Reviewer: Peach
Date: 10/28/07 9:02
Chapter: The Devil's in the Details

of course, people'll continue reading - it's food ffs like yours that keep the Potterverse alive. So, do you happen to have any food? :-)

Author's Response: Thanks, that makes me happy to read! And nope, sorry, neither Harry not I have any food ;)

Reviewer: Peach
Date: 10/28/07 8:33
Chapter: The Schemes We Dream

*sniff* the system logged me out, gotta type it all again: well, I really liked how you ended each part with the same line, really good for the suspense, I doubt I ever read a story / chapter with so many cliffs to hang on to. Though, it seems that most will 'only' end up in torture or imprisonement, so it's only Ron who seems to be left facing something worse...*crosses fingers*

Author's Response: I actually really liked writing this chapter and all its cliffhangers, however terrible it was of me to do it. You'll see what happens to all of the characters before too long. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: MoRoCcAnAnDpRoUd
Date: 10/27/07 22:53
Chapter: The Words You Never Want To Hear

Ron and Bill ? NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! and ginny - amnesia ? NOOOOOOOOOO ! dude you make me cry . thats so mean of you . if theyre dead ill be sad =[ haha you rock .

Author's Response: I am pretty mean, I'll admit . . . but I've already started the next chapter, and that'll clear some things up. . . . Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: gryffindorboi
Date: 10/24/07 13:53
Chapter: The Words You Never Want To Hear


I love this story! I do however think that it is taking a really long time to get to the point. I keep getting things kind of mixed up with the switch of POV. And yes the timeline is REALLY confusing. I feel a bit like Harry, has it been months? years?

Author's Response: If it helps, things are coming to a climax right about . . . now. I keep on meaning to post the chunk of my timeline that's happened so far but I keep forgetting. When the next chapter is up (hopefully soon!) I'll try and remember to post it. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: oliverps
Date: 10/22/07 23:03
Chapter: The Man and The Baby

i know this is gonna sounds realllly annoying b coz ur woriking on too many stories already, but PLEASE UPDATE!! pleaseee!!!!

Author's Response: I really do need to stop writing so many stories all at once; I just get ideas and I need to write them and. . . . Well, I hope to get the next chapter of this one out soon!

Reviewer: purebloodprincess25
Date: 10/15/07 15:42
Chapter: The Words You Never Want To Hear

OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE KEEP UPDATING!!!! I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!

Author's Response: I know its been a while, and I'm sorry! I really will try and get it out soon.

Reviewer: ginny1015
Date: 10/13/07 18:47
Chapter: The Words You Never Want To Hear

*puppy dog pout* Plzzzzzzzzzz update soon...

Author's Response: I'll try! My life has been pretty hectic lately, but I really am trying to get it written out. . . .

Reviewer: Passion For Prongs
Date: 10/08/07 18:27
Chapter: The Words You Never Want To Hear


btw, your one of my favorite authors :)

~Passion For Prongs

Author's Response: I better update then! Thanks for the review ;)

Reviewer: WeasleyWeakness
Date: 10/05/07 22:43
Chapter: The Words You Never Want To Hear

UPDATE SOON!!!! I love this story!!!

Author's Response: Thanks, I'll try!

Reviewer: Fawksfriend
Date: 10/04/07 22:23
Chapter: The Words You Never Want To Hear

Whew things sure are lookin grim for our heroes. I'm eager to see how you play this out. Keep the stories coming.

Author's Response: Things are looking grim -- but hey, that means the only way to go is up, right? Thanks for the review, I'm glad you like the story.

Reviewer: Fawksfriend
Date: 10/03/07 16:54
Chapter: The Man and The Baby

You've set up quite a story. i'm eager to see what happens next.

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: charma10
Date: 10/02/07 5:29
Chapter: The Words You Never Want To Hear

Oh no! Poor Hermione, and its not true! But you can't kill Hermione! Oh please don't kill Hermione!!

Author's Response: . . .

Reviewer: charma10
Date: 10/02/07 5:26
Chapter: The Devil's in the Details

THERE WAS A PULSE. Oh thank Christ for that. I was so concerned. I just read a fic where I think she HAS actually killed Ron...and I didn't think I could handle another one.

Author's Response: I actually had a lot of fun building this chapter up and then having that line! ;) But I could never really kill Ron! Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: snapey_rapeyx3
Date: 10/01/07 20:44
Chapter: The Words You Never Want To Hear

oh wow. ohhhhhh wowww. and i thought the last chapter was a cliff hanger! ohhhhh jeez!! =] this was absolutely terrifying and amazing and perfect and ugh it was wonderful. great job & update soon!!

Author's Response: Haha, well thanks!

Reviewer: lily_death_flower
Date: 09/29/07 20:05
Chapter: The Words You Never Want To Hear

omg i hope hermione is okay. Is Bill really dead. I hope not this is so sad. Poor Ginny. This was a really good chapter. You are an excellent writer. Keep it up. Update soon. Dont leave at such a cliff hanger

Author's Response: That was a terrible cliffhanger, and I will try and update soon. I can't tell you if Bill's really dead, you'll just have to keep reading! As for poor Hermione and Ginny . . . well . . . thanks for the review!

Reviewer: lily_death_flower
Date: 09/29/07 19:51
Chapter: The Devil's in the Details

wow i actually thought ron was dead. i actually cried and know hes alive. im so happy. excellent chapter

Author's Response: I couldn't kill Ron! Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: lily_death_flower
Date: 09/29/07 19:07
Chapter: The End of The World as We Know It

omg i cant believe this. its so sad but its still such a good chapter.

Author's Response: It is rather sad, I agree, but I'm glad you liked it anyway! Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: angelictrin
Date: 09/29/07 15:04
Chapter: The Words You Never Want To Hear

Dun, dun, DUN!
Lol, great chapter... sorry I haven't reviewed untill now cause I just turned 13. Love this story... keep going please.

Author's Response: Well I'm glad you can finally review! And Happy Birthday!

Reviewer: Hermione Clone
Date: 09/28/07 15:58
Chapter: The Words You Never Want To Hear

I loved This part of Ginny's dream:
I love you, James, she murmured to him. Ill love you forever.

You told me the same thing you know, and now Im starting to feel a little insecure, what with you promising your love to two blokes.

Okay, yes, bill was an idiot for thinking he could bargain with them, but did he have to die? Or is he really dead? I know Ron's alright, but now something is wrong with Hermione and the Baby. Oh, I hope their alright!
Please, update soon! I can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Bill was an idiot, and as for if he is really dead, you'll see. Something is wrong with Hermione and baby, and I'm afraid you're going to have to wait a little bit to find out what. I'm glad you liked that part of the dream! :)

Reviewer: siriusly_insane
Date: 09/26/07 20:11
Chapter: The Words You Never Want To Hear

thank goodness...when i saw your story had been updated i nearly jumped for joy. great job as usual!

Author's Response: It did take a while to be validated -- I'm glad you liked it when you finally could read it!

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