Reviews For Until Tomorrow
Reviewer: Euphrates
Date: 02/11/07 19:26
Chapter: Me and You

I feel so bad for Merope...if only Tom Sr. hadn't just run away from her after he set her free...

Wonderful fic. This letter is so utterly believable it is as if Jo herself wrote it. Again, the words just all flow together, your word choice is amazing.

It is I, Tom, who will eventually kill us.

When I read that I was just like, wow...that is such a powerful line.

I love the comparisons Merope made with today and tomorrow, how today she had everything and tomorrow she'd lose it all...and that was so sad, too, very emotional...

Great job, this is just amazing.

~Tyger, tyger, burning bright - Euphrates

Author's Response: You are officially my favorite reviewer. ^^ Thanks for all the insight and laud! And the happiness. :) It's nice to have good feedback. ~Juli

Reviewer: tickled_pink
Date: 11/03/06 20:12
Chapter: Me and You

This is beautifully written!!! It's so sad, I never really thought about it that way before. I love the way she 'talks' to Tom, and not just invisions him reading it.
Gorgeous!
~Tickled Pink~

Author's Response: Thanks for the insight.. I heart my reviewers!
~Juliet

Reviewer: JewellPotterFan
Date: 10/15/06 21:38
Chapter: Me and You

Very heartfelt and beautiful............................
I have never read anything from Merope's POV before. Very interesting. :-)

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: lady magician
Date: 10/14/06 2:33
Chapter: Me and You

woah....how depressing....loved it :-)...10/10

Author's Response: Seems to contradict each other, but thanks! :)
~Juli

Reviewer: purplepanther
Date: 10/13/06 14:24
Chapter: Me and You

Great story! It showed Merope's feelings very accurately, I think and it's really well written!

Author's Response: Thank you! I rather thought so myself - I've always loved Merope's character. Nice username, by the way...
~Juliet

Reviewer: NickiGrint
Date: 10/13/06 14:20
Chapter: Me and You

Very good! It makes me feel bad for her! 10/10

Author's Response: Thanks! Most people, I think, view Merope as a feeble girl who didn't do much for her family, but... She reminds me of someone I once knew, abused and alone until love found her. Then she blossomed. Glad you liked it!
~Juli

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