Reviews For Amortentia Tonight
Reviewer: Lasweetie
Date: 05/13/07 0:01
Chapter: Amortentia Tonight

Wow, this poem is really good. :-)

Author's Response: Thank you. =)

Reviewer: Crazy Rat
Date: 10/11/06 13:40
Chapter: Amortentia Tonight

Wow, this is amazing. I don't really know what else to say. 12/10

Author's Response: Thanks, Rat! Have you gotten Ice Princess submitted yet?? And I've never had such an awesome rating!! -beams-

Reviewer: EtherealElation
Date: 10/10/06 17:51
Chapter: Amortentia Tonight

Oh! That's beautiful. And very sad. I loved it... Very well-written, very emotional... I loved this part :

My Amortentia
Would smell of him
The one I lost
and the one I cannot have.
My Amortentia
Would remind me of
My salty tears
My metallic-tasting blood
As I bite my lip
Too hard. Again.



Excellent job - definently one of my favorites.


~Juliet


Author's Response: Thanks, that's my favorite bit too! This, like most of my poetry, was a random inspiriation in the middle of the night. I was awake, as I usually am, so I just turned on the computer and started writing. I'm doing Draco next, then Sirius, then probably Snape.

Reviewer: GreyLady
Date: 10/10/06 15:38
Chapter: Amortentia Tonight

I *loved* it! What a great idea, and it was very beautifully written. I'm definitely adding this to my faves.

Author's Response: Thank you! This will eventually be part of my Amortentia Series of poems (maybe a couple of one-shots) that describe different people's Amortentia. (Harry, Ron, Ginny, ect)

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