Reviewer: ron lover
Date: 05/24/09 14:16
Chapter: When the cubs board the train...

Sweet story. I like all of it. It fits perfectally with the characters. i love it. are you going to update it???

Reviewer: Queen_Lily
Date: 05/15/07 19:40
Chapter: Yet another near death experience...

soooooooooooo goooooooooooooood! update soon! = D

Reviewer: Queen_Lily
Date: 05/15/07 19:26
Chapter: When the cubs board the train...

that is REALLY funny--i love the part where sirius and james explain the story back and forth = P--hilarious! = D

Reviewer: EtherealElation
Date: 10/18/06 18:28
Chapter: Yet another near death experience...

Yet another wonderful chapter - I love the quick progression, and I love the idea of Lily befriending all of James's friends, but not James himself. Great!


Author's Response: Ah, the story is but young yet. We'll see what other twists and turns I can whip out of my pocket! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Magical_Lily
Date: 10/18/06 14:42
Chapter: Yet another near death experience...

This Is So Goooooooood
Can't Wait For More :D

Author's Response: Much appreciated!

Reviewer: lillys fairy
Date: 10/18/06 13:25
Chapter: Yet another near death experience...

very good. i love that Sirius and Lily are friends.

Author's Response: Thanks, I just thought that the classic story of Lily and James needed a few twists here and there. Glad you like it!

Reviewer: lunalovy
Date: 10/17/06 19:22
Chapter: Yet another near death experience...

Really good can't wait for more!! ~Ginny~

Author's Response: Don't worry, it won't be long now!

Reviewer: crumple_horned_snorkack
Date: 10/17/06 16:05
Chapter: When the cubs board the train...

Very nice. This looks to be a start to a great story. I look forward to reading more. HAHA that was funny how Lily insisted on learning everyone's middle name. I also had to laugh when she punched James in an effort to "wake him up." Great job. :o)

Author's Response: Thanks, it's really encouraging to hear good responses like that! Keep reading!

Reviewer: EtherealElation
Date: 10/12/06 23:52
Chapter: When the cubs board the train...

After reading the reviews, I had to add another - My boyfriend's name is Andrew James... Maybe that's one of the reasons I like this one so much.
Anyhow... Keep writing soon or you'll drive me up the wall.


Author's Response: Dude, that's crazy! Congrats on a boyfriend with a nifty name! And don't worry, I'll have another one up soon!

Reviewer: EtherealElation
Date: 10/12/06 12:37
Chapter: When the cubs board the train...


That was spectacular. Wonderful. The characters were kept in really strict characterization, and the sequence of short dialogs at the end was wonderful. Definently a favorite. Keep at it!


Author's Response: Thanks so much! Glad you enjoyed!

Reviewer: the_wind
Date: 10/12/06 3:00
Chapter: When the cubs board the train...

"James Andrew Potter"? That's funny because James is MY first name, and Andrew is MY middle name. Coincidence?

Author's Response: Wow, that's weird. Compliments on your excellent name though man. James is one of my favorite names. Keep reading!

Reviewer: novella07
Date: 10/11/06 20:35
Chapter: When the cubs board the train...

i love it... i love how you made Lily, she's hilarious and James is just enough of a jerk. can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm so stoked about this. There's more to follow, so be sure to check it out!

Reviewer: PolkaDotted
Date: 10/11/06 15:59
Chapter: When the cubs board the train...

Me likey. =]]

And I love how you said 'Harry Potter nerds'. I always say that. I love how people can call themselves nerds.

Author's Response: Dude, I totally have no problem calling myself a nerd. Heck, I'm proud of it! I'm thinking I'll have another chapter done by the weekend, and I'll update my site for more info. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Magical_Lily
Date: 10/11/06 15:03
Chapter: When the cubs board the train...

This Is Really Good
I Cant Wait For MOre :)

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm really excited about this fic. I think I'll have another chapter done by this weekend, so be sure to check it out!

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