a new keyboard.

Author's Response: Hee. Thanks for enjoying!

Name: Padfoot519 (Signed) · Date: 08/23/07 1:16 · For: The First

Author's Response: Thank you!

Name: werewolfs_fan (Signed) · Date: 06/27/07 16:25 · For: The First
I love it!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Name: Jazz (Signed) · Date: 01/20/07 22:42 · For: The First
Wow. I love them. Great.

Author's Response: Thanks!

Name: hermy_loves_ron (Signed) · Date: 12/26/06 22:43 · For: The First
Love this! So cute and funny and absolutely spectacular. Moony's so funny. Can't wait for the third kiss.

Author's Response: Neither can I. I hope it'll decide to write itself soon....I hope you wait around!

Name: theNEWgoldentrio (Signed) · Date: 12/10/06 15:07 · For: The First
HA HA HA HA HA this is brilliant they make the cutest couple go Remmie & Sirius


Author's Response: oh god. You called him Remmie. WHY would you call him Remmie when he already has a cool nickname like Moony? WHY? *bemoans*

Name: Crysta_bell (Signed) · Date: 10/16/06 5:34 · For: The First
Great story, i absolutely loved it

Author's Response: Thanks!

Name: aintcrazy4you (Signed) · Date: 10/15/06 14:02 · For: The First
Sorry, I broke off hahaha.....that was good. Really good.

Name: aintcrazy4you (Signed) · Date: 10/15/06 14:01 · For: The First

Name: MaraudersWolf (Signed) · Date: 10/13/06 18:25 · For: The First
Whew! Finally got here! Took me a few days to get around to reading the WHOLE thing - too many people interrupting at the wrong moment.

Overall, I enjoyed reading your story - I'm going to have to go back and check them out again. The teacher in me tends to be tough to please because I'm so used to working with students and horrible writing, but you have managed to do so. Remus & Sirius tie for top billing in my book of fanfiction, so I'm always on the lookout for stories involving them.

The one thing that didn't "click" with me was the boggart - if a boggart is turning into a person's worst fear, why is Sirius' worst fear a werewolf attacking him? I get the impression from how it's written that it was Remus in his werewolf form and that just doesn't strike me as something that Sirius would fear, especially if, by the time this scene takes place, Sirius is able to transform into Padfoot and has seen Remus as a werewolf in that form. It just didn't connect - maybe there's something in your Wolfstar epic that creates the basis and I'm drawing a total blank . . .

Otherwise, looking forward to the rest!

Name: totally obsessed (Signed) · Date: 10/11/06 22:04 · For: The First
i really love all of your stories about these two, and this was no disappointment! if you don't mind me saying so, i think you should also put in a warning about language. i was a tad surprised, and it was a little more offensive to me because i didn't know what was coming. but i still loved the story! you know, everyone is talking about this WolfStar thing...i know i can find it in the forums, but where? thanks!

-totally obsessed

Author's Response:
I'm really glad to hear that you enjoyed it and I apologize for the language. If you've read a few of my stories, you know that language is something that you generally don't find in them; there was enough time between when I wrote this and when I submitted it that I completely forgot about it. I actually surprised myself re-reading it the other day. I'm really sorry.

Not sure what you're talking about with the Wolfstar thing. There used to be a thread in Madam P's on the old forums, but that doesn't exist anymore. If you're on the forums, you can drop me a PM there if you'd like to ask me anything else. Mods can be reached for any other questions you have.

Thanks for reading!

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