I feel so bad for Merope...if only Tom Sr. hadn't just run away from her after he set her free...
Wonderful fic. This letter is so utterly believable it is as if Jo herself wrote it. Again, the words just all flow together, your word choice is amazing.
It is I, Tom, who will eventually kill us.
When I read that I was just like, wow...that is such a powerful line.
I love the comparisons Merope made with today and tomorrow, how today she had everything and tomorrow she'd lose it all...and that was so sad, too, very emotional...
Great job, this is just amazing.
~Tyger, tyger, burning bright - Euphrates
Author's Response: You are officially my favorite reviewer. ^^ Thanks for all the insight and laud! And the happiness. :) It's nice to have good feedback. ~Juli
This is beautifully written!!! It's so sad, I never really thought about it that way before. I love the way she 'talks' to Tom, and not just invisions him reading it.
Author's Response: Thanks for the insight.. I heart my reviewers!
Very heartfelt and beautiful............................
I have never read anything from Merope's POV before. Very interesting. :-)
Author's Response: Thanks!
woah....how depressing....loved it :-)...10/10
Author's Response: Seems to contradict each other, but thanks! :)
Great story! It showed Merope's feelings very accurately, I think and it's really well written!
Author's Response: Thank you! I rather thought so myself - I've always loved Merope's character. Nice username, by the way...
Very good! It makes me feel bad for her! 10/10
Author's Response: Thanks! Most people, I think, view Merope as a feeble girl who didn't do much for her family, but... She reminds me of someone I once knew, abused and alone until love found her. Then she blossomed. Glad you liked it!