Reviews For A Perfect World
Reviewer: some_kinda_superstar
Date: 10/11/06 3:38
Chapter: A Fateful Meeting

I loved it. I love the way you have incorporated history with the magic world. I don't know all that much about the Holocaust, but it all seems in keeping with what happened. It's a really original idea...I've never come across a story involving the Nazis before. You seem to have researched this very thoroughly. It's great, I can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: Dragon_Warrior
Date: 10/10/06 18:40
Chapter: A Fateful Meeting

Excellent...truly excellent...this sounds wonderful, and had an impact on me...I'm very interested in World War II, so thanks for this awesome beginning and keep it up!

Reviewer: EtherealElation
Date: 10/10/06 17:59
Chapter: A Fateful Meeting

Woah...

Back up there for a minute.

Hitler? And wizards?

BRILLIANT!

Excellent introduction to your story - Minerva's excerpt at the bottom was a most extraordinary teaser. Very creative and ingenious way to manipulate one of the most terrible catastrophes in all of history...

You ABSOLUTELY must keep writing.

Bravissima!

~Juli

Reviewer: NorskHeksen
Date: 10/10/06 17:26
Chapter: A Fateful Meeting

Wow, that's intense... very sick, but of course that how it's supposed to be. Just out of curiousity, do you study history or are you just interested in it? I can't guarantee I'll be able to read the rest of it, but it's a very interesting project and I applaud you :)

Reviewer: purplepanther
Date: 10/10/06 14:16
Chapter: A Fateful Meeting

Interesting chapter. I hope you post the next one soon. They are both so messed up in their minds. They are two evil racist slime balls and I hope Dumbledore defeats grindlewald before he completes the spell. Good writing!

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